Nibir SS-when truth came in open pt23 updated on pg86(20/12) - Page 23

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786



haha 😆

thank you ji... 😳

mein Jo karti hu wo has mein hi kar sakti hu!!! 🤣
bcoz m unique!!! 😉


Its good 😊
Posted: 10 years ago


ikr 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Really u are craziness is super super superrr se uppar hai😆
but really ur story is too good yaar👏👏👏
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Niha205

Really u are craziness is super super superrr se uppar hai😆

but really ur story is too good yaar👏👏👏

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Posted: 10 years ago
Neha tu bohot sweet hai yaar🤗
But u know what we both r similar u remember my ff aasmanon pay likha first 1 to 5 oarts mein toh i only used english phir thoda hindi par a gyi end hote hote poora part hindi mein convert ho gya🤣
Ofcourse hindi hain hum😃
N i really like ur story but tu itna late update karti hai ki continuity hi break ho jati hai
Tera new update samajhne ke liye last part ko ek basr dekhna padta hai🤣so miss late lateef continue soon
N nice post
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SONAL30

Neha tu bohot sweet hai yaar🤗

But u know what we both r similar u remember my ff aasmanon pay likha first 1 to 5 oarts mein toh i only used english phir thoda hindi par a gyi end hote hote poora part hindi mein convert ho gya🤣
Ofcourse hindi hain hum😃
N i really like ur story but tu itna late update karti hai ki continuity hi break ho jati hai
Tera new update samajhne ke liye last part ko ek basr dekhna padta hai🤣so miss late lateef continue soon
N nice post





mujje pata tha!!!

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I got a new new Nick name..
😆
miss late lateef ?!? 🤣 thanks for this! me toh bol rahi nikal lo bhadas...




say it Jo b dil me h!! 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
Read everything at one go, update soon. Love it with all the comedy, drama and masaala😆 Just carry on the same way Neha😉
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MidnightMusings

Read everything at one go, update soon. Love it with all the comedy, drama and masaala😆Just carry on the same way Neha😉




hihi 😃

thanx dear... 😳
ya sure... will continue with the same craziness 😉
Posted: 10 years ago

hey guys...

i m back with the update...

aftr a long time!!! 😆

Nibir SS - When the truth Came in Open

Chapter 16


Next morning Kabir woke up before Nisha...
Nisha was sleeping peacefully ...
He looked at her , adore her , smiled and move away from there without making any sound as he don't wanna disturb her sleep..
He took bath and then went to kitchen made his breakfast... His bread butter jam... and ate that... He also made the same for Nisha ... And kept in an air tied container
And came back to their bedroom.. Nisha was still in deep sleep..
It was 8:30am in morning now but Sunday... He didn't wake her up and let her sleep...
He took his phone & headphones and thought to listen to some music... He moved to window side and stand by there plugin the headphones & turn on music ..

Shining in the sand in sun like a pearl up on the ocean
Come and feel me
Ho Feel me
Shining in the shed in sun like a pearl up on the ocean
Come and heal me
O Heal me

Listening to those words..
The only face came in front of his eyes was his wifey.. His Nisha ...

Thinking about the love n making entire Life for sharing
Come and feel me
O feel me

Bcoz finally today he had accepted his feelings...
Yes he had accepted that he is in love... he loves Nisha... At last he understand wht his hearts was telling him from a long time.. He was reminiscing all special moment he spend with her... And a smile was sticked on his lips..

Shining in the sand in sun like a pearl up on the ocean
Come and feel me
Come on Heal me..

Suddenly he felt a hand on his shoulder he turned to look & found Nisha standing there..

Hua Jo tu bhi mera Mera
Tera Jo ikraar hua
To kyun na mein bhi Keh dun keh dun
Hua mujhe bhi Pyaar hua

She took both his hands in her hands took him along with her .. He stepped ahead to her and she was stepping back..

Tera hone laga hu Khone Laga hu
Jab se mila hu

He came close to her her and was about to touch her cheecks with his fingers, she suddenly vanished... He looked at bed and found Nisha still sleeping there... He was dreaming of her..

Tera hone laga hu Khone Laga hu
Jab se mila hu ...

He smiled at his stupidity ..

Shining in the sand in sun like a pearl up on the ocean
Come and feel me
O Feel me
Shining in the shade in sun like a pearl up on the ocean
Come and Heal me..
O Heal me..

He moved towards the bed and sat beside Nisha , her hair was on her face to he tucked it behind her ears softly without disturbing her sleep..

umm waise to maan mera
Phele bhi raaton mein
Aksar hi chahat ke haan
Sapne Sanjota tha ..
Phele bhi dhadkan yeh
Dhun koi gaati thi
Par abb jo hota hai woh
Phele na hota tha ...

