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Posted: 11 years ago
Read all the parts in one go.
They are awesome. 👍🏼
Please continue soon and if you could please PM me. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Pookhi

Read all the parts in one go.
They are awesome. 👍🏼
Please continue soon and if you could please PM me. 😊



thanks a lot
for yr attention
nd ofcourse i will pm u 😊
again
THAAANK YOU
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Posted: 11 years ago
CHAPTER-6

JALAL AND JODHA in the parking area
jalal(sitting in his car)-come jodha what r u waiting for
jodha-no i will not sit
jalal-what the hell
it is already 4:30 pm
we also have to come back ...ohk tell me whatz wrong happened now
jodha-i was thinking that y we r going in yr car
...we will go in my car
chalo letz go
jalal-whats the difference in this
we have to go together nd are destination is also same
jodha-right... what is the difference ...come we will go in my car
(after saying this she rushed to her car nd stood near it ... having no other choice left jalal also followed her nd sat in her car...)
jalal-now what happened?come nd sit
jodha-dont u have any manners ?come out nd open the door for me nd when i will get sitted inside ...close the door as well
jalal-why so formal?
jodha-itz not a formality but known as manners
come out nhi to i will not sit
(jalal came out and done all the formalities)
jodha and jalal seated at the backside of car
jalal-driver...letz go to the near by mall nd plz be fast
driver-yes sir
jodha-jalal ek baat puchu
jalal-nhi boluga tabhi bhi toh pucho gi naa
jodha -point hai...mere sath rehker intelligent ho gya hai acha h ...gud
jallal-haan haan thiik hai jaldi pucho
jodha-tumahri family mei kon kon hai,.
jalal-kyu kya krogi
jodha-aachar daalungi...
btaaao na
jalal-ammi dad or meri sis
jodha-to tum apni family k saath he rehte hoge
jalal-nhi kabhi kabaar chalal jaata hu
twice a month
jodha-kyu or why u call yr father dad...abbu bolo
jalal-aise he dad is cool u knw or merko udhar jaana acha nhi lagta
jodha-tum pagal ho tum kitne lucky ho ki tumhare parents hai ek family hai
jallal-u know my father is a heart patient ...he is abuisness man vo chahte hai mai apna buisness vapis sambhaalu but no i will not
jodha-toh usme kya hai or tumhara buisness ? i thought u r an actor
jalal-i was a buisness man 2 yrs ago but then i got the news that dad had a heart attack...nd that attack was because of the loss in our buisness then i left that phase of my life nd after some time i got an offer for a film nd i m now here
jodha -ohkk...toh fir tum apne ghar kyu nhi jaate
jalal-iske 2 reasons hai
first is that i cant face my dad bcoz of me he got his two heart attacks...it was bcoz of me that our company got a big loss it was like a tornado for all of us...our company who used to stood first in fashion world had not even stood in top twenty after that ...but after that me nd my sister became successful again in gaining our reputaion nd now dad and my sister is the head of company i also take descions but only that time when my sis had no idea had left in her mind
now secondly bcoz my father always had that capability to increase my anger nd turning me from a human to a monster nd i m too scared of my anger towards dad but what i can do of his wishes
jodha-arre uncle ji aisi kya maang kr lete hai jo tu itna bhadak jaata hai ki apne he baap ko asli wala heart attack de deta hai
jalal-ek he chiiz hai which i cant resist he wants me to get married because he wants to see his grand children
jodha-oh god so whats the big deal
jalal-itz a big deal jodha its a big deal
i dont wanted to marry someone who i dont even no
or mera chodo apni family k baare mei btaao
jodha-tum toh mil rakhe ho meri family se
jalal- 😕
jodha-bhaiya is my family
jalal-arre i mean your parents
jodha-when i was of 2...they passed away in an accident i dont even remember their faces nor i have any pics of them after their death we moved to ronny bhai's house
chacha chachi took care of us 😭
jallal-sry i didnt knew that
jodha-arre itz all right
(moved towards the driver)
or bhaiya aap... tab se hum pohuche he nhi
driver-mam tab se h traffic mei fasse h its over 15 mins
jodha-toh maine traffic khada kiya h kya jo mjhe sunna rahe ho
(meanwhile jalal saw a child begging )
jalal-driver give him this(he took 1000 rs from his pocket)
jodha-no u will not give him driver bhaiya
jalal-jodha what r u doing see him
jodha-i said driver will not give him but u can
jalal-no i cant he will tell everyone
jodha-log toh kuch kahenge logo ka kaam h kehna
or vaise bhi ye sab jo tumhaare fan hai vo tumse bohut pyar krte hai they can do anything for yr one glimpse
hamesha tum in sab k love se bhaagte rhe ho media se apni family se fan se ...kab tak u will run
they all are not harming u ek baar kisi or k liye jiyo
u will also feel happy
i know that u think bcoz of u yr father in this state but no it was not yr mistake
i think god has something gud something very precious for u
open yr eyes nd feel that happiness
agr tum iss bache ko paise doge toh he can fulfil his tummy but if u on yr own will give this to him u will not only fill his stomach but also u will make his day nd after that will also feel pease
jalal-i didnt knew that u have too much brain ms.jodha or i should say JODHA BABA
jodha-ohh plz u know i m beauty with brain
jalal-khud he apni taarif
not bad khud ko dilaasa deti raho
(jodha gave him angry glares nd jalal gave that money to the child with his autograph he truly find peace)
after some time they reach near the mall
jodha -ohk lets go
jalal-yes but listen beware of media u dont know them they have the capability to turn a ant to a mountain
jodha-ohk
(they came out of the car nd was going towards the mall when 4 girls came running towards them)
girl1-hello sir we cant believe it sir that u r in front of u
jalal just smiled at this statement nd thanked for all their love
