Nibir SS-when truth came in open pt23 updated on pg86(20/12)

Posted: 10 years ago
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hey all ...
my name is Neha...
i not so new here but never ever post any stories...
i rarely come to IF , Just read ffs ss etc 😆
pehle i used to read abhiya/rishabala stories
then ishra and now m just drooling over Nibir...
i hav imagined many stories but never wrote them down!!!
i m too lazy to write...😆😆
but my nibir made do this also...😳
guys pehli baar kuch likh rahi Hu!!!
i hope u all like it!!!
and advance me sorry bhi!!!
pata nai ap sab kaisi lage ye story...😲
so here it is...

Nibir SS - When the truth came in open...




He broke down...
He he was called illegitimate child...
Anyone in this situation will break down like hell...
That word is enough for anyone to get shattered ...
He came to India to find his roots..
But this was not what he expected!!
He did not knew that his world will be shattered like this!!
Before knowing all this At least he have an Identity!!
Yes he is non other than Kabir...
He is step brother of viraj Singh rathor!!!
When this truth came out those bitter words by viraj & buaji were killing him inside...
He was was totally shattered but collected himself & came back to his house...
Nisha was witnessing all this ...
But she have nothing to say...
She was feeling bad for Kabir...
When Kabir came back home Nisha followed him!!
But then aftr reaching their Kabir burst out his feeling...
He was crying vulnerably...
Nisha can not see him like this...
He was the same Kabir who makes her laugh in any kind of situation...
He was the same person who is in fun mood every time but this time he was so badly hurt that he was literally crying alot...
Kabir's Pov
What is mu fault in all this???
What hav i done???
Why me???
He felt a hand on his shoulder...
Yes it was his wifey Nisha..
Its been a more than a week when they got married!!
A three month contract marriage but they are best frnds , they care they share...
They Fight , they Laugh...
Everything was so good...
There bonding was becoming even more stronger with each day...
Days are going so smoothly ..
Until the day came when that bitter truth came in open...

Precap: Nibir emotion convo & a Lil romance *__*
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How was it?? Plzz dont throw tomatos on me!!
It was first time i wrote something...
Hope u like it! Plzz tell i should i continue or not?





INDEX


PART 1

PART 2

PART 6

PART 7

PART 8
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Fab start dear! Kudos! cont soon! :)
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Awwwh! This is nice and NiBir are cuteee!
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Nice start dear... 👍🏼
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Its very nice.. Thanks for writing in English.. Please continue soon..
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awww that's so sweet...
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