Nibir SS-when truth came in open pt23 updated on pg86(20/12) - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
😳

Originally posted by: Lekha.Mayur4eva

wow.😊

your nibir awkward phase is better than what they showed on nauc..acc to me.
please wrtie soon. cant wait

awww😳
really??
thankyou so much dear ^_^
Posted: 10 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: zainabawoon

read all the parts in one go,Awesome yaar!!! i loved how nisha could feel kabir's pain and her eye cried on its own seeing him crying Kbir's pain was 😭😭 As much as i'm looking forward to the half brother truth coming out on the show,i am now dreading the moment when he finds out he is an illegitimate child that hug and almost kiss was ☺️ Altogether it was really heart wrenching and soulful👏

awww thats so sweet ^_^
thanx for so much love & appreciation
Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Thankyou all for such lovely comments...
I'll try to update next part tomorrow...
Posted: 10 years ago
#34

This story was supposed to be a TS
main 3rd part me end karne wali thi isko! Aftr that awkward moment of Nibir directly few days leap and then climax...
But after seeing such a good response from u all I decided to extend it!! And ab i'll write what happen in between those days jisko me skip karke direct climax dene wali thi!! Iss liye update me itni der ho gayi ... Sorry for this much delay...
Hope u all like this one...

So here you go...

part4
Nisha reached gangwal house...
But she was too confused...
And thinking That
What she will say to all when they ask why she came here at this time??
Its 6:30pm evening...
Nisha to herself:
"Nisha Nisha .. Tu yahan aa to gayi par ab agey kya??? Tu kya bolegi sab ko ? Kyu ayi h yahan?? Kya bahana banayegi? Aur Kabir ... Jab sab puchenge ke Kabir kahan hai ? Tu akele kyu ayi hai? Kya jawaab degi tu sab ko?? Ek ke baad ek sawaalo k teer chalne shuru ho jayenge!!! "
Then she closed her eyes took a deep breadth and...
"Jo bhi ho , ab wapas ghar nahi jaa sakti!!! Ab aa hi gayi Hu to Jo hoga dekha jayega!! I'll manage...
Ghar jake Kabir ko face karne se achcha hai inn sab ke sawaal ko hi face kar lu...
Haan yahi thik rahega!!! "
.
She stepped inside the gangwal house ...

She was walking in corridor thinking that what excuse she will give...? Just then she saw her mother coming towards her tensed...

She panicked ..
And immediately turned around...
And murmured that "Nisha apni shakal thik kar .. Warna Teri maa ko 1 sec nahi lagega ye guess karne me ke kuch gadbad hai..."

