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|| UNPREDICTABLE LOVE||

Lets start with a brief characterisation of the characters, there will be more in the upcoming chapters

So. the main lead is ofcourse, JALAL, he is an actor in this story, and so his mates, that is ruqaiyah, salima, maan and mirza.
Santram is a movie director, and elder brother of jodha.
Coming to the female lead, Jodha!!! she is in Paris from the last few years and is coming to Mumbai at his brother's place to complete her internship
their parents died when she was young, from that day, santram is her family.
Piya is the assistant of santram.
(summary of 14 chapters is given below)


**INDEX**


summary of the 14 chapters!

so here i am giving summary of the 14 chapters which are in this thread,

as this will be more convenient to the new readers.

So, the story begins with a movie director named, santram, who was over excited when he came to know that his little sister jodha, is going to come!! his happiness knew no bound and why not, his little princess was coming after 4 years, it was kinda emotional and very auspicious day for him, his assistant piya sharma, came to him and got to know that jodha is coming back, she suggested to throw a surprise party for jodha's arrival to which santram happily agreed, meanwhile between their conversation, the producer and the main leads of santram's upcoming movie arrived his mansion, jalal being the main lead of the movie, too was there, and between the talking session, santram invited jalal and the group to be a part in the surprise party, as they all are favourites of his little princess- jodha, after listening so much about jodha from others, a kind of curiosity settled inside jalal, and the last sentence of piya - "beware of jodha, as the bundle of naughtiness, is going to come" made him more curious to meet the little princess of santram.

As the time for jodha's arrival came, all were getting excited and specially the brother, as he was going to meet his little princess after 4 years, jodha was in paris so as to complete her fashion designing course, and was coming to india for 1 year for her internship, after waiting for a hour or so, jalal got irritated as he haven't waited for anyone in his life, while on the other side, jodha and her bestest pal, moti arrived india, being unknown of the fact that their are lots of people waiting for her. She was told that santram was not at home and was busy in his shooting, and she would have to spend the day alone, so she took a quite long time for buying some snacks and sweets for her dinner.

As soon as she entered her home, there was darkness all around, and having achluophobia , she feared and bumped into jalal, who came there as he forgot his phone there only, Jalal saved her from falling, jodha was trying to figure out the person, jalal looked at her face, as some dim light was falling on her face, and for him the world stopped, he was just looking at her without blinking his eyes, her face was beyond beautiful, her eyes, big in shock but still looking so cute, reflecting everything as a mirror, crystal clear, her lips,slightly opened in shock, pink, attractive, succulent, but soon her lips formed pouty, she was saying something, her eyes became wider, she was blinking her eyes, and her nose turned red, she was saying something, but jalal was busy in her heavenly kissable lips. But suddenly his thoughts broke when she pushed him, he shook his head so as to confirm that it was not a dream, he looked at her, she was wearing, a pink colour dress, noo!! it was a night suit with a cartoon printed on the top, further going down, her slippers were too pink, over all she was a pink fairy, jodha was still not able to see his face, she looked at him and then at his hand, which was holding some silver thing, it was shining, she was saying something pointing towards his hand, but jalal was busy gaping her, her long, wavy hairs were disturbing her to talk, after every second she was putting her hairs back, but his thoughts broke when jodha again pushed him.

"are you a deaf thief??" asked jodha making jalal shock, which cleared that she was thinking jalal as a thief, so this was their first meet, and there only jalal got a new name from jodha,i.e "dirty dog", from that point there cute fights continued, a new entry of jodha's cousin ranvijay singh which was in a relation with moti created a new fun in the story, jodha being a innocent girl was making jalal fall in love with her without letting him know and the same thing was happening with jodha too, during the shooting trip, they started to feel something different for each other, a feeling which was unknown and new for them, sunaina, jodha's friend came to india and had a crush on jalal, and seeing them together jodha was getting jealous.

they both started to share something with each other which they haven't shared with anyone else, jalal shared the biggest truth of his life with jodha, which is, he was one of the biggest business man of India but left that profession as he thought it as a reason for his father's heart attack was the loss in his business, and at that point jalal got to know that jodha's parents died when she was of 5.

