Nibir SS-when truth came in open pt23 updated on pg86(20/12) - Page 13

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: niki2

Lovely darling...thank you thank you sooo much.such a cute chapter...

Thanks for the pm buddy...ummmah🤗



awww thankyou 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update...
I loved it...
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
loved it so much... kabira stop being a dhakkan yaar
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Posted: 10 years ago
cute update thanks for pm!
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

loved it so much... kabira stop being a dhakkan yaar



hey don't call my kabiraa dhakkan... 😡

uski jagah koi b hota to aisa hi karta :(

isme mele kabir jiju ki koi galti ni h
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Posted: 10 years ago
mice part dude...loved it...n banjara song my fav..😉
waitng 4 the nxt part
Posted: 10 years ago
Hiii alll back with one more update ^_^
i said it if aneri vajani di likes my edits on Instagram then i'll surely update one more part today...
and guess what??? it happened not only she liked my edit but also she was the FIRST PERSON to like the post... i couldn't believe my eyes when i saw that she is the first liker... love u my angel vajani :*
thanx for ur good wishes MANSI ^_^
so heres the next update as i promised to u


When the truth came in Open



Chapter 11


SS part 11

Kabir picked Nisha from gangwal house...
As soon as They came out side the house Nisha couldn't control her self and shouted on him
"Kabir Tu samajhta kya apne aap ko?? Kahin ka president hai?han?? "
"Nisha.,,??" he looked at her confused
She grabbed his coller and said
"Mr Kabir Kumar... Subah se dekh rahi hu.. Tere pas to jaise mere liye time hi nahi hai!!! Pehle Mujhe bina bataye gayab ho gaya aur phir phone lagao to switched off?? Aur sidhe ab muh dikha raha hai!!! Tu mujhe ignore to nahi kar raha na??"
"Nishaa.. Tu bhi na!!" he hold her hands and removed them from his collar
"Aisa kuch nahi hai ok!! Dadaji ne urgent bulaya tha aur tere cousins tujhe ghere hue the isliye mein maa ko batake nikal gaya! And phone ... Subah me jhoot bola tha be usko leke !! Wo bhi guilt me gir ke tut gaya aj shop par !! Repair me diya hai!! Tu bhi na kuch zyada hi sochti hai yar!!"
"Achcha... ok" Nisha replied in dim voice & downed her head
"You know wat ??? Tu jis tarah se mera collar pakadke question kar rahi thi na aisa lag raha tu meri sachchi ki wife hai !! "
He laughed saying that!!
"Haha nice joke" she give whatever look
"Joke ??? Its not a joke !! Apni shakal dekh ... Itna miss kar rahi thi mujhe?? Wifey..." he leaned close towards her..
"Miss aur tujhe?? My foot!!" she replied & pushed him back
"And by the way tune ab tak mujhe bataya nahi ke interview me hua kya??"
"Wohh Nisha..."
"Subah se main tujhse ek hi sawaal na Jane kitni bar puch chuki hu , par har bar kuch bahana bana ke baat ghuma di tune!! Itne papad bele hai tujhe interview hall ke andar tak pahunchane ko aur tu ..." she said & hit him!!
"And Mein tere intezaar me nahi , interview ka result janne ke liye mari jaa rahi hu!! Samjha tu!!" she continued..
"I m sorry yar woh mein..."
"Kya woh..?mein woh..? laga rakha hai?? Batana sidhe sidhe plzz... Kyu sata raha hai mujhe??"
"Nisha wo actually..."
"Kabir tu ab mujhe dara raha hai !! Tu select to hua na?? Kahin wo log ne interview lene se mana to nai kiya na itna late jane ki wajah se??"
"Nahi... Unlogone mera interview le liya!"
"Phir??"
"Actually wahan sab bahut talented dancers the.. Kuch to mujhse bhi zyada!! Isliye..."
"Oh!! Matlab... Mera doubt sahi nikla ke tu select ni hua isliye subah se bas bahane bana raha tha!" Nisha mumbled
"Kya?? " Kabir asked as he didn't get wat she was mumbling...
"Koi baat nahi Kabir... Its ok!! Hum ne kitna try kiya !! Tune kitni mehnat Ki Thi par... Shayad kismat hi nahi Tha!!"
"Oh hello... Wait a minute... Puri baat to sunle kuch bhi conclude karne se pehle!!"
Nisha looked at him confused..
"Wahan pe sab achche dancer the isliye final decision lene se pehle wo saare performances dubara dekhege and decide kar ke call kar karenge aisa kaha tha !!"
"Matlab??"
"matlab subah me mujhe khud hi nahi pata tha ke mein select hua hu ya nahi!! To tujhe kya batata!?! bol??"
"Phir?? Unhone call kiya?? Kya bola??"
"Abhi 1 hour pehle call aya tha!! And..."
He turned saying that!!
"And...??" Nisha asked curiously & came in front of him
He grabbed Nisha's arms & shouted "And I M SELECTED..." & started moving Nisha round & round getting mad with too much happiness "I m selected... Nisha I'm selected..." he shouted with happiness
Nisha's happiness also hav no bounds hearing that!!
They hugged out of excitement..
"i m so happy Nisha..., and all credit goes to uhhh... Agar tune mujhe force ni kiya hota to pata ni me kya stupidity kar baithta!! Thankyou .. Thankyou so much..." hugging her tight
"jab tak mein tere sath hu na tujhe kabhi koi stupidity nai karne dungi!!" she replied with a smile aftr they broke the hug!!
"Kash Tu hamesha mere sath rahe..." Kabir said it unknowingly...
Later he realized wat he said and there was a silence between them as they both r not sure wether they will be together in future or not? Wat will happen aftr 3 months? That thought ... >_<
"Congratulations Kabir..." Nisha said breaking the silence and smiled & tried to change the topic..

