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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: vita93

👏👏 Wowjee sacchi mein I loved it:DDD


I think you've done a lot of justice on the alternate spin and how it should've gone down. I mean seriously, the SR is not the end of romance isn't it. Little things here and there + you put in the shelter scene OOOF!! Sighhh...the one scene that really changed our lives forever...😍😍

Awww sho shweeet!I really really liked the way you ended the last part, I think the reveal should have really been portrayed as gently as that. They're no doubt 2 orphans, with no blood ties save for one, and they've been fighting their battles alone for long enough. To give them a chance to start a family of their own would truly complete them and bring out the love they've been wanting to pour out. Their child will indeed be very truly loved:)
And I loved the red saree oof! I think she could really rock that colour very nicely:))

I'm hopeless with names, like really really bad so I shall leave it to the experts but really looking forward to see what you bring in:D And and are you really finishing it up so soon?:/ I was really hoping to read much more...


Just seeing your name on my post makes me SO happy. And when you come with such generous praises then its like...the best!! THANK YOUUU! You're the sweetest! 🤗

@Names- No problem! Everyone helped a lot and finally the names have been decided. I hope you like it. :))
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is the last update of the FF and I would like to take this opportunity to thank each and every one of you who has liked and commented on my post. Honestly I wasn't expecting any so all the love you guys have showered me with I'm truly thankful for that. I know this last part rather the whole series has been a letdown, even for me but still you people liked it so thank you. All the love, kindness and generosity will always be remembered, always grateful. =)

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Happily Ever After


'It will be a boy.' Abhay said confidently.

'Girl.' Phulwa replied calmly sitting on the bed while munching on an apple.

'I said na boy? So it will be a boy.'

'No, no girl!' She said not ready to give up.

Ever since Abhay had gotten the news of the baby he had not been able to keep the smile off his face. Not only him but everyone in the house had been over the moon hearing the joyous news. Abhay had already decorated a new room as baby's nursery. Whites and lemons dominated the color scheme in the room as they had not confirmed the gender of the baby; they wanted to keep it a surprise.

But not surprisingly Abhay wanted a son whom he could raise up to be a brave police officer like him while Phulwa wanted a beautiful daughter whom she would raise to be confident and fearless, and work alongside men. While deciding the name of the baby they argued over it.

'But why do you want a son? Girls are more precious'

'Yes that's why I want her to have an elder brother who can protect her.'

'Why would she need protection and from whom? My daughter will be brave enough to take care of herself.'

'Protection is needed. Aaj kal ka zaamana bahut kharab hai. If anyone guy ever dares to come near my daughter I'll break his legs and my son will make sure he lands in jail.'

'Lo baap aur beta dono ek jaise. No! My son won't be doing any such thing and neither will be you because my I will raise my daughter competent enough to handle such situations.' She said that gently touching her bulging tummy and then winced in pain.

'What happened?'

'The baby just kicked.'

'See! That's my boy.' Abhay said proudly grinning.

'Definitely yours.' She said smiling at his excitement. accolade

*

A loud scream rang through the corridors of the hospital. Abhay winced slightly as the high pitch scream almost damaged his ear drums.

'Phulwa please.' He said in a soothing voice trying to calm a hyper Phulwa who was screaming her head off in pain in the labor room.

'Shut up Abhay!' She shouted at him her face twisted in anger.

Abhay gulped never have seen this side of Phulwa before. He tried to step behind a little scared at what might happen next. Nurses and doctor rushed around as Mrs. Abhay Rai Singh gave birth to their first child. The pregnancy had gone smoothly but there were a few complications in the labor and Phulwa lay writhing in pain. The doctor tried her best to calm her down.

'Push!' the doctor ordered. It was followed by a shrill scream.

The doctor looked up worried, even Phulwa looked surprised as they all turned to see the source of the noise; Abhay. He was standing next to Phulwa his face depicting the pain as he managed to said, 'Phulwa...my hand.'

She looked down to see the hand she was holding onto was Abhays, her grip so tight that her knuckles had gone white and so had Abhays face.

'You should go out I think.' Nurse Shivani said to Abhay. He looked at her grateful and decided to leave when he was pulled back by a strong force.

'Don't. You. Dare.' She hissed near his face. Scared at her fierce gaze he only did as told and kept still in the place.

A few minutes later Phulwa wrenched in pain, her piercing screams continued to fill the room but soon they were followed by a large thud sound. Everyone stopped stunned, even Phulwa opened her eyes worried and then she saw why everyone had stopped. There on the floor laid Abhay knocked out.

*

'Abhay sir, congratulations. It's a baby boy.' The nurse said smiling at him. 'You can now go inside to meet them.'