Suddenly she felt a hand on her shoulder...
Nisha turned...
Laxmi:(in tensed voice) achcha Hua Tu aa gayi nishu... Main tujhe bulane hi wali Thi!!!
Nisha asked tensed: kya Hua maa?? Aap itni pareshan Kyu lag rahi hain???
Laxmi: pareshan na Hoon to kya karu??? Mere to kuch samajh me hi nahi aa raha ... Main kya karu iss ladke ka??
Nisha: baat kya hai maa?? Ap mujhe kyu bulana chahti thi?? Aur kya hua hai?? Suuku ne kuch kiya? Ya bunty ne?
Laxmi: "Suuku nahi ... Ye bunty... Bunty bahut bigadta jaa raha hai...
Padhai pe bilkul dhyaan nahi hai uska!! Meri to sunta hi nahi hai bilkul bhi!! "
Laxmi added "Pata hai uske teacher ka phone aya Tha , Wo keh rahe the ke Maths Bunty me Fail ho Gaya hai!!!"
Nisha: kya??
Laxmi: Haan.. Mera matlabbb...
Nisha : "LAXMI RELAX MEEE..."
Told her mom to calm down...
"Bunty maths me fail ho Gaya hai na?? Ruko main dekhti Hu usko.. Aap tension mat lo!!!" Nisha said
Nisha left from there towards Bunty's room...
before she could go a little far...
Laxmi asked her to stop...
Laxmi: 1minute nishu...
Nisha murmured "mar gaye, ab sawaalo ke teer chalne wale hai... Achcha khasa bunty ka bahana mi Gaya Tha!! Par ab to..."
Laxmi came to her ans asked "kya badbada rahi hai?"
Nisha: "Nahi .. Kuch nahi..! Kuch bhi to nahi maa.."
Laxmi:waise Tu ne bataya nahi tu yahan, iss waqt kya kar rahi hai???
Nisha: wooohhh... Maaa ...
Woh main...
Laxmi: kya Nishu?? Bol??
Nisha: "haan wo na ,, mujhe apki bahut yaad aa rahi thi isliye milne chali ayi!! " and she hugged her mother...
Laxmi pushed her back...
And said: "bahane mat bana Nishu.. Saaf saaf bata .. Kya hua hai?? " *asked angrily*
Just then her papa came there...
Ramesh: are kya ho raha hai yahan pe?? Arey nishu Tu yahan??
Nisha : ummm... Dekho na papa , maa ko mere ane Ki Zara bhi khushi nahi Hui!! Mujhe aap sab Ki yaad aa rahi Thi to milne chali ayi... Par maa ko baat baat pe tension lene ki adat ho gayi hai!! Ab aap hi samjhao inko!!!"
Ramesh: arey Laxmi kyu sata rahi ho meri beti ko... Ab kya apne ghar ane ke liye usey koi reason chahiye...? Jaa beta tu andar jaa... Dolly jawalu sukku tujhe dekh ke bahut khush ho jayenge..."
"Thik hai papa .. Main unn se milkar ati hu.. Ap maa to sambhalo..." Nisha replied
And left from there quickly!!
.
After walking some distance...
Nisha to herself...
"Bal bal Bach gayi Nisha..
Agar papa sahi waqt par nahi ate to Tu gayi Thi samjho..."
Sigh of relief...
Then she came to a room where her cousins, including Dolly , Umesh , Aman , Jwala & Sukku were sitting together.. Dull..
She entered in the room and shouted...
"hiii guys... "
They all were so happy to see Nisha...
All shouted together...
"Nishuuu..."
Everyone hugged Nisha...
Then Dolly said : " Tu to hame forgets gayi hai Nisha... Jab se Teri shadi Hui na message karti na koi phones... Bas hum hi Jo subah sham tujhe remembers karte rehte hai..."
Nisha: "dolly di ap aisa Kyu bol re ho?? Apko lagta k main aap sab bhool jaungi?? Kabhi nahi!!! "
Then suddenly Aman said: "Lekin nishu Tu iss waqt yahan?? Sab thik to hai na?? Kahi Tu Kabir se lad jhag ke to nahi ayi hai?? Nishu Tu...
Before Aman could say anything else, Nisha interrupted her and said: " offoo... Phir se wahi same question...!! Yar mujhe apne ghar par ane ke liye bhi ab Kisi excuse Ki zaroot padegi kya? Bahar maa papa ko explanation de ke ayi aur ab tum log shuru ho gaye... Main ek kaam karti Hu wapas hi chali jaati Hu... Shayad mera yahan Ana Kisi ko pasand hi nahi aya!!" Nisha turned back and acted as she is going back!!!
Sukku grabbed her hand and said "ruk nishu... Tu kahin nahi jayegi!! " Looking at Aman he said: "kya Aman bhabi aap bhi... Chhodo ye sab baat..."
"Waise bhi hum sab isko kitna miss kar rahe the... Achcha Hua ke ye aa gayi " he added
Jwala said in excitement "Haan nishu bro achcha Hua ap aa gaye... Itne time ke baad hum sab cousins sath me hai... Aj hum bahut masti karenge... Pehle ke jaise..."
Everyone smiled and
They all group hugged...

To be continued...


Precap:Nibir cute talk & pillow fight


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So how was it??
I know no nibir or Kabir scenes were there.. Sorry for that!!
Next part will be of Nibir only

I hope u all liked it!!
Please do leave ur precious comments below

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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Maths Bunty main fail ho gya lol 😆
Laxmi..Relaxxx me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
last two parts were great..very realistic..waiting for NiBir moments! update soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
maths bunty main fail ho gaya🤣laxmi relax me😆
nice update dear but no nibir😔
but loved cousins bonding
continue soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Cousins scene!! nice. i miss them on the show.
can't wait for cute talk and pillow fight
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Lovely update
Waiting for nibir cute moments together
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
awwwh niceyyy...MISSED KABIRAAA WAAAY TOO MUUUCH :'/

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