"Sirf congrats kehne se kaam nahi chalega!! Its time to celebrate Nisha... Chal!!"
He moved towards the scooty
"Kahan chal??"
"Night shine palace"
"Kya ?? Ye konsi jagah hai??"
"Night club hai!! Jaipur ka sabse bada !! "
"Wat?? Nightclub?? "
"Haan Nisha!! Its an amazing place!! Maine bahut suna hai iske baare me !! Abhi last month hi khula hai!!"
"Na baba na mujhe nahi jana..."
"Kya?? Pagal ho gayi hai kya?? Tu Night shine palace Jane se mana kar rahi hai??? Tujhe pata hai log marte hai wahan Jane keliye!! Aur Tu mana kar rahi hai??" he said with *wat the... Look* he continued "tujhe pata hai Mein khud last 2 weeks se try kar raha tha ke wahan ke passes mil jaye but nahi Hua!! Aur Aj hi mere frnd ka phone aya he said k 2 passes mile hai but he can't come!! Yar meine Fingers crossed rakhi thi ki bas select ho jau to ... Wahan jake celebrate karne me double maza ayega!! "
"I know Kabir ke tu bahut khush hai par mein kabhi aisi koyi jagah nai gayi yar!! Mujhe nahi jana plzz"
"Pehle kabhi nahi gayi to ab chal na!!! Nisha i'm telling u bahut maza ayega... Chal na yar plzzz..."
"Kabir nai plzzz yar .. Dont force me.." Nisha said tensed
"Ek kaam kar tu kirti ko sath le ja.. Waise bhi kirti aisi jagah bahut pasand hai!! Haan tu use hi le jaa..".
"Achcha aur usey bolunga kya? Kis khushi me celebrate kar raha Hu??Tera hath jalne Ki khushi me??" he replied annoyed
"arey yar bana de na koi bhi bahana!! Aur Tu hi to bol raha hai ke wahan Jane ke liye log marte hai!! Bol dena tujhe 2 passes mile hai!! Kirti bhi khushi se pagal ho jayegi agar Tu use sath chalne ko puchega!"
"Stop it yar Nisha.. mujhe kirti ke sath nahi tere sath celebrate karna hai!! Mere select hone ka pura credit tujhe jata hai!! Party bhi tu deserve karti hai !! Ye kirti bich me kahan se aa gayi yar??"
"Kabir tu samajh kyu nahi raha hai.. Main..." she was unable to explain him the reason why she can't come
"Nisha , Dekh aj mein bahut khush hu mera mood mat spoil kar plzzz... Tu nahi chalegi to mujhe bhi nahi jana phir!! Nahi karna celebrate! nai karni koi party!!" he said crossing his arms in anger
"Kabir yar .. Zid mat kar plzzz.."
Kabir was still standing in same position & gave her a angry look & looked away..
"Achcha thik hai main chal rahi Hu bas!! " Nisha said as no option left
Kabir smiled hearing that!!
"Ab khush?? She asked
"Bahut khush.." he replied
Kabir started scooty Nisha sit behind him & hold him tight
Kabir was surprised to see this sudden change in behaviour of nisha
She is the same one who was hesitating to hold him in morning and now she did this herself... weird it was... he didn't expected this..
He couldn't control his thoughts & just asked her
"Nisha ab to tera hath bhi thik ho gaya hai na?"
"Haan"
"To tu backside pakad ke bhi baith sakti hai!! phir??"
"aaa... Wohh.. Meri marzi!! Mujhe jaise baithna hai baithungi!! Kyu? tujhe koi problem hai kya???"
"problem?? Nai .. Mujhe kya problem hogi??"
