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Posted: 13 years ago
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Anu love u love u...thanks a ton fr bringing back my Jealous and possesive Abhay...how much we wanted to see him...bt i guess the writers being all male only gave Abhay chance to tease his patnijee and Phulwa gt all jealous😛...bt since nw we hsve our own female writer...no worries😃...we will gt to read and imagine what we mised out in the serial
So Abhay even wants to controll her thoughts...is it...sounds super duoer HOT😳😳...jst wondering would Abhay ever gt jealous of Shanker?...maybe nt cause she was really a kid then and he was good to her...no idea abt those days cause I never watched it then...wished i had never started watching cause the pain nw is jst sooo...😭
Phulwa resting her head on his shoulders and feeling all her worries drift from her thatssoo symbolic and true
Love the way u write so PLS cont😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: thiku

Always wanted to see something like this in the serial also, Phulwa trying to solve the problems of villagers and Abhay giving his help.But they never bothered to show any of these kinds and very happy that bring this here. Really wanted to see these after Abhay-Phulwa marriage and before Abhay-phulwa love. We can easily show that these sorts of problems and Phulwa's positive influence on it changed Abhay's attitude towards her, cursing TRP. Since we are fulfilling all our unreached dreams here in the form of FFs this is also very much needed.

Same here, always wished to see something similar there but unfortunately we did not get a chance to. Yes, fulfilling those dreams here. Thanks for liking!

Ese kahtha he Phulwa ka palti. do u remember how teased her in the name of Sivani?? poor girl was liying on u peacefully listening to ur heart beats and you?? So this was her turn

Haha, you can say that it was one of getting back at him or...its just that she likes to tease him at times. ;)

This is our ACP Abhay Rai Singh, not that love struck boy. Who even hates hearing Phulwa taking other person's name. Welcome back ACP. was missing you badly.

Me too! Wish to see my sadu Abhay again.

Loved this sentence Anu It was perfect in many sense meaningful also. he always give importance to her feelings and understand her inner most feelings just looking into her eyes. Good sentence and artfully placed it.

Thank you so much for the kind words. Same, loved the bonding they shared, the silent understanding of each other feelings. Truly beautiful.

finally She got a place to place all her worries. Beautiful work Anu. Good writing.

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Thank you so much for all the love and appreciation. Much humbled. 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: vita93

HEH "nothing looked appetizing" - fantastic innuendo set there my friend, simply fantastic. I'm sure she's dying to eat Abhay up as she would every other night😆😆

LOL!! Honestly I did not have that in mind while writing it but thanks for pointing it out. Glad someone is thinking in the right direction! 🤣

@Vaadas: Aww so shweet! Seriously yaar, in real life - believe me such vaadas won't last withing the day!🤣 But sachhi mein, these two are so sweet together, they can truly make it a magical relationship:)

LOL! I know, and Phulwa did not mean that literally. It was just one of showing how much possessive she can about him, how much she loves getting his attention. 😳

😍😍 I'd really like to know what that feels like:))

We all wish to. 😉

Gonna read part 4 soon!:D

Thank you SO much for reading and commenting! :D :D

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mimi_s

Anu love u love u...thanks a ton fr bringing back my Jealous and possesive Abhay...how much we wanted to see him...bt i guess the writers being all male only gave Abhay chance to tease his patnijee and Phulwa gt all jealous😛...bt since nw we hsve our own female writer...no worries😃...we will gt to read and imagine what we mised out in the serial

So Abhay even wants to controll her thoughts...is it...sounds super duoer HOT😳😳...jst wondering would Abhay ever gt jealous of Shanker?...maybe nt cause she was really a kid then and he was good to her...no idea abt those days cause I never watched it then...wished i had never started watching cause the pain nw is jst sooo...😭
Phulwa resting her head on his shoulders and feeling all her worries drift from her thatssoo symbolic and true
Love the way u write so PLS cont😊


You are most welcome, and honestly I had you in mind while writing it. I knew it among all you would be the most happy one with it. Glad you liked it. :)

Aw Mims! Don't be sad. I know how you feel but I have learnt that its no use dwelling over something. True its easier said then done but...guess we all have to move on. Not saying we forget it but accept how it is and let those beautiful memories make us smile rather than making us sad. Now smile please! 🤗

Thank you SO much and I love you for loving it. hehe. :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sorry if the coming parts seem to be disoriented as I'm losing track with the story myself. Just trying to get to a logical conclusion. Short update, please bear with me.

Surprises

Phulwa was busy in work when the phone in the lounge rang. She picked it up and a smile crossed her face as it was Abhay on the other end. He had called her to inform her that the land problem she had discussed with him earlier that week was resolved and the reason he was calling her because it was through Phulwas constant help and ingenious idea that the matter was resolved so quickly. She smiled brightly at his compliments and happier that she was able to save another kid's innocence and childhood.

She thanked Abhay and was about to put the phone down when he informed that tonight there was a party held by Commissioner Sir at his farmhouse and they had to go there. But before that he instructed her to go to their room, check their cupboard as there was a gift waiting for her there. He simply asked her to be dressed in that in the evening.

After putting the phone down Phulwa wanted to run up to the room to see the surprise but just then Thakurian called her out to help her with some work. And rest of the day passed as so. When evening came Phulwa finally had a chance to go to her room. Eagerly she opened the cupboard and found a small box beautifully wrapped. Carefully opening it she found a beautiful black net sari in it. She ran her hand over it feeling the soft texture and a smile played on her lips. Just then the clock chimed 7pm. Uh oh, I'll be late Phulwa thought to herself as Abhay would be here in any minute now and she had little time to get ready. Quickly she got to changing and getting ready for the party.

