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Posted: 8 years ago
Great episode dude ...it was really marvelous... Hate that chirag ...that snake is really cunning...but waiting eagerly for next episode & ISHVEER union
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank you so much for the dedication, Mummy! 🤗🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hy LM,
This chapter is good that the calm starts and we know what happened next..
So chirag planned this game well and won it to his best...
So this was the one which he thought of...
Ishani gonna act as per...
1 more to go...
Can't wait for it dr... Do it soon... 😊
Keep smiling 😉
Take care 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wooh...Tiring epistle. Sry, Late reply I know I know. Coming to the chapter it was as usual awsmm. And Ranveer in action but it would do no good. And now I understand what did you meant in that interlude 16 about Ranveer saying ''what if I said''. It was about Ishani being illegitimate. He gave her biggest secret out but as a mistake. But he was so possessive when he said' I love her and I am willing to do any thing that make her my own'. Wow. How I wish someone loves me like that. Ranveer loves her so much I wish every girl gets a lover like him.
Err..where was I. Oh yes. You know when you were describing Ishani's state I thought she was dead but I re read that line again and realised that u were just giving an idea about her state. Oh my I was really shocked. Now as we all know that she is going to destroy HIM so what is the next epistle about. I really don't have any clue now. But whatever it is about it is surely going to be awsmm. And ur writing style. God. u r too too too good. Can u tell me which course u r doing?
And no worries dear. You can answer the PM any time. Actually I myself don't have any time for any piece of writing as my pre-Sa are going to start from next week. I just wanted some tips u can give me anytime and all the best for ur xams dear...

Love u always and hamesha..
Edited by Anne30ishveer - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hii LM
How r u dr? How's going on ur study?
Sorry for late reply...
just real update it was some relief for me bcz chishani enteral love read krne se bach gye 🤢
Poor ranveer feeling so sad for her how much he happy that he finally meet to ishani after so long time nd confrance his love for ishani but her happiness get spoile just one word ' she's engered ' even he was not come out a pain nd another pain broken her physically Hp no more it very sad...
Well u desribe abt ishani condition she just like dead human nd everything it was really feel real i just thought how to u write it so perfectly...ur really great ..
Oh i think ranveer do a mistake he's drunken stated nd he blabaring abt that he love ishani nd he can do anything for her now i know that chirkut do something nd where is also half minded
But any way i can bear one more update
Update soon...
Thank for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago

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Hi LM...
well you included black friday thing😉 certainly it was deadliest day of his life or to be correct it take away his breath.😭
The D day is here and so is the buildup for it getting ready.😕
alcohol was his vice and it took away his other vice though he cannot entirely be blamed for it but certain pragmatic thinking would have spared them.
Mota babuji and his sayings they have really spoiled many life ishveer 😆 akele ka pyar then some things change like sage person doesn't he have work in stocks
seriously the only person i missed the most in serial and in this book was HP specially after what happened between them.🤔
She not speaking to chirag and being with ranveer like seriously it gives a breathing in this constricted chapter thank you for always providing such a breathing in this book at some point 😳 but i know all this will be compensated with interest in book 6. A commerce student is well versed with the importance of compensation and interest for all the losses🤣
Really ishani is too broken and the fact that she cannot let her emotion implode inside her indicates that what the hell she must have been going through because as per her new manipulated mind even ranveer left her at one point but not her father and his death must have seriously caused havoc and this dam of emotion when broke out it killed everyone and both of them the most. I just wanted to know whether after this night she became cold like always.😲
really what kind of guy is ranveer never once his heartbreak is coming in the way of his friendship and loyality and yet he got blamed for that two things 😭😭
the meaning of love dying i deciphered as he was letting his emotions die but it was this that he killed someone brutally to make himself survive and same was done by ishani the only difference is there his love ishani died in dreams and here she killed him in reality and knowingly. Life was very harsh upon him he never got anything before prooving that he is the most deserving and have waited for it through all the pains let it be friend, loyality and love.
He feeds her 😳 well see what you have done in this book we have to get happy and search for their little moments.
the most lovely thing in this whole chapter which i liked was that he was willing to die to break her fall or let her emote and also the fact that despite being happy that she was with him he isn't hoping this as an opportunity to seek his love he just want to give it to her all he have.
well since we know the consequences of this conversation the only thing that crossed my mind was if only he... honestly more so than ever this time because the final countdown has begun.
Chirag😡😡😡 well i am sure about one thing that those grey eyes and Mr. Mehta are going to pay a heavy price now because even now when he thought that ishani might be betrayed he was ready to tear him apart just wait when he gets to know whole thing😈 and ranveer is ek bar jo maine ishani k liye commitment ki fir to 😲
you know i just skipped that para willingly where he gives the weapon of his destruction to his own enemy with a confession but read it second time nonetheless honestly i felt like throwing a water on his face dude don't speak when you are drunk your girl is already half mad and now this🤢🤢
No wonder he identified the rabbit in present times so easily because it has cost him his life that day.
well it must have easy for that idiot to buy everyone well he cannot loose his hold so easily and ranveer was right chirag speak lie also so convincingly that it can fail even the truth and thats what his oratory did manipulated ishani and destroyed them easily.
sometimes i wonder its the unconditional etheral love of ranveer has brought more destruction in their life than anyone else like that book, his giving away her deepest fear.
And as a villain chirag again impressed me he got his biggest weapon and then instantly camouflage it with his fake cocern and love for ishani and make him feel guilty even to confess it to ishani seriously he can easily give tough competition to ranveer in his planning way. And the good thing is in present times it will be a good competition.
Ranveer let him die to save ishani 6 years back and this time let's see whether RV dies to save this cold emotionless ishani and let ranveer break his prison and breath.😉
O boy his statement of him going to make her his own was i think i have gone mental but can't help.
Rest of the chapter did only this to me🤔
But brilliantly executed though we know the consequences and yet you wrote it so amazingly that it always felt like what may happen next i can understand a hell lot of effort must have gone from your side dear👏👏👏 i just so love the fact how simple things can turn into a whole mess. and the beauty of buildup for the night in your writing is really the best.
really loved it dear
thnx for pm
All the best for exams
waiting for next so that we can get rid of it

