PhAb FF|Living The Dream-LastPart pg.12

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Intro
Well the basic concept of this FF is very simple. It is how I had wished to see things unfold and story move forward in the show which unfortunately we did not get to see. So this in a way you can say is the continuation from the point where the show ended. Not exactly though because my story is set before the babies arrive. At this point in my FF one month has passed since Thakurs death, the evil trio is thrown out of the house, Abhay has recovered fully, is back at work and PhAb are going on about their lives. This will be just a little day to day account of their lives.

It's tentatively titled 'Living The Dream' because that is what I'm doing here, the endless PhAb dreams that we had conjured, living them out through words. And secondly I couldn't think of any other title. 😆
Nothing much else really and it is my very first attempt at writing a FF so please be kind enough and ignore the silly mistakes. And if it feels like an over dose of PhAb at some points then blame it on my PhAb obsession, though I'll try to incorporate other characters too. Though I have written a few parts but how long will I continue it depends on readers responses and my free time honestly.


First Part
Like I said, one month has passed since Thakurs death and PhAb are settling into the new routine. First part as the title 'Morning After' suggests that it is the morning after their first night together. One night they give into it and this is what happened the next morning. (Yes, omit the SR seq of the show from your minds. :P) So yeah, thats about it for the first part.

Advance mein Sorry if any the following content is not deemed well.


Thank you for reading patiently. First coming up. Comments, criticism, suggestions etc. feel free to post them. :)
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Morning After

The sunbeams filtered through the white curtains falling on their sleeping figures. Slowly Phulwa opened her eyes as the sun gently awakened her greeting her with a bright new day. As her eyes adjusted to the light she smiled at his sleeping face right before her. Leisurely she tried to get up but stopped as her hand got stuck in something. She brought her hand forward to see that the single remaining bangle on her hand had entangled with the red threads on Abhay's hand. Smiling, she slowly pried it free.

Looking down at his calm sleeping face she felt a sudden urge to bend down and plant a kiss but she feared waking him up. Shaking her head she started to move out of the quilt but then stopped as she examined the room; their clothes lay strewn all over, dresser items on the floor, beanbag almost ripped apart. What happened here last night? Her mouth made a little O as images of last night raced through her mind. Clutching the covers tightly against her she started to move back until she bumped into him, waking him up.

'Abhay...Abhay utho!'

'Kya Phulwa, subah subah kya hua?'

'Subah? Suraj sar pe chad aya hai aur aap...woh chodein aap uthein na. dekhein kaamre kya haal hai! Aur hamare ka-'she stopped, her words hanging there.

Finally he opened his eyes and looked at her. 'Hamare kya?'

She looked sideways hinting to the clothes. He raised one eyebrow as he scanned the room then looked at her with a serious expression.

'Tu?'

'Tu? Abhay tu yeh ke-' she stopped as she realized he was grinning and moving towards her.

He knew she was trapped but before he could reach her she lunged forward and grabbed his shirt that was lying at the foot of the bed.

'Yeh kya kar rahi ho Phulwa?'

Quickly putting on his shirt she got off the bed.

'Aap ki shirt pehen rahi hoon aur kya?' she said turning towards him.

He gave her a top to bottom look with a mischievous smile playing in his eyes. She looked down as color raised in her cheeks, feeling extremely shy she tried to pull down the shirt which barely reached her thighs. Abhay slowly getting up started to move towards her but again before he could even reach the end of the bed she ran to the washroom.

***

Showered and dressed in a new petticoat and blouse she came into the room only to find Abhay again sound asleep. She called his name; he stirred a little but didn't get up. Feeling bolder she stood above him, and then leaned forward flicking her wet hair over his face. As water droplets fell on him he woke up calling her name. Giggling she threw the towel on him and ran to the other side of the room.

'Chaalein ab jaldi jaldi uth kar tayar hojaien. Kaam pe nahi jana.'

Growling he got up and went to change. Just as she finished doing the folds of her sari and started to tie the knot of her blouse she felt his hand taking over hers. As his fingers started doing their work, she let her own arms rest. Holding her by the shoulders he turned her around and looked deep into her eyes.

'Kya dekh rahe hain aap?' she asked him.

'Tumhein.'

'Kyun?'

'Because that's my favorite thing to do.' He replied in a husky voice.

She blushed lightly and trying hard to control the smile she pushed him back a little and went to the cupboard.

'Chalein bahut hogaya aaram, ab aap kaam pe jaien.' She said taking out his uniform and placing it on the bed.

He grumbled, 'Jana zaroori hain?'

'Bahut zaroori hai. Hum naashta lagate aap tayar hokar ayein.' She ordered him in a stern voice and left.

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Please, leave your valuable comments below. 😳

Edited by Ameres - 13 years ago
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thanks a lot dear for considering my request i love ur writing skills from the bottom of my heart
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Oh Anu!!!!!!! LOVED IT. I'm actually jumping up and down here. Thank you for completing our adhoore sapnes😃
Gosh, this was like the perfect morning after seriously. haye, im daydreaming now😍

She brought her hand forward to see that the single remaining bangle on her hand had entangled with the red threads on Abhay's hand.

After, the hospital scene, this was actually one of the sweetest and most symbolical moments of PhAb❤️ They were tied together. Nothing can separate them. Love this line Anu.

their clothes lay strewn all over, dresser items on the floor, beanbag almost ripped apart.

