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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
plz plz plz plz plz update😭😭😭😭m waiting...bache ki jaan loge kya tum😭😭😭ni na to phir krde jldi update😉pm b kr dena
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ch-4
jalal was utterly shocked at the sight in front of his eyes
his mind was surrounded with several types of questions
JALAL PROV.
what to do ? how she will react ? will this would effect our newly bond freindship? will she break our freindship?
no i cant let this happen
yes,i HAD slept with many girls
yes,i WAS a play boy
yes,i never care for no one feelings
but jodha was different
she was not a random girl
she was special , dont know why but she was close to my heart
like that it was written in our destiny
end of prov.

his chain of thoughts were broken by piya's voice
piya-jodha utho utho utho

jodha(eyes closed , irritated)-dont disturb

piya-whatever; mai jaa rhi hu

piya had gone...jalal pulled back his arms from her back and waist nd was trying to remove her head from his chest nd her leg from his waist
suddenly he heard strange voices

jodha-uhhh hmmm ummm 😡 😡

jalal(he smiled luking at the cute frown on her face nd that irritated voices because of his continuous trying to apart her from him which was disturbing her sleep)

he tried again nd came to a descision that he have to wake her up before it became worse for her to understand

jalal-jodha,,,utho i have to go

jodha-(irritated,still eyes closed)toh jaao naa
dont disturb mee

jalal-plzzz jodha open your eyes

jodha-nhi nhi nhi
agr maine ek baar bhi apni aakhein kholi to my sleep would get disturbed nd i will not be able to sleep again
plz jalal go from here

jalal-ohk i will go but plz remove yr arm nd yr leg from me

jodha removed her leg nd arm but suddenly her mind stucked something

jodha(she opened her eyes)-what...what r u doing here in my room ...in my bed
or kahin tumne kuch...

jalal-no jodha not at all
tum kl so gai thi nd in yr sleep u hold my hand
NOTHING ELSE

jodha-phle tum mere bed me se utho
ajjeb ho lete lete baat kr rhe ho or tumhe kya zaroorat thi yahin ruk jaane ki
itni bhi pagal nhi ho jo itna bhi nhi samjh skti ki tumhare dimaag me kya chal raha ho ga

jalal-see jodha,...i agree that its my mistake
so i m sry but its also true that u were also involved

jodha-ohhh plzZ,... maine kaha tha that come to my bed and share it
are u mad ... i have read all articles about you your realations nd yr HOBBIES

jalal-jodha y r u mixing it with them
yes i was a play boy
but u also know that i cant do it with u
nd u know this also that u too were wrong but u will never accept yr defeat
mere pass itni toh himmat hai ki without any mistake i can say sry in yr behalf tooo

jodha-oh really
why i will say sry when i had not committed any mistake
u r in my room
on my bed
u were the one who tried to kiss me
i didnt said anything that time
i ignored that time because of our freindship
but now u have crossed all yr limits

jalal-yes i am in yr room because u dragged me here last night to see yr so called romantic picture
yes i m on yr bed because u were not leaving my hand
but i was not only involved in that incomplete kiss tooo u also wanted that kiss

jodha-no no no
just get out off my room
just get out 😭

jalal-(realising what he said nd it hurted her) sry jodha i didnt mean to hurt u
m sry

jodha-plz go i beg u
plz go 😔 😭

he left her room
JALAL PROV.
oh shit why i said that too her
she is very innocent
i cant break her
i have to do something
i will make her happy
i will ask moti
what to do
who can make her happy
END OF PROV.