1 more to go😊😊😊






Thank you so much, darling! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️



Coming to the review, oh yeah, it proved to be the most deadliest day of his life, this night where one vice took him far, far away from the other one. Oh yeah, a little control over their thoughts would have certainly spared them a lot of misery and a life long of heartbreak, but alas... 😭😭 As to HP and his gyaan... Barbaad hi kar rakhi hai IshVeer ke zindagi ko... But I so miss him too. 😕😕



Moving on, hehe, that's true enough - a Commerce student knows how to take chun-chunke hisaab. 😈😈 And honestly, moments like those are breathers for me as well. 😆😆 As to Ishaani, the poor girl was just messed up in the head that night and she didn't know that she was destroying her own life with her own hands. 💔💔 And coming to how she's been ever since that night, Book 6 will give you an answer for that. 😛😛



Coming to Ranveer's dream that night, there's a lot of symbolisms about that and this was one of them as well. 😉😉 But like you said, the two things that she truly stood for that night were the two things he was accused of breaking as well and life's been just bitterly unfair to him... 🥺🥺 On a lighter note, yes he does feed her! 😃😃 How I wish he were real... 😔😔



Coming to Chirag baba, like I told you during the second set of the interludes only that he's so going to be screwed over by Ishaani, and the time begins now. 🥳🥳 And he's going to get ek ke saath ek free with Ranveer as well.



Moving over to Ranveer being a blabbermouth, yeah that was me as well wanting to throw water on his face and to ask him to shut up. 👎🏼👎🏼 But oh yeah, because he knows what that one mistake cost him and what the grey eyed woman cost him, he's never going to forget her anytime soon. 🤡🤡 And as to Chirag, oh yeah that ass unfortunately does have exceptionally brilliant manipulation skills. 🤢🤢



In a way, it wouldn't be completely wrong to think so because the kind of love that he had was bound to be accompanied by the same intensity of pain as well. 😒😒 But I'm happy that you like Chirag's characterization as a villian because the insanity and disgust that I've put myself through for it was just... 😵😵



But sab doodh ka doodh and pani ka pani hone waala hai Book 6 mein. 😎😎 As to your question about RV, well you'll get your answer in Interlude 20 itself. And well, that line made me go all as well, although Chirag didn't even leave that as well. And coming to the chapter in all, I'm juts thrilled that you found it that well written. ☺️☺️



Thank you so much once again! ❤️❤️

Edited by LadyMeringue - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: PrinceAsif

Great episode dude ...it was really marvelous... Hate that chirag ...that snake is really cunning...but waiting eagerly for next episode & ISHVEER union





Thank you so much! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it. ⭐️⭐️ And the next chapter is here! ❤️❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Bloomfield

Thank you so much for the dedication, Mummy! 🤗🤗





You're always welcome, sweetie! ❤️❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Mayashelly

Hy LM,
This chapter is good that the calm starts and we know what happened next..
So chirag planned this game well and won it to his best...
So this was the one which he thought of...
Ishani gonna act as per...
1 more to go...
Can't wait for it dr... Do it soon... 😊
Keep smiling 😉
Take care 😳





Thank you so much, dearie! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️ Yeah Chirag planned his game well and unfortunately both Ranveer and Ishaani fell for it. Thank you so much once again and the next chapter is here now! ❤️❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Anne30ishveer

Wooh...Tiring epistle. Sry, Late reply I know I know. Coming to the chapter it was as usual awsmm. And Ranveer in action but it would do no good. And now I understand what did you meant in that interlude 16 about Ranveer saying ''what if I said''. It was about Ishani being illegitimate. He gave her biggest secret out but as a mistake. But he was so possessive when he said' I love her and I am willing to do any thing that make her my own'. Wow. How I wish someone loves me like that. Ranveer loves her so much I wish every girl gets a lover like him.
Err..where was I. Oh yes. You know when you were describing Ishani's state I thought she was dead but I re read that line again and realised that u were just giving an idea about her state. Oh my I was really shocked. Now as we all know that she is going to destroy HIM so what is the next epistle about. I really don't have any clue now. But whatever it is about it is surely going to be awsmm. And ur writing style. God. u r too too too good. Can u tell me which course u r doing?
And no worries dear. You can answer the PM any time. Actually I myself don't have any time for any piece of writing as my pre-Sa are going to start from next week. I just wanted some tips u can give me anytime and all the best for ur xams dear...

Love u always and hamesha..






Thank you so much, sweetheart! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️



Coming to the review, yeah it was a tiring epistle to write as well emotionally. Oh yeah, the links finally sit for what happened in Interlude 16 and I'm glad that it all fits now. 😳😳 Hehe, and don't we all wish that we had someone like Ranveer in our lives? 😛😛



Oh yeah, her state of mind was as good as that only, though. 😭😭 And well, the next epistle is more of Chirag destroying her to the point where she destroys him, unfortunately. 🤔🤔 As to what course I'm doing currently, I'm currently in my second year pursuing my Bachelors in Accounting and Finance. 😃😃



Thank you so much for all the love and support once again! ❤️❤️



Loads of love,
LM ❤️❤️
Edited by LadyMeringue - 8 years ago

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