Tusi ja rahe ho? Tussi nah jao- Avneil SS~Part 9 teaser on Page 20 - Page 8

isn't it the first promo of TEI in which he wore that green blazer I remember . he was just killer

Fantastic update
Finally Avni has started to behave like a girl all because of Neil
Update soon please

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Nice

Thanks😊

Originally posted by: princessdivya

Nice one

thanks lovely😊

Originally posted by: pri12

Awsomeee...I love how Avni is behaving like normal girls

Neil cut Sidhant in middle 😆 She is my wife thats it

Thanks Kulraj😊
Our Neel is possessive nahh, he won't even let anyone mention the prospect of Avni being with someone else😉

Originally posted by: sushfiza

Nice

Thanks😊

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

isn't it the first promo of TEI in which he wore that green blazer I remember . he was just killer

n dress you chose for Avni was just masah Allah . I could imagine her . this dress will exactly complement her milk white skin ❤️

there is sidhant add to his jealousy 😆 aur kon kon ayenge . bring mitali too😆..fun should be full swing na ..

yeah some sentences you have that gender problems .

Thanks Sri,
Yes it is, it was from episode 11/12. Athough I was following Zain already, this look just made me fall for him
Yea, it took me ages to find the dress. So I'm glad you liked it😆
Mitali is there, in the next update, I was going to introduce her in this update but that would have been only one sentence, I want her introduction to be with some action😉

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Fantastic update
Finally Avni has started to behave like a girl all because of Neil
Update soon please

Thanks Gurveen😊
Pyaar hota hi aisa hai😆

Part 7

*No one's POV*

Sidhant's girlfriend, Anjali, and Mitali walked up to the two friends. Neel hugged the two girls in a warm embrace

From the moment, she had entered the room, it was no exaggeration that every pair of eyes were on her, every pair except the one person's she was waiting for. Although she was smiling as she entered with her mother and brother, nobody could actually point out the gloom that reflected in her doe-like eyes.

She had spotted Neel embrace Mitali into a bear hug and then another girl she didn't know...had enveloped Neel into a hug, and whispered something in his ear. Neel was standing there currently, facing away from Avni, texting someone on his phone. She watched as DD tapped Neel's shoulder to point out that Avni had arrived.

He turned around with his attention still on his phone, but after ending the task on his phone, Neel slowly raised his eyes to take in the mesmerizing image of his wife. His jaw slacked down, and he stood there motionless, blinking as Avni walked towards him along with her mother and brother. Nanno had left earlier than the three so she could attend all the guests when they arrived. So she was here somewhere at the party all ready.

(Something like this)

(not going to lie, I love this gif so I just used an excuse to show it)

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*Neel's POV*

"Muh toh band karo, jiju? Mujhe pata hain ki mein kafi hot hoon, lekin aapki shaadi meri dii se hogi hai, aur I don't really swing that way. Sorry," Aman laughed as he came to Neel. Neel closed his mouth, slightly embarrassed as everyone in their small group, laughed at him, everyone except Avni.

"Aman..." Avni said, in a reprimanding tone. Aman made a cute face, as he brought his hands to his ears and apologized, making Avni smile. Neel looked at Avni through his hooded eyelashes, and smiled as she smiled at her younger brother's antics.

"Aman, mein tujhe nahi, apni saas ko dekh rahe tha. Neela maa, aap hamesha itna fashionable hota hon. Bollywood ko bhi aapse lessons ki zaroorat hain," Neel smiled at Neela, indirectly but pointedly talking about the earlier fight with Avni. Avni glared back at him.

Neela gave a knowing look, and lightly slapped Neel's shoulder.

"Neel, bohot hogi badmashian. Ab humko introduce bhi toh karo to your friends," Neela interjected.

"Nahi, aunty meh hi apne apko introduce karta hoon. Meh hoon Sidhant, Ali aur Neel ke purana dost aur yeh hey meri girlfriend, Anjali. Hum New York se aaye hain. And I'm guessing your Avni." Sidhant pointed to Avni. Avni nodded, smilingly. Both Sidhant and Anjali went in for a hug to greet her.

