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Posted: 11 years ago
wow
awesm chappy👏
liked whole part...😉
jo ws talking abt her which mistake...😕
plz tell me y she takes pills😕😕
jo paris ja ri h kya...?😭
jo cmnts me krungi
honesty se krungi...
aa nhi rhe apke update
pr me wait krungi😳
plz update naa...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hely

wow
awesm chappy👏
liked whole part...😉
jo ws talking abt her which mistake...😕
plz tell me y she takes pills😕😕
jo paris ja ri h kya...?😭
jo cmnts me krungi
honesty se krungi...
aa nhi rhe apke update
pr me wait krungi😳
plz update naa...

thaanks a lot dear😳
awww...how sweet yrrr😃😃
wait krr update mil jaayega😉
as we say 'sabr ka fal meetha hota hai'😆
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as soon as possible u will get it😉😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aisha...11110

thaanks a lot dear😳
awww...how sweet yrrr😃😃
wait krr update mil jaayega😉
as we say 'sabr ka fal meetha hota hai'😆


welcm cutie😉
hw cute u r😳
intezar kb tk hum krenge bhala
bin mtlb cmnts kb tk krenge bhla😆
sabr ka fl update hota h..plz do


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Posted: 11 years ago

pakka as soon as possible 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hely


welcm cutie😉
hw cute u r😳
intezar kb tk hum krenge bhala
bin mtlb cmnts kb tk krenge bhla😆
sabr ka fl update hota h..plz do



i will do sweetie
as sooon as possible 😉
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RECAP

.meanwhile moti took jodha to a corner..."jodha we r leaving after 10 days ...i asked the doctor...yr hunger nd lack of sleep r side effects as u took 5 pills jab ki tumhe 3 pills se zyada nhi lena" said moti...jodha was again upset now she have to leave everyone bhaiya,ronny bhai,maan nd all nd JALAL...

CHAPTER 10

'why this happens with me? whenever happiness enters my life...kanha always snatches them ...first my parents...then my best frnd nd now him...i dont know what is the relation between us...just frnds or more than that...best freinds!!! ...dont know???? but something strong is between us...i dont need to open my mouth to tell my state of mind...coz he can read my heart...my mind...my eyes...may be that is why he is JALAL KHAN OR JMK' all these questions were surrounded in jodha's mind...as soon as the thought of jalal enter her mind...unknowingly a smile crept on her lips...."yes!!! i dont need to be sad...why i should be??...every thing happens 4 gud only...like he said...i should enjoy these days before leaving...so that i can also have something to remember nd cherish ...these enjoyable days of my life with my family,the new found frndship nd some happy moments with him!!...oh gosh!! why he is coming again nd again in my mind...plz god telll me what is happening to me..."said jodha to herself still couldnt figure her state of heart...she was walking lostly on the corridor of the studio when she bumped with a man "ouchh!!!!! ankhein hai ya button...cant u see" said jodha rubbing her arm while the man was lost on her angelic beauty...jodha stared him from top to bottom nd realised that he was drooling her which irked her "excuse mee!!!! why r staring me... haan???? aaj se pehle kya kabhi koi cute ladki nhi dekhi...vaise its not yr fault...actually i know i m supaah cute ...per tab bhiii...dikhne me toh...u look that u belongs to a gud family...toh why dont u buy specks for yrself ...believe me...vo toh acha hua...that there is no other girl than me whom u bumped with...nhi toh at the spot...tumhe le jaake FIR krwati...tabh u will realise yr mistake.." said jodha showering her 'jodha baba gyan' on him...while he was admiring her antics..."i think u dont know me..." he said to jodha all in attitude but our jodha is also not less "haan toh...i dont even want to know u...apni chodo i think u dont know me...i m jodha singh...naam toh suna hoga "

