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Posted: 13 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: thiku

So bad anu you can add one more sentence here

hand came over her mouth from behind... she could easily recognize the hands and the fragrance as Abhay's, why u wanted to tadapao us...

But nice work anu. and very good stop...


LOL! Whats the hurry? Enjoy the suspense for some time na. 😆

Yes yes, uploading the next part in a little while. Thank you so much, glad you liked it! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: beebutterfly

Oh Anu! That was beautiful.😊 👏

haye ACP Abhay gifting Phulwa a black sari. What plans does he have after the party?😆

What he plans for every night but unfortunately doesnt get it!! 🤣

LOL, Phulwa annoyed at how to wear her hair is so cute. 😊 Actually shows the transformation she underwent when she got married. Remembering how she used to wear it in a ponytail.😆 Used to love the style *sigh* Our Show!!!

Same! I really liked the simple long braid. It was so unique, so Phulwa. Unlike other show heroines this one wasnt always dressed for a party with hair immaculately in place. She was...different in a good way. Sigh...miss them.

Oh how right you are baby😉 If he's the one who gifted it, you can be sure he already imagined Phulwa in it but still he'll be struck speechless by the sight of Phulwa. That's our sadu Abhay😉

Haha, I wonder was he imagining her in sari or...I guess he must have done both. Mind mein hi practice! 😉🤣

LOL, kya sharmana Phulwa? This won't be staying for long on you anyway😉

So right you are!! Thats what i was thinking kya faida after a while nothing will be left!! 🤣
OHHH Anu *stomps feet* Not fair!!!! You are keeping us hanging there😳😆 So...jungle mein mangal???😉😆
I dont know! Only Abhay knows what he plans to do. So wait patiently. 😉
Great piece Anu. 😃Cant wait for the next because i really want to know who's hands are those😉
Thank youuu! 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
Anu ...hum bhi online ..tum bhi...SS kahan???? I think I have worn the halter neck instead of phulwa and seducing Abahy and thats why the delay...😛...Aur intezaar nehi hota😃😃...getting as impatient as Abhay😆😆What he plans for every night but unfortunately doesnt get it!!
What is this Phulwa...neglecting your hubby like this...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: mimi_s

Anu ...hum bhi online ..tum bhi...SS kahan???? I think I have worn the halter neck instead of phulwa and seducing Abahy and thats why the delay...😛...Aur intezaar nehi hota😃😃...getting as impatient as Abhay😆😆What he plans for every night but unfortunately doesnt get it!!

What is this Phulwa...neglecting your hubby like this...😆


Haha next part coming up bus thoda intezaar. Woh kya haina raat ko i get more ideas to add and then subah uth ke make changes so was just doing that. 😆😆

Dont be so impatient! Intezaar ka fruit will be sweet sweet! 😉

LOL! She is not neglecting him but making him learn the importance of patience. And like I always say that if you start getting something in excess then it loses its charm. So, thoda thoda have fun! Thats Phulwa philosophy! 😉🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
Woh kya haina raat ko i get more ideas to add and then subah uth ke make changes so was just doing that
anu I am sure u gt HOT ideas at nite...so pls dont change all of that😉...Ok going to have lunch nw...will come back later😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: mimi_s

Woh kya haina raat ko i get more ideas to add and then subah uth ke make changes so was just doing that

anu I am sure u gt HOT ideas at nite...so pls dont change all of that😉...Ok going to have lunch nw...will come back later😊


Lol, I'm not sure how hot you are going to find the next update. Sab se hot tu SR thi...too tough a competition. This one isn't that much but I hope you like it. :)

Enjoy your lunch. Me too off after posting the teaser update. ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Crime of Passion

She struggled but the hand was too strongly clamped over her mouth. Her eyes shot open wide and her hands went up to pry her mouth free. But another hand came over stopping her from do so. She struggled to get free but the hold was too strong. Then she felt something cold, hard against her back. She stopped struggling as she realized what it was; a pistol. She knew any further movement could be dangerous so she stood still but then she realized her hands being tied. A second later darkness clouded her vision. She resisted the next movements as the strong arms holding her dragged her backwards. She found herself being pushed inside a car.

'Kua...kuan ho tum? Dekho yeh tum sahi nahi kare...mere pati Joint Commissioner hain agar unhe pata chala na tu tumhari khair nahi.' Phulwa said trying to put up a brave front, but got no reply.

'Mein keh rahi hoon mujhe chod do warna acha nahi hoga. Himmat hai tu mujhe kholo mein tumhein dikhati hoon-' Her next words died in her mouth as she felt a finger on her lips stopping her my continuing any further.

She gulped as she felt warm breath near her face and then a short whisper 'Shh'

After that Phulwa sat quietly all the way through until she felt the car stopping and again the strong pair of hands dragging her out and making her move forward against her will. They seemed to be in an open place as they walked on an uneven ground and she felt cool wind touching her skin.

Finally they reached their destination she supposed because her captivator stopped and it felt as he was moving away. Phulwa taking the opportunity again tried to free her hands and she had managed to lose the cloth tying her hands when she felt that hand again holding her hands.

