#4 ~FF: Untold Stories~ - Page 118

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

I am fine dear but just like you studies are pacing up and now taking out time is a taskful thing.


seriously he is an exception. ishani well her subconscious love always gave both anger and happiness. Falguni was like that but she redeemed herself but is something more coming on that front or you were talking about the book.


Did I? but I dont know how i always love to read the hidden meaning it gives a new sense and also make me love your work even more.


well then i think it's high time you change your pen name to LADY MAGICIAN. I cannot do away with the LM I love this short version.😆😆 I actually want to know how come you are so mature and sensible I mean you have 1450cc or another brain to accomplice all these thoughts. I guess the thoughts and the characters are inspired from you only in smartness.



honestly i was going to give a review again for the book dusk of glorious era and honestly epistle 80, and interlude 11, 16 still made me cry buckets and I will admit after reading these I didnt had the strength to read from epistle 81 what a masterpiece dear seriously. I love you so much for giving this book I know I have told it thousands of time but be ready to listen it zillion of times even that wouldn't suffice.

I wanted to send this as a PM but then I thought you will read it here. Honestly i wanted to tell you this long back but i dont know how you will think of it I am not derogating your work but the truth is had this book been written by a well known writer i might have not loved it so much but coming from you I mean don't take this in wrong way but this awesome book coming from you a simple, humble person is what makes me love it so much. I mean you wrote it worked on it taking each of our review seriously including our every wish and yet never compromising on the story and making it more and more perfect daily by adding editing and adding your creativity to it was what that makes this book so special for me. It shows how much effort you took and also taught me you don't need to be trained for achieving what you want neither its a legacy that you inherit its just your hard work, dedication and passion towards it that is what matters and it can put anything as a masterpiece or the best thing. sorry i say a little too much but this is what honestly i feel. Its nothing new that I have praised your work but i wanted to tell this since long time.

lots of love
DV

I hope that they are going well though. 😳😳


Yep, that's true about Ishani. 😛😛 As to Falguni, I was talking about the book only. 😊😊


And sometimes, you give it a perspective that fits so well, it makes me wonder how it all fit so well, if that makes sense. 🤔🤔


Every time I read this line, it just makes me blush. ☺️☺️ A lot of the things in the characters have been inspired from me, I won't deny that, but the logic they use is actually my sheer frustration over how stupid they were in the show. And I love my pen name too, especially the initials.


That book was perhaps the most difficult thing that I've penned so far, and the pain I've had to put myself through while writing it was what perhaps bled through the characters as well. 😒😒 And God, had your and Elvish's and Matsh's reviews not been there as a constant, especially yours, I don't know whether I'd have even been able to write through the book. 😕😕


And coming to what you've said, this really, really, really means a lot to me and I cannot even begin to express how much I cherish your views on this. 🤗🤗 Jhappi pa, jhappi pa... ❤️❤️


Loads and loads of love,
LM

And sometimes, you give it a perspective that fits so well, it makes me wonder how it all fit so well, if that makes sense. 🤔🤔

😊😊

Every time I read this line, it just makes me blush. ☺️☺️ A lot of the things in the characters have been inspired from me, I won't deny that, but the logic they use is actually my sheer frustration over how stupid they were in the show. And I love my pen name too, especially the initials.

i guess i was right then that lot of your characters are inspired by you itself. blushing😳😳 well i guess i did say something good. Its not only your its the whole ishveer fandom frustation which has been justified in this book that's the reason we all love this book so much. 😳😳
and regarding pen name that is so true and even i love the initials

That book was perhaps the most difficult thing that I've penned so far, and the pain I've had to put myself through while writing it was what perhaps bled through the characters as well. 😒😒 And God, had your and Elvish's and Matsh's reviews not been there as a constant, especially yours, I don't know whether I'd have even been able to write through the book. 😕😕

same is the case with me I am reading them again those chapters are the most difficult to read for me and it makes me wonder how much difficult it would have been for you specially to write to perspective ranveer hoping and building his sandcastle and here in reality every bit of his sandcastle is getting washed by the waves slowly and steadily leaving nothing but a unfamiliar territory. if that makes any sense. and giving the intensity and difficulty of that phase I am glad that I was there because there is no way i could not review your work and at that time it was like a ritual for me your update and my review i had to do it no matter what 😆😆😆 whether its chishani or beloved ritika for me it was just this way to show the support and well its your work.
Elvish is the sweetest person so I am damn sure she would never leave no matter what.😳

And coming to what you've said, this really, really, really means a lot to me and I cannot even begin to express how much I cherish your views on this. 🤗🤗 Jhappi pa, jhappi pa... ❤️❤️

big jhappi dear. 😳😳

your university exams will be going on now?

