#4 ~FF: Untold Stories~ - Page 29

Originally posted by: NidsJ

Hey LM... 😊 how r u dear..😊

well, here after a long time so apologies for being invisible for too long.. but better late than never so let's begin.. read till 91..

First of all hands up in d air for d new friendship in town... our FinchVeer... 👏 Finch was already cool with what u've mentioned in interludes till now but here u made him a star.. his intro was totally unexpected.. professor partying with students with beer floating everywhere and his cool dress up with star shaped goggles and by Browser Extension" target="a652c_1471432731_wwwindiaforumscom_342147"> birthday cap.. 🤣 🤣Hilarious.. I was actually imagining him there...and in all this our dukhi baby searching for peace but finding Finch..😆 but how does Ranveer always win in every competition..😲 I mean who will think that he can Finch in beer competition... he never had that and still defeated Finch, must be the experience with his desi tharras helped.. 😉

And now the moment of truth for Ranveer, actually for Finch also but biggest shock must've been for Ranveer, poor boy zor ka jhatka laga bechare ko 😆 but how normal Finch is.. after class again they are buddies..😎 and Finch was kinda cute after Ranveer's explanation of his life.. he was angry with latter's expectations but still his reaction was funny.. 😆 Ranveer was a rare breed according to him but he didn't know that so he himself is.. 😆

And now bad day for Ranveer, first his inability to make it to her on her birthday and then Zaveri bajao his band achche se.. when he already knew who Ranveer is than he could've made it little easy for him but no, easy is just not made for Ranveer... and Ranveer cycling to Zaveri in his formals do look funny.. 😆 but chalo he did get of delivery boy... and now the new entry.. Ritika...😳 well as I already said in beginning it's very very difficult to believe her in the way u presented her but she is here and we have to accept this.. but why was he feeling so much for her in the first meeting itself... 😡 Ranveer baby be in ur boundaries... Ishani ko pata chal gaya to dhulai ho jaygi... 🤣 and tea with pakoras for him... why.. see, Ranveer ki khushi bhi we can't digest now 😆, but after all this taking this rationally Ritika really is a sweet girl and really a needed buddy for Ranveer.. at least he'll find some solutions and peace with her..⭐️⭐️ if only Finch wouldn't give him heart attack.. even I was not thinking of a party, I was also like ke what happened but end was good.. yatch surprise for him..👍🏼 👍🏼

And now coming to the other part of these epistles.. Ishani with Chirag... 🤢 what can I say, to summarize in one line, 4^th nov 2007 to 6 sep 2008, the Black Era of Untold Stories...

But one thing about Chirag.. kaash ke usne apna dimag sahi direction me use kia hota coz definitely he was a perfect planner.. he warned and told Ishani everything in advance still she couldn't even doubt, although her dumbness did served as his advantage but his plan was full proof..

And Ishani also can't be blamed here, the way Chirag presented him, her falling for him did made complete sense but overall form her meeting to her confession, black era for our naive girl.. 🥺

U updated 98^th also and see how much behind I am, but now will catch soon coz only two more to go and I can't wait... and plz tell me are u planning last two in next two days or will it take time.. coz I'll also speed up myself accordingly... 😆

Originally posted by: harisha39

LOVED IT DHI

AND HOW R U?????????

AND HOW OLD R U????

Originally posted by: Mayashelly

Hy dr
How r u
So harshad is dead and they both feel dead without hp 😭
At this time ranveer and ishani both just need eaxh other for them and then didn't care about any other.. Even the proposal of ranveer.. Just Ishani need him beside her aftee her father
And yes nothing gonna be the same anymore...
So the next epistle is about their painful separation and betrayal for each other i think..
Really u r an awsome writer dr.. U made it so well. Love ur writing skills... 👏
Waiting for the next dr
Keep smiling 😳
Take care 😉

Originally posted by: robal

I have been so behind in reading and I just caught with them now, and thank you so much for always sending a PM, I really appreciate it. I feel for ranveer, poor soul lost everything. I can't stand Ishani with Chirag. I am looking forward to the interludes. Your writing is amazing, I truly enjoy reading each and every chapter.

