Nibir SS-when truth came in open pt23 updated on pg86(20/12) - Page 53

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: aNibirFan

Part 22

Ek din me itne shocks😆😆
Nisha's feeling good hmm I like her
They should get punished!!!😡
Argh! I will kill them if not Kabir !
Relax relax neeru
Hmm so very very correct point you noticed👍🏼
They are to be punished otherwise they could do the same with others too
Liked the ending scene



hmmm yeah...
ye instantly mind me aya tha likhte likhte
meri story to bas ek choti si TS thi but likhte likhte mujhe maza ane laga and I keep on writing and then nisha k past ka revelation track I felt like adding and uske baad ye punishment wala instantly agyaa mind me
tere jaise mujhe b gussa aya aur ye sab likh diya
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: aNibirFan

Nisha kab karegi realize her feelings???
Aur use b to time lagega naa yaar
Wait a min...ye discontinued hai kya?😲😲
Nahiii! Aisa mat kaho😒
Phir cliffhanger pe chod gyi tum Neha
Plz plz please plz pretty plz very pretty plz update this if this wasn't the last part😃
Vese yaar ye last nai hona chaiye naaNisha ka confession baaki hai abi😃😳
Plz update this soon too Neha

Loving this story👏😳



nai nai
this is not the end aur na hi discontinued karne koi irada h but didn't write anything abt it yet
actually as I said ... ye nisha k pilani wale incident wasn't in the story wen I start but I added so much in this story while writing it!!
and I m stuck with it now!! kabir ne jitni badi badi baatein Ki h last part ab uske hisab se kuch bada Karna b h 😆
and me sahi likh nai paa rai hu
story almost climax me hi hai ab ye
bas nisha k criminal ko punishment milegi and love realization b hoga obvio 😆
romantic scene dalne Ki b try karungi me 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ___Neha___



lurching means?? 😲
meri language bahut week h yar 😆 don't mind
and thanx for appreciation 😳
baki ka to pata nai but dialogue in Hindi .. I think me ache khase likh leti hu 😆
BRUSH KARNA nai samja? 😲
tune kabir drink Ki h? 😛
drink karne le smell ati h muh se !!
don't think I have any experience 🤣
waise meine b kabi drink nai Ki hu 🤣
but still I know 😆
isliye brush karwaya hoga shayad 😆
honestly mujhe yaad nai h kya soch k kya likha tha bcoz its been ages now !! but I guess yahi reason hoga

Lurching matlab Google search karo😆
Accha smell ha right 🤣🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ___Neha___




tu kabir Ki image bigadne me kyu lagi hui h 🤣
uska nasha raat ko hi utar gya tha remember? 😆
YEAH mujhe musical stories ka bada shok h bygod 😈

Ha uska nasha utar gaya tha par chaate se😆
Nisha ko nimbu paani ki zaroorat pad gyi aur janab ka sirf thappad se utar gya🤣 Neha not fair🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ___Neha___



nai nai
this is not the end aur na hi discontinued karne koi irada h but didn't write anything abt it yet
actually as I said ... ye nisha k pilani wale incident wasn't in the story wen I start but I added so much in this story while writing it!!
and I m stuck with it now!! kabir ne jitni badi badi baatein Ki h last part ab uske hisab se kuch bada Karna b h 😆
and me sahi likh nai paa rai hu
story almost climax me hi hai ab ye
bas nisha k criminal ko punishment milegi and love realization b hoga obvio 😆
romantic scene dalne Ki b try karungi me 🤣

I'm happy ye discontinued nai hai😃😃
I'm waiting to read further whenever you update kindly pm me😳
Hope that time comes in near future 😊
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: aNibirFan


Lurching matlab Google search karo😆
Accha smell ha right🤣🤣




a humble request ...
angrezi k bhari bhari shabdo ka upyog mujhe bechari abla nari me na Karen 😕
dhanyavaad

smell 🤣 🤣
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: aNibirFan


Ha uska nasha utar gaya tha par chaate se😆
Nisha ko nimbu paani ki zaroorat pad gyi aur janab ka sirf thappad se utar gya🤣Neha not fair🤣



tune laxmi me k hath ka thappad khaya h kya?? 😛
u don't know its effect 🤣
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: aNibirFan


I'm happy ye discontinued nai hai😃😃
I'm waiting to read furtherwhenever you update kindly pm me😳