Hehe, when you write things as intricate and detailed as this, thing about yourself do bleed their way into the story as well. 😳😳 It's what creates that special connect with the story because its your baby that you've made with your mind, heart and soul, and with your own blood, sweat and tears. And yeah, its the entire IshVeer's fandom whose bhadaas I've had to remove here. 😆😆

well thats so true. well this was totally your baby you did everything for it and kept it going even in difficult times. that's the only thing we can do right now after the show ended leaving us high and dry.

For me, Ranveer's chapters were the emotional breaks I got still because they're much lighter than the Ishani ones in terms of approach (excluding his last three entries, that is). 😊😊 It was the Ishani chapters that actually took a toll on me because just conceiving the entire plot about how sickeningly Chirag had manipulated her step by step was morally aversing to me. 🤢🤢

what you have written is word to word correct in the end it brought the impact of what really happened in those two years and trust me it was difficult as hell to read after she hugs him and announces that she got engaged.


And like I told you, had you not been there trying to actually analyze and find sense in it, I don't know whether I'd have managed to do it all with the kind of passion and justice that I hopefully did.

😳😳
And yes, Elvish has been my whole and soul through US entirely.

she definitely was.😊😊


My exams are done with, and I have my vacations going on atm. 😉😉
wow thats really great enjoy your vacations.

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

well thats so true. well this was totally your baby you did everything for it and kept it going even in difficult times. that's the only thing we can do right now after the show ended leaving us high and dry.


what you have written is word to word correct in the end it brought the impact of what really happened in those two years and trust me it was difficult as hell to read after she hugs him and announces that she got engaged.


wow thats really great enjoy your vacations.

😳😳 The forum being alive with fanfiction works even after a year of the show getting over is a huge, huge thing! 😊😊

really ishveer fans loyality cannot be questioned true ishveer fans always supported them no matter what and you all writers deserve a big credit of it for making our ishveer alive and in more special way.

And it goes to show the loyalty fans have in spite of however or whatever we were put through.

what we were put through despite being always supportive was most heartbreaking thing infact more than the butchering of the story line.


😭😭


life is good. as i am having a competitive exam so studies are continous process unless i clear it so its going on fine but there are some serious phases of depressions and frustation but at those time US, NC, soulmate comes handy.

your life must be fun now?

can we have something as vacations are going on I mean not now but whenever you get time its been a while since i read something from you.☺️
no compulsion just a thought😆😆

Hey LM.. 😊 😊 well I know u r not at all expecting this now.. but since I did have in mind to complete my reviews for all the chapter, I am here.. so without saying anything about my weird timings let me straight go to the meaningful work.. 😊

So chapter 23.. (well this chapter has definite lots of reasons for such huge delay 😉 😉 ) Our boy leaving the party & still in his angry mode.. still under the shock she gave him earlier although I thought dance ke baad to he'll calm down but no.. he wants something more.. 😆 😆 so here is Ishani behind him, aage aage ranveer and piche piche Ishani.. like tom & Jerry.. and rains joining them.. LM I have to say, starting se hi u created a maahol.. matlab sachchi, yahin we got indication ke aage kya hone vala hai.. 😳 😳

Adamant Ishani to know his answer now and afraid & tormented ranveer fighting with himself, his fears & concerns.. and in between such lines.. "Ishaani, please... he begged, but Ishaani didn't pay heed" 😆 😆 but why the baby looked harassed.. abhi to Ishani ne kuch kiya bhi nahi 🤪 🤪 or we can say mental harassment.. but chalo coming to serious talks, he revealed his fears which shocked her also.. fear of loosing all his loved ones constantly 😔 😔 , although why was he angry, coz we can say that Ishani was at mistake in her acts but what about harshad & ritika.. but I think it's more about his anger on himself that why he have to face so much & in Ishani's case also he is considering him only responsible so additional burden of his guilt.. aur if these things are not enough than everybody thoping promises on him, everyone trying to make his life according to them although it was for his good only but still it is frustrating, and his reason was somehow valid that if she leaves him again he can't survive.. banda already jhelofied so much that he can't take it anymore..