"haan ...now i remember...suna hai naaam...if i m not wrong u r the new girl of jalal naa...vaise his taste is gud" he said while luking at her from top 2 bottom...but our innocent jodha didnt got his words "arre...pehle toh i m not his gf ...its a rumour...and secondly...u r mistaken...uska taste bilkul bhi acha nhi hai...believe me...his dressing sense is just yukks(making a not so gud face) u would be thinking ki how i know,,,arre mai uske saath shopping ke liye gyi hu naa nd even his room colour is grey nd back...chiii...no brightness" said jodha trying to understand him with her words+her expressions but who could tell her that this innocence of her is the reason of boys going mad for her ...same happened with this guy...he was enjoying her antics...her cute faces...her smile...her innocence...any body can fall for her at the first sight but he is not in luv but yes...attracted to her "nice to meet you ms. jodha" said the guy to jodha..."but i m not pleased to meet u ...what u think...haan???(placing her hands on her waist and fingering him) i think u dont know me...or agar waapis u tried to came in my way naa...toh i will not spare u" said jodha but she didnt know her anger is enjoyed by him instead of being scared which irked her more...."r u not scared of me? (he simply nodded negatively)kyaaa???? u r not scared of jodhaa...jodha singh... u have to be scared...chalo darro..darro mjhse nhi toh..say sry"said jodha but in return she only got a smirk from him..."shayad se u really dont know me that is why u r talking like this...so let i clear yr doubt...hiii! i m varun...varun gill"said varun proudly but how could sum one tell him that she didnt got anything "arre waah!!! ab jaise i recognise u...varun ho varun dhawan nhi jo...i will know u...koi junior artist ho nhi nhi may be koi supporting actor " it irritated varun nd he said irritatedly "i m dhanraaj gill's son" "acha...toh tum dhanraaj gill ke bete ho...KYAAA😲😲 ...D..DHANRAAJ GILL...P...PRODUCER...FILMM?" said jodha finding words to say "yess...u r right...im the son of the producer of this film...mr dhanraaj gill's son" said varun flaunting his richness by his words which irked jodha "spoiled brat"said jodha which was a punch on varun's ego "mind your language...understood...u know whom u r talking" said varun angrily😡 "yesss i know i m talking to a spoiled brat...u r nothing except this...all the expenses u r enjoying r not of u...u r dependent on yr father" said jodha crashing his ego..."arre!!!! u have opened my eyes... huh...what u think ki mera reaction aisa hoga...so forget it...ohk!...i m a spoiled brat...so what u will do complain yr brother or yr so called bodyguard jalal... " said varun with a smirk "dont utter a word about jalal.,...understood...vo jaisa bhi hai but at the end he is better than u...whatever he is now...is because of his hard work not like u who is wasting his dad's money" said jodha angrily😡😡...no one could imagine that there would be a lioness behind this cute face..."ohhh!!!! hard work and him...u know me nd jalal were in the same college...u wont trust me but its true...he is a casanova...he is just using u...nd what type of work he is doing...haan??? firstly he was a businessman nd when he got bored with that occupation...he turned to be an actor...u r not for him...he is not of yr type...he doesn't deserve u...trust me" this made jodha more angrier......she doesnt thought anything and slapped him twice "dare to say anything wrong about him...i know him...u dont know anything about him nd its better ki tum usse durr raho...nd he do deserve me...but for yr info. we only r frnds mind it..."this made varun more angrier than ever...he pushed her to the wall...holding her shoulders tight...his nails were piercing in her soft skin...but this time there was no tears in her eyes...all which was there was only hatred for him...which made varun realised that she will not fear like this...he have to do something so that he could see regret in her eyes for messing with him...meanwhile jalal was passing by there only finding jodha as he hadnt seen her after the kiss nd hug debate waala scene...but he was stopped after seeing the horrible scene infront of his eyes...'what the hell this varun is doing with jodha...ohhh shiit !!! he is hurting her' jalal said under his breadth nd ran to save jodha...he pushed varun away from jodha...jodha jumped over jalal nd hugged him like they were meeting after years "WHAT THE HELL U WERE DOING WITH HER...WHY U CAME HERE😡😡" jalal said angrily...he know now he cant beat him as jodha is also here...his eyes was blood red...he caressed jodha's hairs but jodha was ready to fight her...jodha again trying to beat him "hey...jodha kya hua...did he said something u did he hurt u" asked jalal concernly but jodha was in her own world...the harsh words against jalal was ringing in her mind...she tried to free herself from jalal nd wanted to kill him at this very point...she was moving terribly under jalal's hold to free herself..."jalal leave me...i will not spare him...i will kill him at the very point...he is very bad...he said very dirty things about u nd our friendship" this made jalal smiled...'she was doing this for me...oh god jodha !!!! ur unpredictable... u r the first girl who has the power to run jalal khan behind her...i dont what u r for me...but its clear...now u r something special'thought jalal but soon it was broken by varun's voice "hey jalal...long time ??? yrr seriously yr gf is more than u...first girl to slap varun gill...but the slap was not needed as what i said was true...jodha dear...ask him...was he not a casanova ? said varun knowing that jalal was the weakness of jodha nd in this way he can take revenge from him...jodha luked at jalal...jalal was in guilt...but jodha had seen change...he is no more that jalal...she has trust on him...jalal was sad as he thought jodha was luking at him in disgust "yes varun...u r right he WAS a casanova but no more...nd i believe in change more than words...as it is said that 'past is to prove that nobody is perfect but future is to prove that everyone can change' so plz u may leave now" said jodha insulting varun due to which he left thinking some other way to take revenge...when she turned to jalal...she was amused that he was admiring her "oh hero!!...kya hua...nd kaise kaise classmates the tumhaare saath in yr college."said jodha gaining his attention..."jaise tumhaare college mei sunaina hai like that only varun is there in my college"said jalal which made jodha giggle meanwhile jalal's hand by mistake touched jodha's shoulder because of it jodha hissed in pain "aaahhha" moaned jodha in pain..."hey jodha kya hua...r u fine...what happened did he hurt u???"asked jalal in a caring voice "yaah...u know he is very bad...he is totally a spoiled brat noo..a vampire...donkey ne soo badly digged his nail...aaa..its still paining" complained jodha...jalal took her to the rest room "jalal why u bring me here...do u want to change...nhi ager this would be the reason toh why would u brought me then...rest krna hai...but the same question arises...why we came here😕😕" jodha asked him...he was getting embarrassed by her reasons..."we r here because of yr wound...to put some ointment there...understood"said jalal so that she coudnt pressurize her little brain to guess more..."ohhh...understood..."said jodha with her so called sincere face "ohk...yello antiseptic nd put it" said jalal turning around...jodha removed her jacket nd put her sleeves down but she was not able to put it "jalal i cant do this" complained jodha...jalal turned around and saw her struggling...he saw her shoulder bare..her hairs were left open nd because of it they were coming on her way...he was totally lost on her face...jodha saw him standing nd it angered her "jalal!!!!!! u r so bad...lostly standing there nd idher i m strugging...tooo bad...its not like a gud frnd...come on help me...ab kya apni help ke liye ambulance bulaau"said jodha with a pout which made jalal smile...'kaash i would pull those cheeks' thought jalal but again he scolded himself for these wierd thoughts which were comming into his mind after jodha came "u will never listen to me naaa...chodo i will not apply it" said jodha "ohhhkkk!!!!! i will do it" said jalal...he put her hair strands behind her ears...his touch made shivers ran down her spine...he started applying it on her shoulder...she winched in pain...jalal slowly blow air on her wound...jodha was feeling butterflies in her stomach...jalal was lost in jodha but came back with jodha's voice "jalal dont do it...patani something is happening in me...i m liking it at one side but at the other side something weird feeling...uhhh,,,,,i think i m hungry...nothing else" jodha cutely without thinking complained...it was all new to her...jalal smiled seeing his effect on her