Hope that time comes in near future
😊



@bold
Ameen

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Posted: 8 years ago

Sirf Aameen se kaam nahi chalega😆
you have to write and post for that😆
Whenever you are free kindly thoda taras khaa ke update all your stories😊
Would love to read
Posted: 8 years ago

iHey guys...
Kaise ho sab?
Waise to ye res update k liye nai tha but neeru and annu ki excitement dekhke meine socha kar hi deti hu update!!
Pehle hi bol deti Hu bahut time baad likhna restart kiya h so plzx forgive if me sabki expectations poori na karpaun issstory se ya kuch b ajeeb Sa likha Hua lage to 🤣
Sorry in advance...
Ok bahut baatein ho gyi ..
Ab read ur update!! Jo Ki 8 months baad de rai Hu me ... 😆

To ye Previous part ka link

PART 22

Enjoy reading.. 😉
Ignore typos

When the Truth came in Open

Chapter 23

Days passed ...
Kabir was trying every possible way he can to reach them..
He didnt involved police in this... He himself searched for them with help of his contacts and internet and social sites...
Aftr searching for a week finally he got succeeded in it... Yes he found them ...
How??
Let's get back to the day 1 of the week
Kabir was walking in the garden tensed wen he bumped into someone ... And it was non other than shantnu...

He has a friend who works in a detective agency.. Named shantnu...
month back , Kabir clicked some photograph for shantnu .. Without any charges.. He didn't hav money to pay Kabir..bcoz he already have given money he got from agency to a photographer who ditch him on last moment, Kabir help him that time.. He was really thankful to him... He promised he will help wen ever Kabir needs him...

Both greeted each other.. And seeing Kabir tensed he asked the matter...
Kabir: nothing yar ... Bas aise hi..
Shantnu: Kabir mein tumhe zyada to nai janta but han tum hamesha hanste muskurate rehne wale logo me se ho.. Aur is waqt tumhare chahre pe saaf dikh raha hai Ki tum Kisi baat ko leke bahut pareshan ho..."
Kabir just smiled sadly listening to him
"you can share with me...ho sakta hai me tumhari koi help kar saku?"

Kabir smiled & thanked him for saying that... bid him bye and again start walking n thinking abt how to reach the culprits... But His words echoed in Kabir's ears "shayad me tumhari koi help kar saku.. Help kar saku.. Help kar saku..."
The idea of seeking his help came in his mind and he ran aftr him to stop him... Who had gone a Lil far from him...
"Shantanu... Wait,.." Kabir shouted
Shantanu stopped in track and turned to look at Kabir...
Kabir reached to him breathing heavily as he ran so fast...
"kya Hua Kabir??"
He saked
"You were right... I m tensed... And may b u can help me out..." he said catching on his breaths
"i would b more than happy to help u Kabir... Tell me how can i??"
Kabir told him the whole thing... Abt pillani n his promise to sumone that he will find n punish her culprits...
He didn't disclosed nisha's identity to him... Just said he ws doing this all for sumone really special ❤️

Shantanu agreed to help him and with his help and lil clues which nisha gave they started their search
Day 1 ends here

Nisha told that Kabir they were 5 friends , and their school name "st steves high school" also , & unme se ek ka naam yash tha!!
(there's a Lil bit addition in Pilani topic according to my story 😊 )

Kabir and shantnu(who is now a dectective himself of same agency) hacked the computer of that school with help of hacker and retrieved all the details abt that pillani trip 8 years back.. And they got to know that only 6 students were represting that st Steve high school in which 5 boys and a girl was there!!
They collected all the info they got abt those 5 , and it was very clear now that ye wahi 5 log hain jinhe wo dhoondh rahe hain!!
So with their names and other info they got, they searched on internet and different social sites abt them...
It took them a week to finally reach them...

