Tusi ja rahe ho? Tussi nah jao- Avneil SS~Part 9 teaser on Page 20 - Page 12

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Posted: 8 years ago
Tia this was amazing...Loved their closeness
Both are in love but refusing to accept it...
My heart went out to Neil when he said " kuch dino mein hamare divorce papers aa jayenge"
Please continue soon
P.S. I dont want Neil to sit back and let Avni Go...I want him to fight for his love...I want him to realize that Avni loves him too and then he should make her confess😉
Edited by pri12 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
It was amazing. This part slightly resembles the first part of my ff drunk confessions. Pls do read and comment on it
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful update Tia
I hope they will not have divorce
Continue soon
Lots of Love
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Posted: 8 years ago
I m having goosebumps... It was damn beautiful Tia..
Thank God you focussed that scene... I m in love with this scene...
Neil said Avni while talking... Which is good.. So she don't have any misunderstanding about Juhi...
His every move and word was awesome...

Although Sid interrupted them...
But even then enjoyed it a lot..

Tum tayiyaar nahi bhi hoti to bhi acchi lagti..
Wifey, koi bhi humme dekh sakte hain. I don't care. Tumhare dost tumse chipeke naach sakta hai toh mein tumhare husband hone ke naata se tumse ek quiet hallway ke under chipek hi sakta hoon.

I am in love with these lines..
Please update soon..
Lots of love.. And a wadda wala thank you..
Vihu
Edited by vu1998 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Aww!! Kitna cute scene tha..
Sorry not only cute but hot too..
And their little behes that confirm that they are so into each other.. Fir bhi realise nai kr rhe.. Neil toh realise that he loves Avni now it's Avni's turn..
And please update soon..
Waiting for next part..

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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update
Both are getting jealous
Update next part soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
this was beautiful !
the last line ESP was heartbreaking . kuch din mei hamari divorce papers aa jyenge 💔x
she knew of juhi n thought he was thinking her as juhi . 😲
nice lines tum tayar bhi nahi hoti toh achi lagti 😳
make him find out that she too loves him without her knowledge.
waiting for the next😃 I thought you would mention the ringtone of Neil something clichey😆 or prank type
Edited by AgnesFan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pri12

Tia this was amazing...Loved their closeness

Both are in love but refusing to accept it...
My heart went out to Neil when he said " kuch dino mein hamare divorce papers aa jayenge"
Please continue soon
P.S. I dont want Neil to sit back and let Avni Go...I want him to fight for his love...I want him to realize that Avni loves him too and then he should make her confess😉


Thanks Kulraj😊
Neil is nearing his realisation of his love for Avni😉
He will fight for it, but I'm just going to make things a bit more difficult for him to make him confess quicker. 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Thanks Mehak 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Avneilfan

It was amazing. This part slightly resembles the first part of my ff drunk confessions. Pls do read and comment on it


Thanks lovely (what's your name, otherwise I will just be calling you the generic lovely or dear, haha)
Hahaha, what can I say great minds think alike😉
Will do 😊

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