they were walking...they came to know much about each other...the whole day passes like this only...at the other side santram realised his love for piya...dayss passed...shooting was almost completed as they had shot much seens in mumbai tooo...7 days had passes...jodha didnt realised that after 3 days she have to leave to paris nd not even she had told to anyone

there last day at manali...all were sitting...varun had gone back that day only thinking a gud way to pay back her...

santram nd piya was sitting together lost in each other...moti signaled jodha to tell the truth about their arrival..."bhaiya i want to tell u something" said jodha hesitantly "haan bolo????kya hua" asked santram "bhaiya i m going back to paris as something imp.is going to happen there..i will complete my internship there only" said jodha in one go which surprised everyone specially jalal...they were spending their time mosty with each other but he hadnt told him tooo...he was hurt "u r not going anywhere jodha...i will not let u go now" said santram shocking jodha...she luked at moti who signalled her to manofy him but before he could say anything santram said "and moti nd ronny's engagement is after 5 days so i dont want u to be absent from here" jodha luked at moti they both were shocked then they hit the reality that everyone wanted to surprise them...jodha's brain got an idea which santram will never accept "ohk!! bhaiya but i have a condition...nd if u deny i win nd its yr wish how u want to complete it " said jodha with a smirk "ohk...i will do" said santram with confidence "ohhk...as u wish...as we all know that bhaiya nd piya luvs each other...so my condition is that u have to marry her" said jodha as she know her bhai will definately not accept it but to her shock santram said yes "i m ready to marry her but court marriage as u said its my wish how to complete her.." said santram...nd she accepted to not go back to paris...she luked at moti who was happy seeing her mobile's screen...she went near her nd sat beside her "oye what happen...u r not sad...hamaara plan flop" said jodha but in return she got a wide smile from moti "arre pagal...doctor is coming here...in india...he texted me that it is not necessary to come...he will treat u here only"said moti surprising jodha...she was happy ki now there is no need to leave...piya came to jodha nd thanked her in return jodha started calling her bhabhi which made her blush...santram came near jodha and thanked her as coz of her he realised his luv nd told her that their mother was from manali only...which made her sad...she take her bag nd took 3 pills nd was about to take it when jalal came "why u take these pills jodha ...i have seen u many times having it" jalal asked...jodha gulped her saliva "aise he i...i..i..mean its for healthy skin" said jodha but jalal not seemed convinced by jodha's answer...nd thought to find it by himself "vaise jodha...i m angry with u...kya u dont trust me...why dont u tell me about yr departure" said jalal 2 tease jodha but she turned serious nd said sry but jalal was no mood in losing the chance of teasing her

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PRECAP-- JODHA CONVINCING JALAL TO FORGIVE HER...RETURN TO MUMBAI ...SANTRAM PIYA MARRIAGE...JALAL TO KNOW ABOUT DEPRESSION PILLS

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thanks to all my frnds who liked my ss

special thanks to palak[hely],sara,bhavini di and rishbala

Edited by aisha.....11110 - 10 years ago
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res.. will read and comment 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SARA4444

update ke liye koi date?

yrr maine update kr toh diya😕😕
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Originally posted by: SARA4444

res.. will read and comment 😆

suree😉

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