STORY (non-investigative): Flashback - 2 - Page 4

haan so in a later post I asked her what she didn't like. This is for my own improvement. It all ends with sorry I don't want to hurt your feelings blah blah. its not a hurting thing. I was genuinely seeking feedback. After seeing the direction in which this convo has gone, I wonder why did I bother!

Originally posted by: visrom

haan so in a later post I asked her what she didn't like. This is for my own improvement. It all ends with sorry I don't want to hurt your feelings blah blah. its not a hurting thing. I was genuinely seeking feedback. After seeing the direction in which this convo has gone, I wonder why did I bother!

I understand yaar 😆 she forgot the actual question, even i also asked the reason. But she said sorry only.

Roaming around this forum, I almost skipped this story but I thought to give it a try as it's non-investigative story and I love some NI stories. I read the whole story without skipping a line or word. Your story compelled me to leave whatever it was/is behind us and review your story. You ask for honest opinion and here's my honest opinion on this story. This is one of the BEST stories I have read on this forum since I've been here. Visrom, you absolutely rocked this story, the emotions, themes, setting... everything is perfectly executed to T.👏👏 Well done and I will highly encourage you to write more Non Investigative stories because you are really good at this.⭐️
Happy New Year.😊

Chalo ji...even if GD has asked me to stick to investigative ones...I guess this story was worth writing after all. 😆

I'm a new member on I-F and haven't read any stories yet. But I read this because my friend referred it to me. 😆

A very good non-investigative story...i can see this story in the show as well

Originally posted by: visrom

haan so in a later post I asked her what she didn't like. This is for my own improvement. It all ends with sorry I don't want to hurt your feelings blah blah. its not a hurting thing. I was genuinely seeking feedback. After seeing the direction in which this convo has gone, I wonder why did I bother!

Originally posted by: visrom

Chalo ji...even if GD has asked me to stick to investigative ones...I guess this story was worth writing after all. 😆

Originally posted by: gadhadada

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<font color="#6600ff" size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Thats True, that I wanted to give U some Brief but after seeing that My Posts creating troubles, I step Back... the Best thing to say SORRY and ask Forgiveness with People...</font>

<font color="#6600ff" size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">if U want that I'll give U what I missed in this Story as I dont say, I Dislike it but what Missin in that, I'll definately PM U Boss...😊</font>

I will wait for your pm. but even before that I can imagine whatt you'll write.


The thing is...I prefer certain things said in silence. I try to create that scene and leave it to the readers imagination. Apoorva rightly understood my intention. That the storm passed in silence. its a lot to do with how I am. There are some things I don't like to be 'in the face'. But that's just my taste. everyone need not and will not like it.

Originally posted by: visrom

I will wait for your pm. but even before that I can imagine whatt you'll write.


The thing is...I prefer certain things said in silence. I try to create that scene and leave it to the readers imagination. Apoorva rightly understood my intention. That the storm passed in silence. its a lot to do with how I am. There are some things I don't like to be 'in the face'. But that's just my taste. everyone need not and will not like it.