"Avni, I must say you look amazingly gorgeous tonight," Sidhant complimented Avni. Avni, slightly flustered, thanked him, looked nervously at his girlfriend, but Anjali smiled back.

"Don't look so nervous Avni. Main itni jealous type ki nahi hoon. I agree with my boyfriend, you look killer. Aap bohot acchi lag rahi hon. In fact, mera bas chalte, main isse chor ke apki girlfriend ban jati. But kya karoon, mujhe iss idiot ke pyar me parna tha so lesbian hon nahi payi," Anjali rattled, making everyone in the group laugh.

Avni looked pointedly at Neel, lightly smirking that she was getting compliments, too. But Neel really didn't mind right now.

Aj isse kahoon bhi toh kya kahoon. Tareef hi hogi, sach mein toh koi bhi tareef se zaada sundar lag rahi hain.

Mitali finally greeted Avni in a hug, too. And the Avni's family excused themselves to meet other guests. "Avni, ajj tum aur Neel bilkul match kar rahe hon. It's so cute when couples colour coordinate. Neel, I hate to say this to you, yaar. Tum galti se handsome lag rahe hon," Mitali teased, holding onto Neel's arm.

Neel looked down to his own clothes. He had momentarily forgotten what he was wearing, having his breath taken away by Avni.

Hum dono match kar rahe hain. Yeh ladki bilkul ek ajooba hain. Hum itna door hain, phir bhi in sync hain.

Avni on the other hand looked down at Mitali's hand holding Neel's arm. Avni decided that this was her cue to greet all the other guests before Ali arrived. Neel watched as Avni stalked away. A part of him wanted to apologize for the fight in the morning. He longed to talk properly to her. He wanted to bring her close to him, and greet all the guests together as his arm was around her. But he couldn't because there was another part of him that really wanted to Avni to admit he looked great today, and looked better than Ali. It was petty. It was childish. It was absurd. But for someone unknown reason, he needed Avni to utter those words.

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*Avni's POV*

Yeh Mitali kyun aahi yahan. Ohhh...right, maine he bhulayaa tha. Lekin usse toh pata hain ki Neel mera pata ha...Atleast until the divorced is finalized, par nahi. Madamji ko toh Neel se flirt karna tha. He looks handsome today she said. Woh hamesha hi handsome lagta hai. Theek hai, aaj thoda zaada se lag rahe hain. He chose a nice blazer I must admit, but ussne toh mujhe compliment bhi nahi dee. Kaisa pati hain. Fake pati, but still. He looks hot and he knows it. Abhi ek hour bhi nahi huye hai, lekin mujhe lagte hain ki every single girl in the party has already approached him. Aur woh, my dear husband for the time being, woh has ke maaza leh rahe hain whilst the girls are being so chipkoo.

She felt someone grab her hand, and spin her around. It was him. She trying to get out of his grip but his hand didn't budge.

Chetan ke naam layo...ja uske baara soch ne bee...Chetan hazir.

"Wifey, itne compliment leh rahi hon sab ladko se ki mera baara bhi bhulgayi. That's rude," Neel verbalized, lightly enough that no one else heard their conversation, but harsh enough to show he was slightly jarred.

Neel ki himmat kaise hoi. Yeh aadmi mujhe pagal kardega. I swear to god.

"Main bhuli hoon, ya tum bhoole hon? Maan bhar gaye uss chipkoo ladkiyon se?" Avni replied with equal venom.

"Chipkoo? Theek hain who mujhe hug kar rahi hain, lekin who ladko ka kya jo tumhare hands ko kiss kar rahe hain as they are meeting you?"

"Listen Neel, tum jeeta, main har gayi. Theek hai? Now can you please stop?"

"Avni, tum jeeti hon. Koi ladka ki tumse nazar hat nahi rahi. Saale Sidhant aur uski wife ki bhi nahi. I swear the girl the hots for you.Bas main toh itna hi glad hoon ki abhi tak Ali nahi aaye," Neel muttered the last sentenced but Avni caught on.

"Why? Uski toh party hain?" Avni countered.

