Tusi ja rahe ho? Tussi nah jao- Avneil SS~Part 9 teaser on Page 20 - Page 10

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Posted: 8 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: SelB

I keep refreshing to see if you have updated the next part😆

I might post it tomorrow instead of today
but if you want i can post a teaser sentence or two here😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#92
SMALL TEASER for the next update

...Neel let go of her arms and this time grabbed her waist, turning her around pushing her against the wall. "Kaha jaane ki soch rahi ho, wifey?" His body was flat against hers; his mouth dangerously close to her ear. She tried to struggle out of his iron tight grip, but she couldn't. She wasn't scared of him, nor his drunken stupor. For some reason, she trusted him more than herself. She knew he wouldn't do anything to harm her. She knew he wouldn't do anything to hurt her on purpose. She knew he won't go too far. Right now, she didn't know what too far would be, Neel had blurred the lines of what he was in her life. Friend? Yes but not really. Husband? No but sort of. Lover?...


So theres stuff that has happened before that, and stuff that happens after that small moment. Are they at the party, are there in his room? Who knows😆😆

She does answer the lover question though...if she sees Neel as her lover😉

Edited by Affinity - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#93
Superb update
Neil is feeling jealous but every time he makes himself clarify his jealousy
And teaser sounds fantastic
Update soon please
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Posted: 8 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Superb update
Neil is feeling jealous but every time he makes himself clarify his jealousy
And teaser sounds fantastic
Update soon please

Thanks lovely😳
He wants to justify his feelings because he doesn't know where he stands with Avni yet😉
Or even where his heart stands, or if he even owns his own heart anymore😉
I'll post the next update tomorrow 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#95
Amazing teaser. Do continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: crazynamita0402

Amazing teaser. Do continue soon...

thanks dear😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#97
The teaser is amazzinggg...
so hawt, yar...
ouftt...
are they going to kiss???
update soon nahh...
and the blurred lines of wheres Neil stands with Avni...
too good...
I wonder what she answers after lover...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#98
I'm a silent reader usually, but I made a new account so I'm new here. My name is Roshni! This story is amazing work!! Please update soon!!Fab job!! So close to the real characters!! Does Ali still Avni in this story? Or was it just a friendly dance? I'm confused.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#99
The trailer is so interesting...
I m getting impatient to see the picture..
She trust him... He won't harm her.. These lines stirred my heart..
Will be waiting dear...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: SelB

The teaser is amazzinggg...

so hawt, yar...
ouftt...
are they going to kiss???
update soon nahh...
and the blurred lines of wheres Neil stands with Avni...
too good...
I wonder what she answers after lover...


Thanks Sejal! Hahaha, it might get hotter in the next part😉
I will😊

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