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Posted: 13 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: thiku

Anu for the first time jumped in your story frm the line the hot air tingled her skin to the part where Abhay revealed since I am feeling too bad, even though I know it will be Abhay only none other than him, something strange was there and that is just because of ur writing 👏 👏 well done anu. so ur are updating it today night itself ok then waiting fr that...


Aw, thanks sweets. I really didn't thought that suspense would be so much to handle. 😆
But I'm glad you still liked it so much. Thank you so much! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Anu...if the next part is ready...then u can post it...or if u want to wait...then also its ok😛...(its nt actually ok ...bt i am jst trying to b polite)...good we will have something to look forward to tomorrow
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOOW!!! Loved all of it!:DDD👏👏

The way she keeps teasing him relentlessly - must possibly be building up in him and I'm definitely sure some sort of dhamaka is going to happen soon seriously.

On a differing note, wowee! Fantastic job on that scare at the end of part 5 there, I mean sacchi mein for a moment I really thought some purani dushman had caught her or something!://
Teehee naughty naughty Abhayjee!!

@Party: Ooof, I'm somehow guessing she'll attempt to go flirt with the naya inspector Karanjee (I likey his name:D) just to make him jealous? Or oof! How's about Abhay return her the favour instead?
Jo bhi ho - I'm dying to see some dhamaka pataka sooon:DDD
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Anu!!!!!WOW WOW WOW😃 I LOVED this one. Off, suspense, excitement, all in there plus...it was sexy!!😉

'Kua...kuan ho tum? Dekho yeh tum sahi nahi kare...mere pati Joint Commissioner hain agar unhe pata chala na tu tumhari khair nahi.' Phulwa said trying to put up a brave front, but got no reply.

OH ho Phulwa, using pati ka naam very arrogantly.😆 Afterall why not, it's our ACP Abhay. Naam mein dam hai. LOL, feels good to hear Phulwa totally patni like saying that!

'Mein keh rahi hoon mujhe chod do warna acha nahi hoga. Himmat hai tu mujhe kholo mein tumhein dikhati hoon-' Her next words died in her mouth as she felt a finger on her lips stopping her my continuing any further.

A glimpse of our Dacait here. me LIKES😉 The finger on her lips (since im assuming it's Abhay) *melts*

The tip of his nose touched hers and she tilted her head up; her lips slightly apart now as she waited to feel the warmth of his mouth on hers.

UFFF ! ☺️ This is too much for me to handle. Sunsaan jaga and stranger in the night kissing you? ☺️

Moving closer she put her arms around his neck and continued, 'Aap ki har saans se wakif hain hum.'

Loved this sentence here. beautiful❤️ She is uske har saans se waakif😍

He stopped while she continued to do so and he admired her beautiful face, how it lit up when she laughed the sound of her laughter music to him.

Oh, he really used to do that in the show😍 When she was in the hospital, during the drive and when she was bitten by the snake. They used to start laughing at the same time, then Abhay would stop and look at her. My PhAb😍❤️

Anu, this was too great for words really!! Was immersed in that world you painted for a while. *sigh* Love you🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: mimi_s

Anu...if the next part is ready...then u can post it...or if u want to wait...then also its ok😛...(its nt actually ok ...bt i am jst trying to b polite)...good we will have something to look forward to tomorrow


Sorry I said I'll and then didn't. But but be happy because the next part will be good. Patanahi kya hua kal raat ko I wrote a long scene as per my standards and then well...had to tame it down to post in the forum. But decided to save the uncut version as well! 🤣

Yes, next part coming up in a while. ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: vita93

WOOW!!! Loved all of it!:DDD👏👏


The way she keeps teasing him relentlessly - must possibly be building up in him and I'm definitely sure some sort of dhamaka is going to happen soon seriously.

On a differing note, wowee! Fantastic job on that scare at the end of part 5 there, I mean sacchi mein for a moment I really thought some purani dushman had caught her or something!://
Teehee naughty naughty Abhayjee!!

@Party: Ooof, I'm somehow guessing she'll attempt to go flirt with the naya inspector Karanjee (I likey his name:D) just to make him jealous? Or oof! How's about Abhay return her the favour instead?
Jo bhi ho - I'm dying to see some dhamaka pataka sooon:DDD


Thank youuu! So good to hear that from you. 😳

Haha, you are the only one who thought like that warna everyone else had been placing their bets on Abhay and winning too. 😆😆

@Party- Lol, Vita sorry to disappoint you but there is so no party. It was just Abhay's plan to...oh well, read the next update you'll get it. Nothing complicated just an evening out with his patni-jee. 😉
@Karan- I couldn't think of any other name and then I remembered your SS and thought okay yahi sahi, he won't be really making an entry so...Hope you don't mind. :)

I don't dhamaka hoga ya nahi. Now I'm scared...patanahi if you like the next part or not. :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: beebutterfly

Anu!!!!!WOW WOW WOW😃 I LOVED this one. Off, suspense, excitement, all in there plus...it was sexy!!😉


'Kua...kuan ho tum? Dekho yeh tum sahi nahi kare...mere pati Joint Commissioner hain agar unhe pata chala na tu tumhari khair nahi.' Phulwa said trying to put up a brave front, but got no reply.