Abhay slowly opened the door and stepped into the room. Stark white walls greeted him but in it a bundle of life and joy, encompassing all the colors of the world, wrapped in a blue blanket lied quietly in the arms of the most beautiful woman.

*

Phulwa sat there looking radiant holding the tiny fortune in her arms. She seemed oblivious to the surrounding, didn't even look up when Abhay entered as her whole attention was focused on him; their son. She was nervous when she first held him but then the minute she did she felt as if the whole universe was placed in her arms. It was an odd feeling unexplainable at the best. The warmth his little presence filled her with; she had never felt so happy, so complete.

She couldn't believe it was her own baby that she could give birth to this precious little thing. Tenderly she touched his face, held his hand as his tiny fingers wrapped around her own. His eyes shut closed, his stubby nose, soft mouth, wisps of dark hair on his head- he looked like an angel. She leaned in closer his breath so pure, the untainted innocence, life in its purest form. She smiled down at the little miracle with moist eyes.

He came close to the bed and just stood there observing the little one. She looked up at him expectantly and held out the baby for Abhay to hold. His hands came forward with eagerness but he looked a bit apprehensive. But as he held the baby his expressions changed and a soft smile spread on his face. He sat down next to her on the bed. The baby stirred a little, opening his little eyes. Abhays face lit up as he saw it.

'Phulwa...look my baby is smiling at me. Mera beta.'

'Our son.' Phulwa said amused at Abhays excitement but she admired it too. She noticed tears welling up in his eyes.

'Abhay...' She asked in a concerned voice.

But Abhays whole attention was on the little life he was holding. She understood how he must be feeling. His apprehensive, his nervousness was well placed. He was concerned that will he prove to be a good father? A man who himself was deprived of fathers love his whole life, and when he finally got the chance to bask in the warmth of it that love turned out to be only a pretence. A man who had never shared any true relations before, will such a man prove to be a good father? Will he be able to provide all the love, care and understanding that a child deserves? Yes, he will she thought to herself.

Now seeing him hold the baby so lovingly in his arms she knew all his fears were baseless, that he will prove to be the best father and he knew it too as he tenderly kissed the top of his head.

'I would give you all the happiness and love in the world.' He promised.

Phulwa lightly touched his arm and he carefully placed the baby back into her arms. Sitting now next to her he placed a protective arm around her and the other under her hand which held the baby. She smiled up at him as he gazed at her affectionately. Sighing happily she placed her head on his chest as he held onto her and they both held the baby together.

*

'Anything else ma'ma?' The young woman asked Phulwa.

'No, that will be all.' She replied sitting on her table in the study room in the haveli.

She had been working on the new campaign that was soon to be started for the new elections to be held later that year. Ever since she had been able to read and write she had started to take part in different social movements and had been generally active on the social front. Soon the political leaders of that area had noticed her presence and seen the affect her words and actions made on people. It was no surprise that she was asked to be the part of this year's election. Initially she had refused but with Abhays support she had decided to be a part of it. You had always wanted to make a difference, help people and what better medium than this to reach out to thousands of people, Abhay words still rang in her head and had encouraged her to take this step. She was deep into studying the file when a large crashing sound broke her concentration.

'Aditiya.' She said shaking her head.

Almost more than two years had passed since the birth of their first child and to say he was a restless soul was an understatement. Aditiya just like his parents was always up with something never sitting down calmly even for a moment. Even right now he had broken a beautiful vase while jumping down from the table.

Pushing back the chair, she carefully got up she went out in the lounge and was not shocked to see the mess created. She simply sighed and called Aditiya. But got no answer then she saw a chubby little hand holding the back of the sofa and soft giggles coming from behind. Leaning out he peeked at her. His dark hair falling on his forehead, his innocent eyes twinkling with mischief like his father, he gave a little laugh and not waiting to hear his mother out ran to the main door. Phulwa tried to stop him but before she could reach him Aditiya jumped into the strong arms of the man entering.

'Abhay, good you are here. Now handle him because I can't control him.'

'Sure you can. You very well control me.' He said with a wink.

'Abhay!' She said giving him the zip-it-or-else look.

Laughing he asked Aditiya what he did now and the toddler replied in broken words that he was just playing. Then he saw the mess in the hall and gave Aditiya a high five. Seeing this Phulwa was even more angered and reprimanded them both. Abhay and Aditiya both looked at Phulwa with their innocent eyes and lower lip slightly pouting but Phulwa didn't budge. Seeing that Abhay whispered something in Aditiya's ear and he jumped down from his lap and ran to Phulwa and hugged her around knees. Phulwa looked down as Aditiya in a little voice said 'Sorry mama.'
Phulwa instantly melting picked him up and hugged him tightly. But then looking at Abhay pointedly she said, 'You are not off the hook.'