Almost forty-five minutes later now dressed in the black sari, she stood before the mirror trying to tie the two straps of her halter neck blouse which were to be tied at the back of the neck. Finally she managed to do so and then got down to doing her hair and make-up. She wasn't sure how to go about it as she had never worn such a dress before, so she sat clueless as to what hairstyle would suit with this sari. Deep in thought she did not hear as Gauri came from behind.

'Jijiya kahin ja rahein hain?'

Phulwa looked up at her. 'Haan Gauri woh aaj Commissioner sahab ke ghaar party hai na wahin jana hai. Par dekho na humein samajh hi nahi araha ke kya baal banein.' She said in an annoyed tone.

'Lain hum karte hain.' Saying that Gauri took over the task of doing her hair and make-up. When she finished she moved back and admired her handiwork.

'Jijiye ab tu aap kaamal ki lag rahi hain. Abhayjee tu aap ko dekhte reh jain gey.'

Her hair now tied up in a lose bun with a few tendrils falling on her face, Phulwa looked at herself in the mirror uncertain. She had never worn such a dress before and was feeling extremely conscious. While her one shoulder was covered by the sari the other one and most of her back was left bare thanks to the halter neck blouse, making her feel uncomfortable. She quickly draped the sari palu over it.

Gauri was about to protest over it when they both turned towards the door as they heard Surje calling out for Phulwa. Gauri went to the door and Surje informed that Abhay has sent a car over at home for Phulwa. He is busy in work so won't be able to come home and will directly join Phulwa in the party. Phulwa looked a bit apprehensive at this arrangement but still agreed to go.

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A few minutes later Phulwa was in car on her way to the farmhouse which seemed a long way from the haveli. The road they were passing on now was dark and lonely, with a thick jungle around it. Half an hour later, the car suddenly came to a halt. Phulwa looked up as driver excused himself to check the car. Few moments later he informed that the car had heated up and needed to get some water for it. With that he left.
As seconds ticked by Phulwa grew restless and the driver had turned off the A/C of the car so it was getting hot inside. She decided to step out to get some fresh air. She had just stepped out when she heard a sound like someone was walking. She turned and looked everywhere but there was no one to be seen; just a long empty road stretching on both sides.
Then she heard a rustling in the trees behind her in the jungle. She nearly jumped at the sound and turned towards the sound. Still, no one. Now panicking a bit she called out to the driver but no answer.
She started to pace around looking for some sign of life but there seemed to be none so she decided to walk back home.
She started to walk back when she again heard a crunching sound like someone walking over dry leaves.
Quickly she turned around but just as she did a hand came over her mouth from behind...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AANNNUUU...Suspense...WOW ...I hope and pray that its Abhay and its all his plan and lets hope there is actuaally no [party and Abhay actually will take her away to some shelter 😳😳 and u will write Shelter scene part 2😃...jst joking...take the story in whichever direction u want...the story is nt getting disoriented really its going fine and keep writing😊ooopppsss halter neck blouse😳😳😳...soo much possibilitues😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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So bad anu you can add one more sentence here

hand came over her mouth from behind... she could easily recognize the hands and the fragrance as Abhay's, why u wanted to tadapao us...

But nice work anu. and very good stop...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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You can add one more sentence here, you too brutus Anu, you did not do that, place us all in the end of a suspense pls upload the next part tomorrow itself pls... but this one was good.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh Anu! That was beautiful.😊 👏

haye ACP Abhay gifting Phulwa a black sari. What plans does he have after the party?😆

Phulwa looked up at her. 'Haan Gauri woh aaj Commissioner sahab ke ghaar party hai na wahin jana hai. Par dekho na humein samajh hi nahi araha ke kya baal banein.' She said in an annoyed tone.

LOL, Phulwa annoyed at how to wear her hair is so cute. 😊 Actually shows the transformation she underwent when she got married. Remembering how she used to wear it in a ponytail.😆 Used to love the style *sigh* Our Show!!!

'Jijiye ab tu aap kaamal ki lag rahi hain. Abhayjee tu aap ko dekhte reh jain gey.'

Oh how right you are baby😉 If he's the one who gifted it, you can be sure he already imagined Phulwa in it but still he'll be struck speechless by the sight of Phulwa. That's our sadu Abhay😉

Her hair now tied up in a lose bun with a few tendrils falling on her face, Phulwa looked at herself in the mirror uncertain. She had never worn such a dress before and was feeling extremely conscious. While her one shoulder was covered by the sari the other one and most of her back was left bare thanks to the halter neck blouse, making her feel uncomfortable. She quickly draped the sari palu over it.

LOL, kya sharmana Phulwa? This won't be staying for long on you anyway😉

Quickly she turned around but just as she did a hand came over her mouth from behind...

OHHH Anu *stomps feet* Not fair!!!! You are keeping us hanging there😳😆 So...jungle mein mangal???😉😆

Great piece Anu. 😃Cant wait for the next because i really want to know who's hands are those😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mimi_s

AANNNUUU...Suspense...WOW ...I hope and pray that its Abhay and its all his plan and lets hope there is actuaally no [party and Abhay actually will take her away to some shelter 😳😳 and u will write Shelter scene part 2😃...jst joking...take the story in whichever direction u want...the story is nt getting disoriented really its going fine and keep writing😊ooopppsss halter neck blouse😳😳😳...soo much possibilitues😃


Haha, well you know me and you know what to expect. And uske agay mein kuch nahi keh rahi. 😆
LOL! Yup so many possibilities and I believe Abhay is well aware of all those tabhi he gave her that dress to wear. 😉

Thank you for liking and commenting! *hugs* :D:D

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