"To chupchap agey dekh aur scooty chala!! Idiot"
Kabir smirked & started scooty
Nisha rested her head on his back looking right-side & closed her eyes...
It was beautiful night with full moon..
The cool breeze & moonlight so much soothing it was!! She enjoyed the ride with her hubby... so as Kabir...
Soon they reached the nightclub..
Nisha got down..
Kabir parked the scooty & came to her but Nisha was standing still in front of nightclub .. She didn't moved a step..
"Kya soch rahi hai??chal?"
He said
"Kabir meine yahan ane ko Haan to kar di par mera Mann nahi man raha.. Main..."
"Kya baat hai Nisha?? Tu itna Kyu ghabra rahi hai?? Pehle mujhe laga Tha ke Tu kabhi aisi jagah nahi gayi isliye pareshan hai !! Par ab lag raha hai baat kuch aur hi hai!! Bolna kya hua?"
She closed her eyes and the horrible past of her life came in front her eyes.. Bcoz of which she restricted herself from being around S many people.. she restricted herself from all these type of stuff.. She used avoid gathering of so many ppl, only she loves being with her family and cousins but not with unknown ppls..
"Nisha..."
She heard him & came back to reality
"Kuch nahi..." she smiled as she dont want to spoil his happiness with her past problems & managed to convince herself to do it!! To go inside as Kabir she is with her... And she trusts him more than herself!!
"Chal.. Andar nahi jana kya??" she said & moved ahead..
Kabir was confused with her behavior.. But he Followed her & they went inside


(sorry again for my poor English... I m not so good in describing the scene & background , uske liye bhi sorry... Toh barobar :p )

PRECAP: nibir masti at nightclub ;)


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TBC

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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry for d late comments but was busy so couldn't comment earlier
Firstly, the banner is perfect 👏 😊
Secondly, ur writing speed is too good 😆 3 updates in such a short span ! I was like I need to post a comment before she updates d story again 😆 Your fast typing skills are a boon for ur readers 😆
Now coming to the story, Loved d NiBir nok-jhok 😆 It is a delight to read their fights 😆
Also u hv been adept in bringing out d growth in their relationship with Kabir being so worried for Nisha and being ready to sacrifice his dream cz he can't see her in pain.
Laxmis dialogue " Meri jal Ki Beti hath chali gayi" was very funny 😆
So Nibir can't stay without each other& r eager to meet the other 😆
Continue soon 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
And looks like mera comment phir late Ho gaya 😉
By d time I posted my comment, I was like " She updated d story so soon! " 😆 [;)
Looks like u read my thoughts before me 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update👏. continue soon

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