Ahem..some very interesting images are coming to mind after the SR SS😆 Seems like a storm happened or...JB and BS collided😉

He gave her a top to bottom look with a mischievous smile playing in his eyes. She looked down as color raised in her cheeks, feeling extremely shy she tried to pull down the shirt which barely reached her thighs.

This is one of the sexiest lines really. You sure he's looking top to bottom? ya tumhari tarah...🤣 Waise bhi uncovered places par zyaada dhyaan de raha hoga😳

Feeling bolder she stood above him, and then leaned forward flicking her wet hair over his face. As water droplets fell on him he woke up calling her name

Ooff, in PhAb land right now😍

Just as she finished doing the folds of her sari and started to tie the knot of her blouse she felt his hand taking over hers. As his fingers started doing their work, she let her own arms rest

LOL, seems like ACP saab sirf ek kaam mein busy hai aaj kal. His fingers have become specialist at a particular work😆 But they say na, that you should be multi talented? This is the perfect example and phangirls just love multi talented Abhay. Police wala, sadu, knows how to tie a blouse's knot and...untie it☺️


Anu, this was just AWESOME👏 Absolutely cannot wait to see what else you have in store because there's one thing you never do...and that's disappoint us😉

Edited by beebutterfly - 13 years ago
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Thank you anu fr this... great Idea, I loved the way you write it something missed in the show... ya show is ended but PhAb dreams never... good writing Anu...👏
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Anu anu anu...kaash hum kuch aisa dekh ne ko milta...sacchi mein 😊..loved what u wrote👏👏...my hands r tired after typing my stupid SS so baki ke comments baad mein ...bt u better PM me 😊
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Originally posted by: beebutterfly

Oh Anu!!!!!!! LOVED IT. I'm actually jumping up and down here. Thank you for completing our adhoore sapnes😃

Gosh, this was like the perfect morning after seriously. haye, im daydreaming now😍
Haha, thank youuu! I'm super happy you liked it. 😳😳😳

Ahem..some very interesting images are coming to mind after the SR SS😆 Seems like a storm happened or...JB and BS collided😉
You are thinking in the right direction, bus wohi SR wale images mind mein rakho. 😆

This is one of the sexiest lines really. You sure he's looking top to bottom? ya tumhari tarah...🤣 Waise bhi uncovered places par zyaada dhyaan de raha hoga😳
Really? Thank you. ☺️
ROFL! Ab yeh tu tum better samajh lo. ahem. Well he had done enough staring and more last night so...😉 But true uncovered parts pe tu nazar jaye hi gi. Now how do you expect him to control his besharam staring when his JB is standing like that before him hm? 😆

LOL, seems like ACP saab sirf ek kaam mein busy hai aaj kal. His fingers have become specialist at a particular work😆 But they say na, that you should be multi talented? This is the perfect example and phangirls just love multi talented Abhay. Police wala, sadu, knows how to tie a blouse's knot and...untie it☺️
Oh yes he is!! And a real expert at the bold. 😉 And look at the level of superheroness, in one night he has become an expert in so many areas! 🤣

Anu, this was just AWESOME👏 Absolutely cannot wait to see what else you have in store because there's one thing you never do...and that's disappoint us😉
Awww you guys are super sweet. Really flattered right now. Thank you thank you thank youuu for all the love! *hugs* 😳

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Saumya, Athira, Mimi- Thank you soo soo much for the kind words and appreciation. Really grateful for all the love! 🤗
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👏👏 Fantastic as usual:)

Wow I mean I've just been able to get back to the forum tonight after 2 days, and it was nothing less than a pleasant treat to be able to get to read your work once more:) And I'm super duper excited about the idea of an FF! Finally, now I'm pretty damn sure that our AP will get the just happy ending they deserved😃

Morning After
My first reaction: Haye! Morning after hi kyun - night bhi saath mein ho jata!😆😉 Then I remembered woh toh kab ka cover ho chuka hain! But another round at recreating the perfect night would be a nice consideration😆

She brought her hand forward to see that the single remaining bangle on her hand had entangled with the red threads on Abhay's hand.

It totally reminded me of the night at the hospital, when his red string had tied itself to her bangle. It was truly a scene to watch, and really applaud your decision to bring it back here again:)

He gave her a top to bottom look with a mischievous smile playing in his eyes.

Ooof return of ACP sahab again!😆 Sacchi mein, while it's really sweet watching him being so caring and kind towards Phulwa, let's face it - we all fell madly in love with the man who knew his place and more importantly what he could do to get his woman to listen😉

She looked down as color raised in her cheeks, feeling extremely shy she tried to pull down the shirt which barely reached her thighs.

Oooh nice one!! I can totally imagine his besharam aankhein staring hard all over the shirt, attempting to perform an X-ray scan over his shirt😉 Kya hain!😆

***

Growling he got up and went to change.

Oooee - subah subah still growling? Looks like BS' ki influence isn't over just yet - beware Phulwajee!😉

'Because that's my favorite thing to do.' He replied in a husky voice.

Ooof husky voice?!? Anujee are you trying to kill all of us already!! Wow kya authority hain - it oozes sexyy like anything~~

'Bahut zaroori hai. Hum naashta lagate aap tayar hokar ayein.' She ordered him in a stern voice and left.

Awww - patidev ko bhi kabhi kabhi patnijeeki baat sunna parta hain😆 I guess in the end there'll always be the dacoitwali authority stringing in her voice when she needs to use it - it's the only way to get him to listen!:D

Please, leave your valuable comments below. 😳

Loooved the first part, keep writing coz I wanna read mooore!:DD

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