OH ho Phulwa, using pati ka naam very arrogantly.😆 Afterall why not, it's our ACP Abhay. Naam mein dam hai. LOL, feels good to hear Phulwa totally patni like saying that!

'Mein keh rahi hoon mujhe chod do warna acha nahi hoga. Himmat hai tu mujhe kholo mein tumhein dikhati hoon-' Her next words died in her mouth as she felt a finger on her lips stopping her my continuing any further.

A glimpse of our Dacait here. me LIKES😉 The finger on her lips (since im assuming it's Abhay) *melts*

The tip of his nose touched hers and she tilted her head up; her lips slightly apart now as she waited to feel the warmth of his mouth on hers.

UFFF ! ☺️ This is too much for me to handle. Sunsaan jaga and stranger in the night kissing you? ☺️

Moving closer she put her arms around his neck and continued, 'Aap ki har saans se wakif hain hum.'

Loved this sentence here. beautiful❤️ She is uske har saans se waakif😍

He stopped while she continued to do so and he admired her beautiful face, how it lit up when she laughed the sound of her laughter music to him.

Oh, he really used to do that in the show😍 When she was in the hospital, during the drive and when she was bitten by the snake. They used to start laughing at the same time, then Abhay would stop and look at her. My PhAb😍❤️

Anu, this was too great for words really!! Was immersed in that world you painted for a while. *sigh* Love you🤗


@Abhay- Lol, yeah when you have got a hubby like Abhay then using his name like that..haq banta hai. Warna that would be a wastage of such a good name and tile. ;P

@Stranger- Aur jab stranger itna hot ho tu aur bhi...*blush&giggle*

Aww thank you so much for the lovely comments! And I love you for being such a sweet heart!! Thankuuu! 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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They used to start laughing at the same time, then Abhay would stop and look at her. My PhAb😍❤️Ami I so very agree...and if ever Phulwa stopped laughing Abhay would also stop and watch her closely to see if she was fine...to make sure she is nt angry or anything and...if she laughed againn then he would also join in the laughter...the bestest onscreen couple with oh sooo amazing chemistry😊😊...love them sooo veryyy much...even now it hurts like hell to think that Phulwa is actually gone off air...its heartbreaking...its so horrible...MISS AP LIKE CRAZY...pls come back...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mimi_s

They used to start laughing at the same time, then Abhay would stop and look at her. My PhAb😍❤️Ami I so very agree...and if ever Phulwa stopped laughing Abhay would also stop and watch her closely to see if she was fine...to make sure she is nt angry or anything and...if she laughed againn then he would also join in the laughter...the bestest onscreen couple with oh sooo amazing chemistry😊😊...love them sooo veryyy much...even now it hurts like hell to think that Phulwa is actually gone off air...its heartbreaking...its so horrible...MISS AP LIKE CRAZY...pls come back...


True, and thats what I loved most about them. They hardly had any close intimate scenes but its scenes like these the laughing one, where their care shows that make them so special. They proved that a pair doesnt have to be stuck together in odd positions to show chemistry, rather simple scenes like these also show chemistry, a great co act that actually make the scene more than it is.

Miss them a LOT. ;(
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Posted: 13 years ago
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And Passion Continues...

Now they both sat under the beautiful white canopy in the dim light of the little candles glowing around them. Abhay had set the whole place himself for their first date sort of event. It was an open clearing at the side of the thick forest surrounding the village. Phulwa admired the beautiful decorations and smiled at him just as he took out a little gift for her. Surprised at another gift she quickly opened it up. Inside was a beautiful black pen with her name inscribed on it. Phulwa looked at the pen a little amazed and disappointed as this was one gift that she may never be able to use.

'Abhay yeh...hum iska kya karein gey?' She asked with a puzzled look.

'Tum use likho gi. Haan Phulwa hum chahte hain ke tum padho, taake phir kabhi tumhein kisi ke agay jhukna na pade.'

Her eyes welled up with tears and his own face held a distressing emotion as he remembered the times he himself had insulted over the fact that she was not educated. That's why he felt she should be educated so later in life she would never have to face the same situation again. So she could always walk with her head held high and nobody would ever be able to put her down for any reason. He wanted to turn her weakness into strength.