"Woh...um,,...Haan, aur birthday boy ko kaise lage ka, if someone else steals the limelight," Neel came out with a reasonable excuse. He didn't want to see the bitterness he had for Ali lately. He didn't want anyone to see it. He was ashamed of it.

Avni got a message notification and Neel finally let go of her hand. Checking her phone, Avni revealed to Neel that Ali would be there in 5 minutes with Rhea, before instructing all the guests to hide.

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*Neel's POV*

Everyone shouted SURPRISE!!!! When Ali entered the entry to the hall. Ali who had not been expecting the surprise, smiled seeing everyone there. He looked at Rhea, whispering something, in which she whispered something back. Neel guessed it was that Rhea and Avni had both planned for the party together or something, as he hugged and then began to search for Avni.

Neel, too walked to Avni before Ali found her in the crowd, and embraced her in a friendly bear hug.

"Iss liye tum ajj mujhe ignore kar rahi thi Avni. Pata hai Avni, mujhe lag rahe tha ki tum mera birthday hi bhool gayi," Ali divulged.

Avni laughed at Ali, lightly punching him. "Aise ho sakte hain, ki main tumhare birthday bhool jayoongi? Lekin phir bi. S.O.R.I. Tumhare dil dhukane liye," Avni replied.

Yet, isne mujhe toh maafi nahi maangi for hurting my heart so many times. When she left home, when she didn't find excuses to see him anymore, when she didn't spend the night with him tonight, when she compared him to Ali.

"Happy Birthday bro," Neel broke in between the two friends.

"Kya tum yeh sab meh bhi shamil the?" Ali asked, hugging Neel also.

"Maine decorations kahi. Yeh mem sahib hamesha kham kareke hi maan thi hain. Aur main iske bhola se, bhale se pati. You know how it is," Neel imparted. He felt guilty, he was being pointed, but thankfully Ali didn't notice.

"Chaal yaar, thankyouu. Tum toh aapne chehra dikhate nahi hon lately, but thankyou for still coming and helping man, Ali patted on Neel's shoulder, before turning his attention back to Avni. "Waise, you look beautiful, Avni. Itni saj dhaji hon, mera liye? Thanks yaar, "Ali continued.

Neel watched Avni giggle and he felt a pang in his chest.

Mujhe pata tha, mujhe yahan nahi aana chahiye tha, Neel thought. Atleast unke kapre toh match nahi kar rahe, jaise mera aur Avni ke kar rahe hain.

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"Avni, may I have this dance?"

"Aaj tumhare toh din hain, Ali. Of course, you can have a dance," Avni replied smiling as she innocently accepted Ali's extended hand and let him usher her towards one side of the dance floor. There Sidhant was dancing with Anjali, and DD alongside a random girl he met there at a party. Unbeknownst to Avni, a pair of heated chocolate brown eyes had caught the entire interaction. Neel was trying his hardest not to react. He was still talking to Mitali animatedly, but no one noticed how his fist clenched as Ali's left hand wrapped around Avni's waist.

"Neel, tum bhi na kitne possessive hon. Don't you think I haven't noticed how your jaw has hardened and you fist is clenched. I'm a police officer too, Neel. It's my job to observe and pick up on subtle hints. Uske janam din hai yaar, aur woh tumhari biwi ke saath ek dance hi toh kar rahe hai. Itna possessive?" Mitali teased.

"Mitali, aise kuch nahi hai," Neel managed to say through his gritted teeth, as he watched Ali whisper something to Avni's ear. He couldn't take it anymore, and his eyes dangerously became fixated on the dancing duo's every move. As the song ended, he saw Avni letting go, but Ali grabbed Avni's hand again and pulled her into another dance. Neel tried his hardest not punching Ali.

Kaun kisi aur ki biwi ke saath itna chipke dance karte hain. Mujhe pata hain ki Ali koh sab kuch pata hain humare baare mein, per phir bhi iski inni himmat kaise hogi, dancing romantically with her for TWO SONGS. Aur achanak se songs itne slow kaise hoga, kya Ali ki koi saazish thi, DJ ne kya ais do hi gaane lagane te iss waqt.

Nice one yaar...