She stopped, her heart racing now. But then to her surprise the hand actually opened the knot setting her hands free. As a reflex her hands went up to remove the cloth on her eyes but stopped as the pair of hands holding her arms brought them down on her side.

Next she felt hot breath tingling her skin as a pair of lips brushed against her neck. She stood erect, she knew she should move, run even but...she simply stood there paralyzed by his touch.

She felt a hand running along the length of her arm making her heartbeat even faster. Slowly holding her by the shoulders her captivator turned her around and cupped her face.

For a moment her breathing almost stopped as she felt him coming close. His breath mingled with hers as his face now dangerously close to her.

The tip of his nose touched hers and she tilted her head up; her lips slightly apart now as she waited to feel the warmth of his mouth on hers.

It should be feeling wrong, run her mind said but her body disobeyed. The captivator leaned closer but stopped as the dark eyes studied her.

She waited to for the kiss that never came instead a voice calling her name broke her trance.

'Phulwa?'

The familiar voice that she had come to depend upon, love; the voice that made her name sound special. Slowly she pulled the cloth from her eyes as a devious smiled spread across her face. She opened her eyes to meet his fierce gaze.

'Tum…tumhein koi farak nahi pada?' Abhay asked Phulwa livid.

She observed him for a moment, dressed in a new black suit and white shirt, his hair slightly ruffled, his jaw set tightly in a grimace he looked every inch of the devil he was playing. But then seeing his anger and confusion she couldn't help but laugh that she tried to stifle.

'What?! You are laughing now? Seriously Phulwa! Tum kisi ko aise…kaise?' he asked exasperated now.

Phulwa looked at him calmly and replied, 'Woh isi liye kyun ke hum jante the ke woh aap hain.'

Moving closer she put her arms around his neck and continued, 'Aap ki har saans se wakif hain hum.'

Abhay looked deep into her big black eyes, his fixation that he seemed to had no control over and found his answer. It was quite true, Phulwa knew his every move, recognized his every touch. For his proximity affected her like none other. Slowly the frown turned into a little grin.

'You'll have to pay for this. Ab nahi bacho gi.' Abhay said with a naughty smile playing in his eyes.

'Yeh aap ki ghalti hai. Aise mujhe yahan lane ka matlab?' She asked with mock annoyance.

'Tumhare saath reh kar humne bhi dacoit wale kaam seekh ley hain.' With that they both started to laugh.

He stopped while she continued to do so and he admired her beautiful face, how it lit up when she laughed the sound of her laughter music to him.

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Okay, its a short update but before you guys hit me with daande I'll post the next update tonight itself. Till then enjoy this one! ;)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Next she felt hot breath tingling her skin as a pair of lips brushed against her neck. She stood erect, she knew she should move, run even but...she simply stood there paralyzed by his touch.

She felt a hand running along the length of her arm making her heartbeat even faster. Slowly holding her by the shoulders her captivator turned her around and cupped her face.

For a moment her breathing almost stopped as she felt him coming close. His breath mingled with hers as his face now dangerously close to her

I was feeling very scared reading these lines cause i knew it would b Abhay and how he would react later if phulwa doesnt struggle against her capivators touch...bt thank god Our Phulwa always knew that it as her hubby😉
good move Abhay...i think he was looking fr some spice in his love life thats why the change of location...and anu u even made Abhay point his gun at phulwa😛...
Loved your short and sweet update...and happy cause it will b updated tonite itself😊
Crime of passion...ooopppsss...love the title
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
Anu for the first time jumped in your story frm the line the hot air tingled her skin to the part where Abhay revealed since I am feeling too bad, even though I know it will be Abhay only none other than him, something strange was there and that is just because of ur writing 👏 👏 well done anu. so ur are updating it today night itself ok then waiting fr that...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mimi_s

Next she felt hot breath tingling her skin as a pair of lips brushed against her neck. She stood erect, she knew she should move, run even but...she simply stood there paralyzed by his touch.

She felt a hand running along the length of her arm making her heartbeat even faster. Slowly holding her by the shoulders her captivator turned her around and cupped her face.

For a moment her breathing almost stopped as she felt him coming close. His breath mingled with hers as his face now dangerously close to her

I was feeling very scared reading these lines cause i knew it would b Abhay and how he would react later if phulwa doesnt struggle against her capivators touch...bt thank god Our Phulwa always knew that it as her hubby😉
good move Abhay...i think he was looking fr some spice in his love life thats why the change of location...and anu u even made Abhay point his gun at phulwa😛...
Loved your short and sweet update...and happy cause it will b updated tonite itself😊
Crime of passion...ooopppsss...love the title


Lol yeah, Abhay was playing and Phulwa decided to play along. A little fun and adventure to keep the romance alive. 😉
@Gun- Yes, jab kidnap kar hi raha hai so lets get the real feel na. 😆

Thank youuu so happy you liked it! :D:D
Waise I had thought will but now i'm in double mind...should i or should i not? Hm...

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