When they both reached khan mansion, they saw that every newspaper and news channels were having their photo, and was stating jodha as jalal's girlfriend, but it was solved after some time, during this period, jalal noticed jodha having some pills, he was confused about them, when he asked this from jodha, she refused to answer it and gave excuses, meanwhile jalal's friend veer entered in this story, hence doubling the fun, and in between all this, jalal got to know about the pills (plz refer chapter 14, if you are interested i n knowing what had actually happened)

soo!! itz all this which happened in the 14 chapters, in the 15th chapter you will meet a drunken jodha😆


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The characters sounds interesting..😊
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Good ...
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Vow superb Start... detail character introduction... Loved it...I can't wait for 1st chapter... JALAL MOVIE ACTOR👏
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~INTRODUCTION~
Santram was over excited when he came to know that his little sister jodha, is going to come!! his happiness knew no bound and why not, his little princess was coming after 4 years, it was kinda emotional and very auspicious day for him, meanwhile pia, came there and asked the reason of his happiness, santram told him that jodha is going to come tomorrow that too for the whole 1 year so as to complete her internship, piya was too happy seeing happiness on santram's face, she suggested the idea of throwing a party so as to celebrate the coming of jodha, santram too agreed as he knows how much his little princess, likes party, that too surprise party.
Disturbing their conversation, a servant came and told him that producer dhanraaj has come, with jalal and the other actors, initially, santram was confused about their sudden arrival but when he came to know that they have arrived as they wants him to direct his movie casting jalal, and his group,i.e, ruqaiyah, salima, mirza and maan.
Santram agreed to direct his movie as it was his pleasure to do movie with such a great producer and hard-working actors but most importantly because his little princess likes them a lot, jodha really praises them in front of santram whenever santram discusses his movie assignments with jodha, and now if he was having a chance, how can he say no!
Santram told them about jodha, to which jalal questioned that he didn't knew that he is also having a little sister, as she never came in front of media, santram smiled and told him that her passion is travelling, so she is just enjoying her life to the fullest, he told him that she is now in paris completing her fashion designing course and is coming to Mumbai so as to complete her internship, jalal gave a 'oh-i-got-it' smile to santram.
Santram told jalal that they have planned a surprise party for jodha, day after tomorrow, and requested him to come as jodha will like it a lot, seeing santram's love, jalal agreed, so as others, after the discussion, piya told them that "beware of jodha, as the bundle of naughtiness, is going to come", to which all laughed, and created a curiosity inside everyone, specially jalal, as he wants to meet the girl, whom for the great directer himself is soft hearted and loving, he don't know why but he wanted to meet jodha as soon as possible
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~CHAPTER 1~
all were really excited, specially the brother, and why not his sister was coming that too after a long time, and he wants everything best, be it from the decoration or to the foods, everything means everything, all were gathered at santram's place waiting for jodha, she told them that she will reach their after 15 minutes, but she was no where to be see, everyone, was just waiting for her.

Jalal being the impatient one spoke up - "sir! itz quiet late, and i have many more works to do i hope you will understand, and by the way, she told that she will come in 15 minutes but sir!! itz already an hour."

Santram being an extra protective brother tried to save her little sister from accusation said - "jalal, do wait, i called her and she told me that she reached airport and vaise bhi, i think she is confused, as she is unaware of the fact that we are at home, actually i have told her that i am out for shoot, so maybe she is busy buying snacks or something."

jalal nodded his head with a forced smile adorning his lips, ruqaiyah giggled seeing his condition, she knows that jalal respects santram a lot, and because of him only he is bearing this.
Jalal was really irritated by this 'unknown' girl, who is just making him wait that too for no reason, and ruqaiyaah's giggling was just making him more restless and frustrated.
Ruqaiyah came to him and asked him the reason for his irritation, jalal looked at her, and sighed, he was so very tired waiting for her.
"now what else i can do ruqs! this girl, is just so indisciplined, i mean if she is saying that she will come in 15 minutes then she should do it, and more over , when santram sir calls her, she would say 'bhaiya, i am coming naa, why are you worrying, you are not at home'" mimicked jalal in frustration.
Ruqaiyaah laughed at his statement, "but don't you think that she is too innocent, i mean her voice was just reflecting this only. don't you think so?" asked ruqs to which jalal shook his head in denial, and their talking session continued.