With a slightly annoyed look she went to sit on the sofa. Abhay sat next to her and asked 'So what do I have to do to make up for it?'

'Stop spoiling him for starters.' She said.

'Come on Phulwa it's his age to get spoiled; like I haven't spoiled you enough.' He said with a soft chuckle. She glared at him as a warning.

'He is just training to be a great police officer like me. Just wait, soon he will be taking my position. ACP Aditiya Rai Singh. Right boy?' He asked beaming at him and the toddler gave the best salute he could manage with his tiny hands.

'Really Abhay, leave the task of bringing up the kids to me. If it were in your hands you would have send him to academy right now.'

'Hey! I'm just being helpful you know. Besides you will have plenty to handle in a few more months.' He said tenderly touching her growing tummy.

'Yes, I can see how helpful you are being. Okay then take him,' she said handing Aditiya over to Abhay. 'And give a nice bath, then feed him and get him ready for bed. Okay?'

He looked horrified for a moment as Phulwa started to laugh.

'Fine, I'll help. I know you can't do anything without my help.'

'Yes, I can't. You are my better half.' He said wrapping his arm around both. Aditiya put his arms around their necks tightly and they started to laugh. They smiled holding onto each other, their family just like they had promised to.

*

Few months later they were bestowed with a beautiful baby girl whom they lovingly named Pehr and whom Abhay spoiled even more. They both continued to bring a change in the world; though on a small level but they believed one day these small efforts will make a larger impact. Together they overcame every obstacle that life presented, finding a path to walk together, fulfilling all the vows they had made.

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Edited by Ameres - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Gosh! Seriously it was BEAUTIFUL. Letdown? What letdown are you talking about? Shut up Anu!!!!😳😉

'I said na boy? So it will be a boy.'

'No, no girl!' She said not ready to give up.

LOL, cute cute cute! Can totally see them fighting over this😆

'Protection is needed. Aaj kal ka zaamana bahut kharab hai. If anyone guy ever dares to come near my daughter I'll break his legs and my son will make sure he lands in jail.'


Awww, our Abhay is now really thinking like a papa😍

'Shut up Abhay!' She shouted at him her face twisted in anger.

🤣Loved this. Yes phulwa, sab usne kiya hai🤣 So daat parna hi tha!! Loved this😆

'Don't. You. Dare.' She hissed near his face. Scared at her fierce gaze he only did as told and kept still in the place.

OMG! Labour mein bhi pati par zulm! Ooff🤣🤣

There on the floor laid Abhay knocked out.

Anu!!!!! Tell me you did not do this to Abhay!!🤣 Wow, this is just very naak cutting for us🤣

She couldn't believe it was her own baby that she could give birth to this precious little thing. Tenderly she touched his face, held his hand as his tiny fingers wrapped around her own. His eyes shut closed, his stubby nose, soft mouth, wisps of dark hair on his head- he looked like an angel. She leaned in closer his breath so pure, the untainted innocence, life in its purest form. She smiled down at the little miracle with moist eyes.


*sigh* Beautiful description there Anu. can totally feel the words😊. I think that's exactly how one must feel in such a moment.


Oh! The bit about the election is a masterpiece really!! This is something which should have been in the show and seeing you include it here is just too good to read. You nailed this one😉

She simply sighed and called Aditiya. But got no answer then she saw a chubby little hand holding the back of the sofa and soft giggles coming from behind. Leaning out he peeked at her. His dark hair falling on his forehead, his innocent eyes twinkling with mischief like his father, he gave a little laugh and not waiting to hear his mother out ran to the main door.

Ok! I'm in love with this baby! Aww, he's looking like such a cutie yaar😍 Totally Junior Abhay😊


Oh, I think i'll just have to quote the whole part. Anu, seriously you are the best writer on this forum. It was FLAWLESS. It looked so real and i'm just too in love with the way you described the whole life after baby. Ooo😍 I wish i could jump in that FF and see it infront of me but you painted it so perfectly that it's like im there *sigh*

@names- They are just perfect. We did decide on them but reading it like that just made me realise they fit perfectly.

I want to say so much more really but im speechless so will just thank you for writing that. I don't think i can read it enough times. Beautiful beyond words!