She turned to him still in sleep but her lips fromed a curve as if she is seeing a beautiful dream
Kabir smiled at it..

Hua hai Tujhe jo bhi jo bhi
Mujhe bhi is paar hua

She felt someone holding his arms from behind he looked to other side.. And again Nisha took him with her..

To kyun na main bhi keh doon keh doon
hua mujhe bhi pyaar hua

Nibir danced together..
Tera hone laga hu Khone Laga hu
Jab se mila hu ...
Tera hone laga hu Khone Laga hu
Jab se mila hu...

On other side Nisha slowly opened her eyes.. And saw Kabir.. He was dancing.. ok.. He loves that.. but he was doing partner dance but no one was there with him... Weird that was...
She tried to get up but suddenly she had a headache... She called out Kabirrr... in pain...

Kabir was busy in dancing with nisha(day dreaming :p) headphones were on his ears .. He didn't hear her voice...
But he felt that she called him.. So he turned to look at her ...
And yes she was awake ..
Her hand was on her head...
as if its paining...
Kabir immediately moved towards her...
He removed headphones from his ears.. But didn't stoped music
He sat beside Nisha(not exactly beside , downside on bed , uske pairo ke pas )
"Nisha Tu thik hai...?? "
"Haan.. Bas wo thoda sar..."
Before she could complete
Kabir's headphone unplugged from mobile accidentally and song started playing..
Aankhon se chhu lu k baahein tarasti hain..
Dil ne pukaara hai haan Ab to Chale aao...
Nibir looked at each other...
Nisha was confused from where the music is coming... It took no time for Kabir to understand that its his phone... Which is in his pocket... He felt awkward and tried to off it asap
Aao k Shabnam ki Bundein Barasti hain Mausam Ishaara hai haan... Ab to Chale aao!!
Finally he stopped the music..
And put the phone aside on the bed
"Sorry... Wo Mein..."
He made an innocent baby face
"Its ok..." she replied still holding her head...
"Tu kuch bol rahi Thi??kya Hua ?? Tera sar...?? Kabir tried to change the topic..
"Dard ho raha hai kya??" he asked with concern
"Hmm.. Pata ni Kyu... Thoda dard ho raha hai.."
"Wait Mein Abhi aya.."
"Kabir kahan jaa raha..??"
"Nisha wait me ek minute wapas aa raha Hu.."
He went to kitchen and took lime juice from fridge which he made for her.. & came back..
"ye le... Nimbu pani .. " he poured it in a glass and offered her ..
"Ye Kyu??" she looked at juice *confused *
"Pee le .. Sar dard kam ho jayega.."
"Achcha.. Tujhe kaise pata??"
"Maine movies me dekha hai!! Hangover utarne ke liye nimbu pani best hai!!"
(YAHAN KABIR MERI LINES BOL RAHA HAI 😉 )
Nisha tried to get up from bed but she was unable to do it!! Kabir put the glass on table beside and helped her..
Nisha was on left side of bed
He took her left hand on his left shoulder and put his right hand her waist , Nisha hold his left hand with her other hand...
(complicated na?read again... 😆 )
Tried to get up but by mistake she kicked the phone which was near foot... And Music turned on..

Baahon mein Daale Baahein Baahein
Baahon ka Jaise haar hua..
Haan Maana maine maana maana...
Hua mujhe bhi pyaar hua...

Nibir looked at each other.. *Eyelock*

Tera hone laga hu..
Khone Laga hu..
Jab se mila hu...
Tera hone laga hu Khone Laga hu Jab se mila hu...
Shining in the sand in sun like a pearl up on the ocean
Come and feel me
Haan Feel me
Shining in the sand in sun like a pearl up on the ocean
Come and feel me
Haan Feel me
Thinking about the love n making entire Life for sharing
Come and feel me
HO Heal me
As soon as song ended the eyelock ended...
Nisha get up with his help...
He gave her the juice and she drink it ...
Kabir sat near her...
"Nisha.. Wo mujhe tujhse kuch kehna tha...!! Nisha.. Wo ... Mein wo..."
"Kya hua Kabir ?? Bolna?? Itna attak kyu raha hai?? Kya bolna hai jaldi bol??"
"Nisha wo actually..."
*Ting tong*
Before he could say anything the door bell rang...
"Kya yar .. Iss door bell ko b abi bajna tha!!" Kabir mumbled irritated
"Kya?? " Nisha asked
"nai .. Kuch nai.. Main dekh ke Ata Hu kon hai..."
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To be continued...

Edited by RoshniVdian786 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome👍🏼 Kabir ne apne feelings accept kiye😃
Edited by ...Shibu... - 10 years ago

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