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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey i luved ur writing😊...the story is so unique.😃...plz update de nxt chap soon...nd plz pm me...
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Originally posted by: fatma201

Super update, thanks


thank you fatma
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Originally posted by: alapi

hey i luved ur writing😊...the story is so unique.😃...plz update de nxt chap soon...nd plz pm me...


thnx a lot
i will update it
nd PM it tooo 😊
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PART 2
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every one was tensed seeing jodha unconscious, everyone looked at jalal, for answer, but he was left shock, that how can someone call him a thief and more over a dog, no not that, 'a dirty dog'.
santram patted jodha's cheek so as to wake her up, but jalal interrupted in between.
"sir!! don't wake her up! she is mentally challenged" said jalal to which santram didn't reacted, and took her to her bedroom.
Jalal was standing by the door, looking at the room, 'so girlish' thought jalal, the room was all pink, like her dress, seems like 'this girl' really likes pink a lot. (CLICK)
he was busy examining the room when salima came and stood beside him,
"what have you done, see, she is shocked and haven't gain consciousness yet" said salima in a low voice.
"what do you mean, i shocked her, she had a plan to kill me, she was giving shock to me after every second, you know she called me a thief, and..."
" a dirty dog," said salima laughingly completing jalal's incomplete sentence which he was not able to continue, how can he say himself a dirty dog?
"but don't you think she was cute, i mean i really liked her, she was looking innocent" said ruqaiyah, who just came seeing them talking.
"yeah, she was" said jalal lost in her beauty, but soon realised what he said, he just looked at them, and tried to change the topic, but his pals were more interested to know what actually happened which made him so 'mesmerized' by her beauty.
Jalal's condition was not so good because of the continuous teasing of his friends, his one sentence and they started, but to his luck, moti came and told them about doctor's arrival.
All walked inside the room as soon as doctor checked her condition, santram asked the doctor about jodha's condition.
"nothing to worry Mr. singh, your sister is fine, she fainted because of shock, don't worry" said doctor assuring him and left.
After some time, jodha opened her eyes, and there she faced million of questions by her brother regarding her health.
"princess, what happened to you and why were you screaming at jalal?" asked santram to which jodha looked at him,
"bhaiya, you know, i didn't said anything, it was him who was playing 'chor-police', ab how can i know that he was the real jalal khan, you know he is really very arrogant, haan, i agree that he is a good actor but don't you think, that he thinks too much about himself" said jodha.
"but princess, i thought, you liked him" said santram caressing her hairs.
"no bhaiya, i don't like him, but yes!! i am a big fan of his acting but not him, nothing else" said jodha
Jalal was kind of shock listening the words by jodha about him, first time someone said something like this about him, meanwhile ruqs, maan, mirza and salima came and sat beside jodha, but jodha screamed aloud seeing them, she was so much surprised to see such big stars in her home, that in amazement, she screamed, scaring the hell every one, she told them that she was really a big fan of them and told mirza and maan, that they some times looks same, to which they both was confused but jodha giggled to her own statement, she had a good time with them but after some time her eyes shifted to the door, there was jalal standing with support of the wall, from the past half and hour he was looking at the whole drama, jodha's eyes grew wide in shock, she got up and hid behind santram, initially jalal was shocked about this act of her but his confusion didn't last long when jodha spoke still hiding behind santram.
"dekhiye, i didn't knew that you were the real wala jalal khan, i thought you were a thief or robber, that's why i screamed at you, but excuse me, it was not only mine mistake, i think, it was all your mistake that you came to my home that too when not a single light was switched on, now! tell me what else would a common girl think, so its a request that take care it in future that you won't do such mistake" said jodha making jalal shock, he was about to say something when santram interrupted
"very good! princess, you accepted you mistake, i m really proud of you" this statement gave a shock to jalal, saying this would be a understatement, yes of course he was, as she hadn't accepted her mistake, moreover, she accused him for all the mistake jabki he was innocent, jalal nodded and was about to go when jodha stopped him,
"arre!!! i said sorry now it is your turn" said jodha to which jalal was more shock now, as when on earth she said sorry. Jalal looked at santram in shock.
"let it be, princess, forget it, and plz be friend with jalal" said santram so as to help jalal, jodha nodded and forwarded her hand so as to start a new beginning, friendship, but this one step of her will change their whole life.
Jalal to forwarded his hand as everyone was screaming from behind and finally their hands touched passing a current through their spine to their nerves, they both pulled back their hands at the slight touch of their hands, it created something inside both of their bodies, they both looked at each other, and went from there.
After some time, they decided to leave, but jodha was loving ruqs, salima, maan, and mirza's company.
"arre!! i think you should stay here for some more time, as today i got surprised (looking at jalal) a lot but the party is still there to happen" said jodha
"what about a pajama party" said jodha after some time to everyone agreed,
"i think then we should call ronny too" said santram to jodha agreed,
"haan!! call ronny bhai, he is really very bad, didn't came to see me" said jodha with a pout.
"if you all don't mind, can i ask who is ronny?" asked ruqaiyah,
"arre!! i thought you have worked with him, he is a choreographer, ranvijay singh" said jodha
"oh so he is your cousin?" asked jalal with a smirk as ranvijay is a good friend of jalal.
"yup!!" said jodha
All were ready for the pajama party, the boys were in their attire only, as pajama party is not their cup of tea, while jodha shared her dresses with the girls, she herself wore a short dress as no night dress or comfortable dress was left, she found it uncomfortable as she never wears such short dress, yes! she lived in foreign but still she don't like to wear short dresses.
Everyone was just looking at jodha as she was looking a mixture of cuteness and sexiness, jalal was again got mesmerized by jodha! yeah! she was looking hot! damn hot! while santram being the possessive brother, was against such clothes, he tried to tell jodha sweetly but jodha can't tell him that she wore it because of others, she pleaded him sweetly to which he agreed,
while jalal was just thinking her as foreign return, that is why she wore such short dress when her own brother was against it.
Edited by aisha.....11110 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hope u all liked it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it pajama party dirty dog k saath hahahaha 🤣 update next part soon n pm me well thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wooww... loved it and jodha is totally awesome in thiss ff and loved it and i was all smiling while reading and pls continue soon😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aditeeparijat83

Loved it pajama party dirty dog k saath hahahaha 🤣 update next part soon n pm me well thanks for the pm


thank you
yes i will update it whenever i get time
nd pm u too
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Posted: 11 years ago
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dhamekadhar...
jo is realy kiddy..
nw jallu also getg kiddy!!
lovd wen said :shut up" 2gethr...
ruqqu understands jallu so much..
continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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super cute party!!! I am loving your story please update soon

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