Did i tell you that you are the BEST? Oh even if i did, it's not enough anyway so will keep saying that🤗


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Before anything else ...let me jst tell u...this is by far the most touching...beautiful and heartwarming posts I have come across in alooong time and a very big hug and lots of love to u fr that...😊whole series has been a letdownwhat did u mean by this...dont u ever think like this...u know na how many times I keep telling u to write
I simply lovee all the moments between Abhay and Phulwa...how they argued abt boy and girl and the labour room scene was super cute...I can totally imagine Abhays bechara face..😆😆😆...Phulwa has every rite to show her anger cause he is defintle responsible😉...and he was knocked down...hahaha...thats the best😛
Simply love aaditya and the scene among the three...u have beautifully captured the happy family pic...brilliant👏👏👏...and within two years...another baby on its way...not bad Abhay😆😆...the ending was trully wonderful ...very well done...i really dont think I can actually put in words how much I have liked this...😊😊...thanks once again and waiting fr your next FF...whenever u feellike that is
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: beebutterfly

Gosh! Seriously it was BEAUTIFUL. Letdown? What letdown are you talking about? Shut up Anu!!!!😳😉

Awww, our Abhay is now really thinking like a papa😍

Papa plus ACP, always thinking of breaking something. 😆

🤣Loved this. Yes phulwa, sab usne kiya hai🤣 So daat parna hi tha!! Loved this😆

Haha, yeah. For a moment I was tempted to add such a dialogue but then thought rehne do, the ones who know will make the connection! We all know who is responsible for her state!🤣🤣

OMG! Labour mein bhi pati par zulm! Ooff🤣🤣

Uska haq banta hai! Like you said he is had done all this so ab daant suno! 🤣

Anu!!!!! Tell me you did not do this to Abhay!!🤣 Wow, this is just very naak cutting for us🤣

Sorry, but I just had to! 😆 Abhay maybe our man of steel but here she takes the lead. I have heard that no matter what men cant take the sight in labor room so...I always imagined that he wont be able to take her screams and would faint!! 🤣

*sigh* Beautiful description there Anu. can totally feel the words😊. I think that's exactly how one must feel in such a moment.

No idea myself but just tried to express what I had observed. Glad you liked it. :)

Ok! I'm in love with this baby! Aww, he's looking like such a cutie yaar😍 Totally Junior Abhay😊

Lol, you know my love for Abhay so Jr. Abhay had to come. 😆

Oh, I think i'll just have to quote the whole part. Anu, seriously you are the best writer on this forum. It was FLAWLESS. It looked so real and i'm just too in love with the way you described the whole life after baby. Ooo😍 I wish i could jump in that FF and see it infront of me but you painted it so perfectly that it's like im there *sigh*

@names- They are just perfect. We did decide on them but reading it like that just made me realise they fit perfectly.

I want to say so much more really but im speechless so will just thank you for writing that. I don't think i can read it enough times. Beautiful beyond words!

Did i tell you that you are the BEST? Oh even if i did, it's not enough anyway so will keep saying that🤗

And did I tell you that you are one the sweetest and kindest people around? Seriously, if only the world has a few more people like you it would be a better place to live.

Thank you for your generous praises and acknowledgement. Really cant thank you enough for all the love and support, for sticking by my side like a true friend. Humbled by all the appreciation because I don't think I deserve it. I know what you are going to say to this but lets leave it there. :P

I'm grateful for all the love and compassion you shower and just happy that I have you as my friend. Thank you. ❤️🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mimi_s

Before anything else ...let me jst tell u...this is by far the most touching...beautiful and heartwarming posts I have come across in alooong time and a very big hug and lots of love to u fr that...😊whole series has been a letdownwhat did u mean by this...dont u ever think like this...u know na how many times I keep telling u to write

Thank you so much for your kind words. Really this is a big compliment and I'm grinning happily right now. Thank you for all the love, meant a lot. 😳
I know you do and honestly if it weren't for you and Amis constant support I wouldn't have come so far, so again a big big thank you for all the support. <3

I simply lovee all the moments between Abhay and Phulwa...how they argued abt boy and girl and the labour room scene was super cute...I can totally imagine Abhays bechara face..😆😆😆...Phulwa has every rite to show her anger cause he is defintle responsible😉...and he was knocked down...hahaha...thats the best😛
Haha, I was so expecting that from you! Like I said I was tempted to add something like Phulwa saying 'It's all your fault' but then thought you guys will get to it anyway! And i was right! 🤣
I loved knocking Abhay out! LOL! He was a total bechara there for sure. Phulwa was not going to let him get away so easily. 😆
Glad you liked it and found the humor there. That was the intention! ;)
Simply love aaditya and the scene among the three...u have beautifully captured the happy family pic...brilliant👏👏👏...and within two years...another baby on its way...not bad Abhay😆😆...the ending was trully wonderful ...very well done...i really dont think I can actually put in words how much I have liked this...😊😊...thanks once again and waiting fr your next FF...whenever u feellike that is
@Bold- LOL! I hope that answers your question of how BS controlled himself? 😆

Thank youuu so so SO much for the encouraging words. Really, your every word means a lot to me. A big hearty thank you for being such a sweet, kind and supporting friend! Love ya always! Muah! 🤗🤗

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