moti was passing through kitchen when jalal stopped her

jalal-arre moti kaisi ho
tum kitni achi ho

moti - 😕 mai to thiik hu
tum kyu itni buttering kr rhe ho 😉

jalal-nhi to mjhe to tum se puchna tha ki jab tumhari best frnd tum se bohut naaraz ho jati h to tum i mean usse mnati kaisi ho

lmoti-acha to jodha k baare mei baat ho ri h
kyu kya kiya tumne

jallal-maine toh kuch ni kiya buss aise he puch raha tha
btana h to btao wrna rehne do

moti-thiik h nhi bta ri 😉

jalal-yrr kyu yrr 😳

moti - 😆 thiik h bta ri hu lekin itna cute face mt bnaya kro
agr vo gussa h to koi achi cheez usk liye bna do
or agr bohut gussa hai to ek ladki he uska gussa shant kr skti h
mager usse bulana khatre se kam nhi hai naak mei dum kr degi
bohut bdi flirt hai lekin dil ki achi hai
or haan usse hindi nhi aati
soch lo

jalal-koi ni chalega
naam btao or ye bhi btao kahan h

moti -sunaina
abhi toh vo london mei hogi
i will send her no.

jallal-thank u yrr(he hugged her)

ronny -oye chod usse she is my girl
chod usse

jalal(break the hug nd softly push moti into ronny's embrace)-yelle rakh le
tere hakh tu he rakh
rakh salle rakh 😉 😃

ronny -isse kya hua

moti-shayad luv shuv

ronny -kya

moti kuch ni

scene shifts to jodhas room
jodha was in her own drean land

JODHA'S PROV.
he is right
i was also involved
except this he said sry
ohh god i m so bad
he would be feeling so bekaar
but what i can do
how i will say sry to him
itz so difficult to say sry
vo kitni asani se bolta hai
i will ask ruqs
yes itz great
END OF PROV.

jodha was roaming in the house
to find ruqs finally she found her in the garden

jodha-ta ra ra ra
arre ruqs kaisi ho
bdi achi lag ri ho aaj

ruqs-arre jodha
i m gud but tum abhi tak fresh kyu nhi hui

jodha-arre kuch ni hua
bus aise he teri yaad aayi mai chali aayi
vaise tum or jalal cousins ho best freind bhi ho
toh tumhe usk baare mei toh sab kuch pta hoga

ruqs-jalal ki yaad aayi tabhi mere paas chali aayi naa
ab kya hua what happen bdi tense vagera lag rhi ho

jodha-nhi toh bas aseyi mrko bas itna puch naa tha ki jab u know jalal tum se
angry ho jata h to tum kya krti ho

ruqs-itz simple uske liye biryani bna deti hu
per it should be healthy
rice se leke oil tak sab hygienic hona chahiye

jodha-ohk bye(she ran away)

ruqs-crazy girl 😊
IN KITCHEN

jodha-ohk enternet mei jaisa tha vaisa kr diya but why it is luking so dull
i think microvave mei daal k shi ho jaayega
(she put it in the microvave for 1 hr nd left the kitchen)

she met jalal in the corridor
jodha -jalal i m um sr...sry
it was my mistake can we forget it

jalal(surprised) -what ,!
i was too responsible i have something for u

jodha-sachi ! is it a gift
vaise i also have something for u but not now lunch time
ohk?

jalal -fir mera gift bhi lunch mei he
vaise bhi itz 11 am i have to fresh also
nd u too

jodha-thiik hai
chalo then meet u later vaise bhi humne break fast nhi kiya

jalal-krte bhi kaise u sleep so long nd so tightly too

jodha- 😳

jalal-ahan blush 😉

jodha-go to hell dirty dog
pta ni kya ulata seedha sochta rehta h
bhaag idhar se

jalal- 😉 😛

jodha-oh god he is mad
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very soon
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Edited by aisha.....11110 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: alapi

plz plz plz plz plz update😭m waiting...bache ki jaan loge kya tum😭😭😭ni na to phir krde jldi update😉pm b kr dena


done
krdiya update 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Superb update
Plz plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: SUMESHNI

Superb update

Plz plz continue soon


thnx a lot 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Asapom

awesome update

plz contnue soon


tysm
will update soon
aisha.....11110 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87

thank you 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
hey that was brilliant...please update soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
Good update. 👏
Update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: RTPSFanatic

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Good update.👏</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Update soon.</font>


tysm 😉

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