Those 5 boys are still friends and they were kids of rich and respected families of Rajkot

Yashwant rana(yash)
Shashank saha
Nilesh Shah (Neil)
Sachin agarwal
Rohit Saxena

Kabir collected all the needed info abt them with help of shantanu and thanked him told him that he will handle everything now but shantanu insisted to help him more until he punish them all.
Aftr lil argue , Kabir said that he will call him if anytime he will need his help and again thanked him then came back home.
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Now the question was "How to punish them?"
Kabir was sitting on sofa in KN house and thinking abt it
Nisha came and saw him lost and a mischief came in her mind
She came to him from behind
"Booo" she shouted Kabir got scared with sudden sound and seeing his reaction she laughed
"wat is this yar nisha?aise koi.."
"arey aisa b kya kiya meine? Jo itna chidd ra h?"
Nisha cut him off seeing his irritated face and asked
"aur tu kahan khoya hai?"
Kabir looked down then looked at her and said "Kisi se kuch vaada kiya hai bas usi ko poora karne Ki koshish me hu..."
Nisha understood wat he was talking abt they had an eye lock which she broke aftr a while saying "wo sab chhod dekh me kya layi hu?"
She went to table where she hav kept the things she brought before scaring kabir
Kabir also turned to look there and went near the table as the delicious smell attracted him
"Nisha... Aloo ka paratha, chhole , lassi , gajar ka halwa .. Aur aur .. Kheer b" he shouted seeing the food
Nisha smiled seeing his reactions
"but ye sab?" he asked confused
"Ghar gyi Thi aur wahan se sabne apne laadle damaad k liye ye sab bheja hai!!" she replied rolling her her eyes.
Kabir noticed she was Lil jealous but choose to ignore and concentrate on food .. Nisha too didn't stretched it.
She served the food and started telling him what was sent by whom
"Ye aloo ka paratha maa Ki taraf se.." she said pointing towards paratha
"Ye chhole aur lassi Aman ne bheji hai apne bhai k liye.. Aur Ye kheer vimla taiji Ki taraf se.."
"So sweet yar.. Tere gharwale kitne ache hain.. Bhagwan kare aise in laws sabko mile.." he said and sat on chair taking the aloo paratha plate and started eating it. Nisha also joined him.
" But nisha, ye gajar ka halwa wo kisne Diya ?? Tune bataya nai?" Kabir asked as he picked up the bowl of halwa to eat
Nisha didn't replied
"chup kyu hai bol?"
"pehle tu khaa phir batati Hu"
"Bolna.." Kabir said and ate a spoon full of it
"kaisa hai?" she asked all excited
Now Kabir didn't replied and ate one more spoon
"bol na Kabir kaisa hai??"
"kyu jab meine pucha kisne banaya to tune jawab Diya kya?"
"Han to deti Hu na pehle Bata to kaisa bana hai?"
Kabir are one more spoon and asked looking at nisha who was eagerly waiting for her response
"Thik thak hi hai.." he replied
Nisha's smile faded and she asked sadly "bas thik thak?"
He asked nisha to come near with her hands and said
"actually.. Bakwas hai!! But kya hai na tere gharwalo ne itne pyaar de bheja hai isliye kha raha Hu"
Nisha became more sad listening this... Kabir was noticing all her expressions all the while
" waise Tu itni excited kyu horai Thi janne k liye?"
"Kuch nai jane de" she said getting up from table
Kabir hold her hand and made her sit again
She looked at him then looked away saying "kya hai?"
Kabir took a spoon of halwa and fed her
"Halwa bahut bahut bahut acha bana hai Nisha" he said smilingly
Nisha also felt it was really good aftr eating it.
"Halwa to sach me tasty hai" she said excitedly snatching the bowl and ate on more spoon
"idhar de mera hai me khaunga"
Kabir said again snatching it & started eating actually finishing it he sat on the table(not chair) turning to the other side
Nisha came in his front and smack his shoulder saying "tune jhoot kyu bola k halwa bura bana hai?" he ignored and again turned other side to finished the halwa
"Kabir yar kya bhukkad Ki tarah thooste jaa raha hai? Tera khana nai chhinungi me .. Jwab dena .. Kyu jhoot bola tune?" nisha asked again coming in front of him frowning
Kabir looked at her "kyunki mujhe kuch confirm karna Tha?" he said getting up
"confirm? kya?"
He moved towards kitchen taking all the plate bowl etc
"kya confirm karna Tha bolega?"
Nisha asked coming in his way
""yahi Ki Jo me soch raha Hu wo sai hai ya nai?"
His answer made her more confused
Putting all utensils in sink
He turned to her and asked smilingly
"Halwa tune banaya Tha na?"
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To be continued...

notr: i told u all mujhe nai pata meine kya likha h 🤣
and roopa ye Tera Shantanu hi hai 🤣
hashh..finally updated...
Edited by ___Neha___ - 8 years ago

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