Nibir SS-when truth came in open pt23 updated on pg86(20/12) - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
y did kabir push away?
anyways...nicepart...loved it.
up8 soon
Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Hey all...
m glad that u all like my story so Much...😳
I don't know should i be proud or laugh at it...????😆
what i wrote in my story actually happened...
THE ALMOST KISS ...
not same to same but it happened...😉
i didn't copied it from show!!
it was my idea first...
CVs ne mere dil Ki sun li...Lolz😆
So let me come to the next part...
here it is!!!!
My ss part3:
Kabir splashed the water on his face...
Looking himself in Mirror said...
Kabir: kabiraaa ye Tu kya kiya??? Wo Nisha h Nisha... Teri best frnd .. Best kya Teri ekloti frnd... Tera moral support... Usne har kadam pe tera sath diya hai.. Har mushkil me tere sath khadi rahi hai wo...
How could u do this to her??? Ab Tu use kaise face karega??? Pata nahi wo tere baare kya soch rahi hogi!!!
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On the ortherside ...
Nisha was also thinking the same...
She was blaming her self for wat ever happened...
Nisha self thought:
Tu pagal ho gayi h kya Nisha...
Ye kya karne jaa rahi Thi?? Agar Kabir sahi waqt par nahi rukta to...??
Nisha Nisha... Aarrgghhh
How could u???
Kabir pehle se itna upset Tha!! Kitna hurt Tha wo.. He was not in his senses, par Tu...?? Tujhe kya ho Gaya Tha??? Tune ye sab hone kaise Diya??? Ab Tu Kabir ko kya muh dikahaye gi???
"Nooo...
I cant face him!!! I just cant!!"
Aftr some time Kabir slowly open the door to check wat is Nisha is doing outside... And How is her mood??

But there was no one outside...
Kabir quickly came outside the washroom..
But Nisha was no where...
He thought where is she??
Then his phone rang...
And it was nishu's msg
He opened it!!
Nisha: wooohhh... Maa ko kuch kaam Tha , to main ghar aa gai!! Main raat tak wapas aa jaungi !! Jaldi jaldi me nikli tuje bolna b bhool gai..!"
Kabir sit on bed ...
Thinking...
Kabir to himself
"Mujhe sab pata h Nisha , Tu Kyu aur kisliye gai hai!! Tu mujhse bhaag rai hai...
aurr... Aur bhaage b Kyu na? Maine harkat hi aisi ki hai!!! "
He was feeling very bad...
.
Then after a moment a smile crept his face...
He suddenly felt relieved... & said...
"Achcha hi hua chali gai...
Waise bhi mujhme himmat hi kahan thi usko face karne ki!!! "
He stretched his arms... And laid on the bed...
"Bach gaya Kabiraaa ..."
Sigh of relief...

To be continued...
Precap: Nisha at gangwal house
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SO how was it???
i know its too short... So sorry...
Hope u all like it!!
please leave ur precious comments...
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Edited by RoshniVdian786 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Dialogues are spot on dear! 👍🏼 But please wanna longer update nxt tym! 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
read all the parts in one go,Awesome yaar!!! i loved how nisha could feel kabir's pain and her eye cried on its own seeing him crying Kbir's pain was 😭😭 As much as i'm looking forward to the half brother truth coming out on the show,i am now dreading the moment when he finds out he is an illegitimate child that hug and almost kiss was ☺️ Altogether it was really heart wrenching and soulful👏
Edited by zainabawoon - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
WHY A LITTLE UPDATE :"( I WANT MOOOREEE!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
nice update dear😃
aww my cute nibir feeling awkward😳
and both r thinking the same thing harkat hi aisi ki hai😆
thanks 4 the pm
continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
hi.. actualy i read it in 1 go...
the way u expressed nibir's feeling is amazing dr...👏
im jst lookin forward to the truth revelation nd donno how kabir would react to tis...😕
kabir totally forgot abt the truth aftr that almost kiss scene.. 😆
update soon.. nd pm me..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Amazing update
nibir were feeling awkward
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
wow.😊
your nibir awkward phase is better than what they showed on nauc..acc to me.
please wrtie soon. cant wait
Posted: 10 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

Dialogues are spot on dear! 👍🏼 But please wanna longer update nxt tym! 😉

awww
thanx 😳😳
I m dialogue queen😆
lolz

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