Nibir SS-when truth came in open pt23 updated on pg86(20/12) - Page 42

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsm tha ..thank god lakshmi ne nai bataya nai to I would be cryin here😭
Posted: 9 years ago

Hi all,,,,.
Uff finally i completed this chapter...
Don't know wat i have wrote,,, Jo Mann me aya likhti gyi,,, hope its good...
Chalo no more talks now,,,
Time for readings,,,
HERE YOU GO...

When the Truth came in Open

Chapter 22

Kabir and nisha was still siting together all silent...
Both have nothing to talk...
Its been more than an hour since they both were sitting all quiet... stealing glances at each other ... Without getting caught by each other...
Finally Kabir broke the silence...
"ah... " he said holding his stomach "bahut bhook lag rahi hai!! Kitni der se kuch khaya nai meine!!"
Nisha felt a Lil comfortable as she got a topic to talk and reduce the awkwardness between them...
"Ruk Mein kuch lati hu khane ke liye..." she smiled and got to leave for kitchen
Kabir grabbed her hand she turned to him...
"Nisha... Tu b na... Pura din shop me kaam karke ayi aur ab phir tujhe kaam karna hai? Not done!! Tu ja fresh ho ja aur Mein Jake apna fav food(bbj) banata Hun... "
Nisha smiled and replied
"Thik hai.."
Both smiled at each other and moved to the places as decided...
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Nibir were sitting on dining table eating bbj made by kabir
While eating something stuck kabir's Mind and he was confused whether to ask her this or not?
Nisha saw him lost somewhere
"kahan khoya hai Kabir??"
"Tujhse kuch puchna tha.." he said absent mindedly
"kya puchna hai??"
She asked
Kabir realized what he said
He looked at her then looking down mumbled to him self
"ye kya kar diya kabire.. Puchna tha but abhi ke abhi puchne ki kya zarurat hai??pehle se wo pareshan hai ! Sab kuch ek hi din me karna zaruri hai kya?? I shouldn't have said that!! Dhyaan kahan rehta hai mera!! Ab kya karu? Puchu ke nai?pata nai kaise react karegi?"
Nisha looked at him and she also got lost in her thoughts
Nisha(monologue): ab kya puchna hai ise? Konsi baat reh gyi hai? Propose to kardiya mujhe!! Ab kya bolna baki ho sakta hai?pata nai ek hi din me kitne shock dega ye mujhe?"
"nisha wo..wo.. Mein.. Wo... Wo Mein.. Actually.. "
Nisha face palmed on his stammering "chalu ho gya iska atakna!!"
As they were done with food(bbj) , nisha stood up , took the plates from table and moved towards kitchen
She was half her way ,Kabir stood up , came near her and hold her hand
"Nisha... Wait..."
She turned..
"bol..."
"Wo mujhe ye puchna tha ki..."
"jaldi bol na yar!! Kyu mera time waste kar raha hai?mujhe bahut kaam hai Kabir... Jo b bolna hai fatafat bol.. Nai to mujhe jane de .. " she replied irritated and angrily
"ohk ohk.. Relax .. Gussa mat ho!! Mein tera time nai waste karna chahta but samajme nai aa raha kaise puchu??"
Nisha gave him stern look
Kabir closed his eyes forwhile then said "actually baat tere past se related hai!! Isliye mein puchne me itna hesitate karraha tha!!"
The irritated and angry expression now changed into serious and a lil scrared one..
"Kya puchna hai Kabir? Sab kuch to meine tujhe bata diya hai!!" she said in a low voice looking everywhere except him
"Ek last cheez... I know ek din me bahut kuch hogaya aj .. And shayad mujhe thoda wait karna chahiye tha... But galati se baat nikal gyi muh se ti ab puch hi leta hu..."
Nisha looked at him blinking her eyes... Without any expression on her face...
Kabir continued
"Woh... Mujhe ye puchna tha ki..."
He took a deep breath closing his eyes then said it
"Wo ladke jinhone tere sath misbehave Kara tune unko saza dilwai?? "
"saza??" nnisha looked at him confused
"Tere expression se toh saaf lagta hai ki nahi..."
Kabir took her hand in his and said "tujhe pata hai Tu abtak uss pillani incident move on Kyu nai kar payi?? Kyunki tere gunahgar ab bhi khule ghum rahe hain,.. Aur pata nai ab b kitni aur ladkiyon k sath badtamizi kari hogi .. Na jaa wo b kitni worse wali.. Unn logo ko agar usi waqt saza mil jati to Tu abtak uss incident itni affected nai rehti.. Uss pain se, uss trauma se bahar aa jati "
"lekin Kabir..."
" They were wrong nisha... And unko punish karna and sabak sikhana zaruri hai... Warna they wont stop... "
"Tu sahi bol raha but uss waqt me bahut choti Thi... And..."
"i know nisha but ab... Ab to choti nai hai na?"
"kya matlab??tu kya kehna chahta hai??"
"Matlab jo tab nai hua wo ab hoga!! We will punish them now"
"Tu kya bol raha hai? hum unhe saza denge??kaise??"
Kabir didn't replied and just smiled...
Nisha was hell confused
Kabir moved towards their room
She frowned and followed him
"Kabir,,,, jawab de na yar... Kyu sata raha hai..."
Kabir stayed quiet
"Kabir ... Tu kya soch raha hai?? Saafsaaf Bata mujhe... Plzzz"
No response
"Kabir..." nisha cribbed
"oho... Daughter of Laxmi... Relax me..." Kabir said holding her shoulders
"Tu tension mat le .. Sab mujhpr chhod de... Tu bas mujhe detail me Bata tujhe Jo b yaad h unn logo k baare me... Unn kamino ko to Mein dhoodhke nikalunga!! Chhodunga nai Mein unhe... You just wait and watch... Tere kadmo lake nai phenka to mera naam bhi Kabir nahi... "
Nisha smiled at him... But he was lost in his thought and was looking a Lil upset... "May b he was feeling bad thinking abt watever i faced bcoz of that incident" nisha self thought
"Kabir ..." she called him which broke his trance...
"Unlogo ko pata nai unhone kis se panga le liya hai,,, unhe pata nai hai Ki kiski wifey k sath badtamizi kar baithe hain wo,,. Unhe to Mein..."
"kya kaha tune??" nisha interrupted an angry kabir
"unhe kaise pata hota jab 8 saal pehle mujhe b nai pata Tha Ki Mein kiski wifey banne wali Hu ..." she said & burst out laughing.,,
Kabir frowned but later joined her in laughing,..
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To be continued...

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: plaksha2002

Wao wala update Nehu di👏

thanx meri Shona :*
Posted: 9 years ago
thankyou everyone who liked and commented in previous chapter... I forgot I havnt replied anyone ... 😲
soryy... Will do it baadme...
sabko sath me kardungi... Dono updates ke comment ka replies... 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update 👏
Loved it... Last one was so funny 😆
Update soon!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb Update Neha ...!!!
Loved It ...!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res
Unres
Neha 😡 ek toh late update ki upar se short update this is not fair
But the update was awesome 👏
Kabir revenge lega 😆 bas ghajini na ban jaye revenge lete 😉
Update soon
Edited by sujoyricky - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Yrr main toh teri fan ho gyi 👏 👏
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
curious to know how kabir will find them
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fabulous update
Loved it
Thnku for the pm

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