But now Ishani got her mind right, he obviously can't spend his entire life with this fear and now when they genuinely stand a chance he can't leave like that.. her explanation to him was nice ⭐️ ⭐️ he has to move on n now even her life is dependent on this to how could she let him decide whatever comes to his mind.. and how much she is requesting.. sahi hai how can she let him go again.. 👍🏼 👍🏼 but u know his statement that she'll not be able to swim out of his ocean of love was funny, Ishani must be thinking na ke beta that we'll see, who'll drown & who'll sail.. 😉 😉 but ye ranveer ko manana to bohot hi mushkil hai re.. maan hi nahi raha.. and as me & dv were discussing his morality is also an issue with ye galat hai.. 😆 😆 she has to remind him all kasme vaade.. koi baat to asar kare & finally after all her efforts he started to melt.. but what is this only few seconds of passion & again his morality comes back but why he always gets so shocked.. looking aghast.. 😆 😆 and there he walks away, vo to Ishani was lost in the moment varna jane hi na deti but to an extent it's right only, ab they definitely can't do this in pathway.. 🤪

and now quoting irritating laxmi maasi from the show "purana pyar purani sharab ki tarah hota hai, ek baar mil jaye to fir hosh kidhar" same happened with Ishani ☺️ kitni mehnat se she prepared him & he again backed out.. so for how long she'll bear this and now when she did get a taste of original ranveer to fir how can she let him go.. and our girl set on her mission.. this is the thing I like about her, jo soch liya fir vo karna hai 😎 😎 how determinedly she went to his room.. few lines for her act, I mean she must be man hi man singing na, tu haan kar ya na kar tu hai mera ranveer 🤣 🤣 plan to bilkul yahi hai ladki ka & then rapping at his door.. ab vaise I would say ke jab he knew that its her then why did he opened the door but what can he do, its Ishani afterall.. and this line "the same flicker of love upon his face that turned into fear the moment realization dawned upon him".. baby got scared of what's coming.. sahi hai, he must understood na ke ab mujhe koi nahi bacha sakta, aaj to meri luti hi luti, ab kya karoon main 🤪 🤪 and on the other hand look at our girl, she is getting more and more enticed by every moment.. have to say the description u gave here for feelings was very effective, the way u described her desires n emotions was 👏 👏 ladki ki sari bhavnayein bahar aa gai.. aur ranveer bechara kya bole.. how simply he asked that what do she wants and here is Ishu, she knows that her words will create only trouble which she can't afford now, so she chose the safest answer.. kab se I wanted her to say that she just wants him and finally she did, khushi ke aansoo although it was a khatre ki ghanti for him and then attack.. LM this part was crazy, wild Ishani & stumbling ranveer ☺️ u know how many times I stopped at this point, isi point pe I always gets crazy, aage ka padhne ke lie thodi der baad hosh ata tha hamesha 🤪 🤪but now she did it & then put open her heart for him, ranveer ko bhi jhatka laga hoga sunke coz she did said what all he wanted to hear from her, what all he wanted her to feel for him ❤️ ❤️ & ye sahi hai baat bhi chalu trial bhi chalu, to bring him in mood but samne to ranveer hai na.. 🤣 🤣 achcha what m thinking here is had ranveer not agreed fir kya hota, girl did feel disappointed at last but who knows when her mood changes, she had decided ke aaj to she will have it to kya vo sharafat se chali jati ya fir ek naya hi scene banta😳 😳 ab dekho she was in his room to jaise kiss lia vaise hi she could've done more 🤪 Dv the situation u were saying with bhagwan ke lie mujhe chod do, vohi vala scene hota.. 🤣 🤣

But now right decision at the right time.. finally the spark ignited aur fir to sahi me fire everywhere ☺️ ☺️ what a beautiful description.. from beginning to end, it was too good.. ⭐️ ⭐️ what I always love about ur writing is that u always connects emotions with everything in very well manner and same here.. how magically u wrote their each n every moment.. one by one every step had a different world attached to it, their longing, fears and hesitation, everything was played so perfectly 👍🏼 👍🏼 and really these two are connected by soul, kitne perfect sync n rhythm me the, believe hi nahi hota. 😆 I'll not go in detailing of each & every line coz already said a lot in preparation part of babies but have to say that beautiful words and superb writing.. 👍🏼 🤗 🤗