Originally posted by: arviabhigya
Sorry for d late comments but was busy so couldn't comment earlier
Firstly, the banner is perfect 👏 😊
Secondly, ur writing speed is too good 😆 3 updates in such a short span ! I was like I need to post a comment before she updates d story again 😆 Your fast typing skills are a boon for ur readers 😆
Now coming to the story, Loved d NiBir nok-jhok 😆 It is a delight to read their fights 😆
Also u hv been adept in bringing out d growth in their relationship with Kabir being so worried for Nisha and being ready to sacrifice his dream cz he can't see her in pain.
Laxmis dialogue " Meri jal Ki Beti hath chali gayi" was very funny 😆
So Nibir can't stay without each other& r eager to meet the other 😆
Continue soon 😉