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meanwhile at airport, jodha and moti was all ready for their departure, but to their forlorn luck, no taxi was ready to take them, their car which was send by santram hadn't reached yet and the continuous calls of santram forced jodha to hire a taxi.
Moti was really very concious about the stares on them, she punched lightly at jodha's back.
"don't you think that everyone is looking at us like we are aliens?" asked moti in anger

"not itz not my fault that god, made me so beautiful" said jodha caressing her hairs,

"ohh plz!! jodha, itz not because of your looks, it is because of the clothes you are wearing, i mean what the hell, why you wore night dress?" asked moti in irritation.

"uff oh!! moti, it was all because of you, don't you remember that when you woke me up, it was already 12 and our flight was at 12:15, so only this can happen? it was your mistake, that you didn't woke me up at time " said jodha trying to catch a taxi.

"oh plz jodha!! i tried so hard to wake you up, but you sleepy head" said moti and was finally successful in catching a taxi, both of them, settled inside the taxi and told the driver to take them at their place, driver was a little old, he looked at them, and told them to be careful as their are many thief's and criminals in Mumbai, jodha and moti looked at each other and then at the old man, they both smiled and nodded their head in acceptance.

While at the other side, santram noticed that jodha and moti were heading towards the stairs, he told all of them to move inside and switched off the lights, hence darkness covered all in the room, all were just waiting for jodha's arrival but jalal forgot to bring his mobile, so he said that he will be back in 2 minutes, he picked up his phone and was about to go when he collided with jodha, who just entered and got bumped with jalal.
Jalal saved her from falling, jodha was trying to figure out the person, jalal looked at her face, as some dim light was falling on her face, and for him the world stopped, he was just looking at her without blinking his eyes, her face was beyond beautiful, her eyes, big in shock but still looking so cute, reflecting everything as a mirror, crystal clear, her lips,slightly opened in shock, pink, attractive, succulent, but soon her lips formed pouty, she was saying something, her eyes became wider, she was blinking her eyes, and her nose turned red, she was saying something, but jalal was busy in her heavenly kissable lips. But suddenly his thoughts broke when she pushed him, he shook his head so as to confirm that it was not a dream, he looked at her, she was wearing, a pink colour dress, noo!! it was a night suit with a cartoon printed on the top, further going down, her slippers were too pink, over all she was a pink fairy, jodha was still not able to see his face, she looked at him and then at his hand, which was holding some silver thing, it was shining, she was saying something pointing towards his hand, but jalal was busy gaping her, her long, wavy hairs were disturbing her to talk, after every second she was putting her hairs back, but his thoughts broke when jodha again pushed him.
"are you a deaf thief??" asked jodha making jalal shock,
"excuse me" jalal tried to explain it to her, but she was not ready to listen.
"you thief!!! i will make sure that you spend your rest of your life in jail, how dare you!! dirty dog!! trying to steal my brother's phone" said jodha and snatched the phone from his hand, now something was clear to jalal, oh so she is thinking him as his brother's mobile thief!! but wait!! a thief?
"listen" jalal again tried but again failed in explaining, at last jalal held her by her arms and make her to look at him.
"listen you girl, i m jalal khan" said jalal to which jodha mocked
"oh!! hello!! i am madhuri dixit" said jodha thinking that he is lying, meanwhile all came listening their fights, as soon as the lights switched on, jodha pointed a finger towards jalal, but when she looked at him, she was left shocked, jalal was standing their looking at her, but he was mesmerized, jodha couldn't believe what she did, and at last she fainted.



Edited by aisha.....11110 - 10 years ago

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