Phulwa couldn't help but be moved by his thoughtfulness and concern. She agreed to do as Abhay said but then asked him who will teach her to which Abhay replied he would be taking on that task. She started to laugh hearing this. Abhay now looked at her incredulous.

'Hum class mein hamesha first ate they. Is liye tumhein hum padha gein.'

'Lo phir tu hogaya kaam. Ek kaam tu theek se karte nahi hain...chale hain humein padhanein.' She murmured to herself.

'Kya kaha tumne?'

'Hum ne? Kuch nahi..' She said turning away but Abhay pulled her closer.

'Hamari patni ko humse kya shikiat hai?' He asked looking straight into her eyes.

He knew well what affect he had on her so continued to come closer and nuzzled against her face. Moving down he placed light kisses on her neck and shoulder while Phulwa just closed her eyes. A little smile started to play on her lips when he kissed her at that moment stealing the smile from her and it spread on his face. She returned the kiss with greater fervor and his hands moved up her back. Breaking the kiss he moved back smiling and asked her whether she still had any complains? She lowered her eyes as a deep flush crept up her face.

Still holding her by the waist he pulled her in closer again, kissing her shoulder he slightly turned her around so her back was to him. Slowly he tugged at the straps of the blouse with his bare teeth, loosening the knot at the neck. Involuntary Phulwas hand reached back and she quickly turned around stopping him from going any further. He was about to object but then he saw her wrist was a little red and he realized it was because of the tight knot. Carefully he took of the bracelet off her arm, gently rubbed her wrist with his thumb in slow motion and then kissed the marks away. She closed her eyes as a wave of passion ran through, her heart set on a marathon.

Cupping her face he again pressed his lips against her, his kiss gentle yet firm. His one hand went up to her hair and pulled the pin out of her locks letting them fall lose. She looked up at him as admired her and then quickly ran out of there laughing.

She was standing there laughing at the slightly annoyed expression of Abhay when she felt something wet on her shoulder. She looked up as little drops of water fell on her face. Rain. She thought like always nature intervened, but this time she welcomed it with open arms and twirled around. Abhay stared at her, amused at her childlike manner and finally joined her in the open. Suddenly the light drizzle turned into lashing rain. They both looked at each other with worried expressions and then without a second thought Abhay grabbed her hand and led the way through the forest surrounding it.

'Hum ja kahan rahe hain Abhay?' She asked.

'Bus chalo.' He said and Phulwa had no choice but to follow.

*

A few minutes later now soaking wet they reached a dingy looking shelter in the midst of the forest. Abhay quickly opening the door went in along with Phulwa. She looked around taking in her surroundings. It was an old shabby place which didn't seem to be in use for a long time. There was a small stone stove kind of item placed at one side and on the other a stack of hay with an old torn blanket laid. A single lantern was present which Abhay quickly lit up with the help of a matchstick that he found there. Phulwa turned around and asked him that how did he know of this place, to which Abhay explained that during police operations they sometimes use this place for hideouts etc.

Abhay started to take off his jacket which was completely wet and Phulwa realized how cold she was feeling. Her thin sari now stuck to her slender frame, her wet hair matted against her face and back. She looked around uncomfortable and then started to twist the palu of her sari in a miserable attempt to dry it. Lost in it she did not notice Abhay, who was drinking her, her every movement through his eyes. Slowly he started to walk up to her. She looked up just in time to catch his eye.

'Abhay?' She asked in an uncertain voice, as he continued to charge towards her with a serious look unbuttoning his shirt.

He stood close to her, very close. Then without a word he swept her off her feet, taking a few steps ahead he placed her down gently at the make do bed. They both seemed oblivious to their surrounding; the grimy smell, scratchy blanket on hay providing a place to lie. The only sense left was the sense of touch.

His face loomed above hers, a few drops of water still dripping from his hair. She closed her eyes unable to handle his intense gaze, which unnerved her yet excited. He bent down and kissed away the water droplets from her face to her neck, she turned slightly and he untied the knot finally.

Her hand moved down on his bare chest removing the shirt. He moved back and in one swift movement taking the shirt off he threw it aside. Holding him by the neck she brought him near, her hand travelled along his shoulder stopping at the touch of his bruised skin. She looked at the faint marks of the wound on his upper arm, gently circling it. Twice he had taken bullet for me she thought. He looked to the side where her eyes and fingers were lingering.

'Kiss and heal.' He whispered leaning in and then kissed her under her ear. She closed her eyes as a strange sensation ran through her body making her want to giggle at the same time sending shivers. His tongue teased out her parted lips while his hand slowly removed the sari and he covered her with himself.

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