girl 2-sir is this lady is yr new girl
jodha-arre no i m jodha sing nd we r just freinds
girl3-r u the same jodha singh who won the paris fashion show
jodha-y..yes
(jalal luked at her in surprise as he didnt knew that she was too talented)
girl4-so that means jalal khan is dating the fasion diva
jalal-no we r only frnds
girl1-but sir shakespeare had said that a girl nd a boy can never be frnds nd sir it is said that frndship is the first step of love
jodha-what rubbish is all this u know i m santram singh's sister
girl-oh so thats clear now we were informed by our sources that jalal khan was spotted at santram's place day before yesterday
so u spent some romantic moments together
jalal-wait what u said that u were informed by yr sources that means ...
girl2-yes sir we all are journalists
we have to do this sir because u never give any interviews
jalal-what the hell
lets go jodha
(they ran to the mall jalal held jodha's hand nd they came to the top floor where all were ethinic wears)
jalal-i told u naa they r impossible
jodha-yes u were right but tum bhi situation ka advantage lena nhi chodte ho 😉
jalal-i m not taking any advantage...u were slow that's why i held yr hand
jodha-toh ab toh chodo
he left her hand
(now they were roaming all around )
jodha-lets go there i found something there
jalal-but i think we should go there
that section is of ethinic wear
jodha-koi ni chalo
(they go there)
salesman-may i help u madam
jodha-what will u do by helping me
jalal-its his job
jodha-there are many others too go beta nd help them
jalal- 😊
jalal-hows that the green one
jodha-no no its too glittery
jalal-ohk so that one
jodha-its so sober
jalal- so what kind of dress u want
jodha-ummm.. i want something decent
jalal -so see this
(he was holding a beautiful anarkali suit with blue borders nd was sleeveles it was ankle lenghth and had a broad border in the bottom ...the upper part specially the neck area was very beautiful)
jodha-itz beautiful
i will buy this only
ohk now lets buy some casuals
(they buy a lot of clothing ...jodha
also buy many shirts ,t shirts nd many more things for jalal too
they both had done many shopping together
the guards were carrying minimum 20 bags
one would say that they had buy the whole mall)
jalal-letz go jodha itz already 9:30 pm
jodha-but i m hungry
lets eat something
jalal -m too hungry
jodha-ohk but indian
(they sat in an indian restaurant nd jodha odered many thing but without oil or any kind of weight gainer as jalal was health consious)
jalal-u eat too much but where all the food goes
jodha-shut up nd eat
jalal-i think on yr (he started luking at her curves)
jodha-u idiot what r u trying too say?
u jerk ..moron...what the hell?
jalal-(still teasing her) come on jodha itz a compliment
jodha-take back yr compliment
i know u r jealous of me
jalal-why i would be jealous of u
if i would a girl than i would be but alas...i m a handsome hunk
jodha-dirty dog
ye le handsome hunk
(she put a whole ladoo in his mouth)
now i will see where all the food goes,
jalal-(still eating)darling u dont have that eye to see where all my food goes
jodha-u know u r such a...
(jodha was inturupted by the screams of girls calling jalal's name)
girls-jalal we luv u
jalal-gave them a flying kiss
(from this action of his two girls were fainted)
6 girls came running nd jump over him
jalal-girls plz move
i cnt breathe
girls started kissing him all over his face
jodha-girls u know if u will leave him he will do anything for u
girls-really(they stood in a line)
jalal-jodha plz lets go
ohk i m sry
girls-u can spent time with her later ... we want u to take off yr shirt
jodha-great u can even kiss him
(one of the girl came nd side hugged jodha nd clicked a photo with her)
girl-i will upload this pic nd my status will be that jalal's girl is my bff
jodha-hawww i m not his girl
go nd kiss him goo
jalal -what u want i will do but plz tell them to stop
jodha-ohk i want to go to yr place to meet yr family
jalal-but why no no no
jodha-girls rape him
jalal -ohhhkkk
jodha-girls dont disturb him nd security come
girls there is mirza nd maan in the pizza corner
(girls were now out nd jalal nd jodha was in the car cleaning his face with tissue (lipstic marks))
jalal-driver khan mansion le chalo
or tum i will see u
jodhA-u can see me now too

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precap-all news channels newspaper will be covered with jalal nd jodha's photos
jodha met jalal's family nd was really very happy by their warm welcome.

trip

sunaina will became the heroine of jalal
jodha will distract her from her shoots
nd jealousy will be in air


uhhh long chapter
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comment too
pljjj
Edited by aisha.....11110 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
really nice
jodha aur jalal 😆 ❤️
jalal came 2 know 2 of her hunars yet 😆
jodha is HIS GIRL ... WOWWW 😳

BECHARA JAlal 🤣😆
update soon
yay first to comment 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved d jodha baba..
brining change in jallu's life..
very nice update..
precaps intrestn..
continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SARA4444

really nice

jodha aur jalal😆❤️
jalal came 2 know 2 of her hunars yet😆
jodha is HIS GIRL ... WOWWW😳

BECHARA JAlal🤣😆
update soon
yay first to comment😉


a big thanks to u for yr beautiful comment
keep showering yr love like this only
as it encourages me
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanju...

loved d jodha baba..

brining change in jallu's life..

very nice update..

precaps intrestn..

continue soon!


thaanks a lot 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: devi1966


lovely update dear😃


😉 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: devi1966


lovely update dear😃


😃 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice one.. Love it.. Thanks for pm.

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