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Hi LM...
Hope you are good.
I am backed to sympathising ishani yet again sorry 😛
i thought they had stopped writing diary after their confession because things that followed after break them so much that they no longer felt the need to pour their emotion into.
This chapter was excellent and honestly apart from the mourning of HP's death few emotions standing out pain and sympathy for the ishveer for their loss and sheer dumbness of ishani, and the solace in heart for the behaviour of ishani.
He is gone and she is broken but you know what i liked that in this whole moment her definition of her true soulmate got truly defined by ranveer he was there to break her fall, to take away her pain to help her emote them and also the fact that she only seeking solace in his arms.
Each and every word which questioned how ishani will survive in this world without her papa was answered by ranveer not by words but by his action. And she comforting him was😳😳 i mean this was most emotional yet lovely moment i just loved it.
A big applause to you for writing that part of them being vulnerable yet having comfort and that moment of them was so intense you nailed it girl totally nothing can be brilliant than that i just so loved it. You are a magician honestly i haven't read such a pain emitting yet lovely description so far as much as i have came across in your writing. A perfect blend of pain and love. Though she lost someone but she found the closest to it who can pour as much love as she yearns for.
I felt so relieved when she threw away chirag's hand and held on it ranveer 😈 badla though short lived but it must have given jitters to that moron thats why he played his last card so intensely that she lost all her sense to think.
This chapter and this need now got more prominent then so ever as i felt because when in the start of interludes when you had mentioned the night where ishani was harming herself and the defence for it she gave to ranveer he had said that she was coward to hide her feelings though i had understood why he said but this chapter explain it vivdly what it meant. That moment in bedroom when she got to know what essence she is seeking all along and how she was yearning for that moment of their closeness and her star was ranveer it explained that her heart got to know that she was seeking ranveer all along but her crooked mind didn't let her admit it because it kept reminding that she was in love with chirag and he was her soulmate and everything she was seeking but her heart knew otherwise.
🤔 i mean she realised what the hell she has been through and was seeking him all along and ranveer also knew but reality and emotional trauma didn't let them realise it.😕 i don't know if i made a sense but this is what i felt.
and her hidden emotion her pain her heart denying to be away from her ranveer and everything messed her so badly that she accepted whatever hid or sorted the mess of her life and chirag's timing was blimey.
She had already lost the biggest benefactor of her life and she trusted him as much as she trusted HP that's why breach of trust by two most beloved person of her life killed her.😭
But this doesn't justifies her brutal murder but however it gave a reason for her behaviour as she was incapable of handling any kind of emotional disturbances.
And ranveer his pain is i don't think we can speak about his plight is he was snatched away from his happiness which was only his and that night he would have got it had it not beenthe reality and some misplaced judgement and he also realised how much ishani was broken after he went away. his heart knew but he thought otherwise.
Amazing update dear the only chapter from ishani that didn't irritated but only gave sympathy for her in this book by Advertise" target="a652c_1471433983_wwwindiaforumscom_357064"> apart from few starting ones. loved this chapter totally.
thnx for pm

WAITING FOR INTERLUDES

NO CHISHANI
ONLY 2 MORE TO GO😛

Originally posted by: PrinceAsif

Mind boiling story sis...ur presentation skill is much more fantastic sis...pls ans me if ISHVEER gonna unite or not??

Originally posted by: srp_roy

Hello LM, I am new here and I want to tell you that I am a huge fan of your both ffs Neapolitan City and Untold Stories. Both your ffs have their own charm. But now speaking about US I want to tell you that you are much much more than awesome. The way you have picturized the change in characters of ranveer and ishaani is just wow. If epistles' ranveer is a lover boy then the interlude one is a brilliant manipulator and if epistles' ishani is an innocent and sweet girl a bit tomboyish then interlude one is just a bitch(there is no better way to describe her). You have portrayed their love, scars and pain with sheer beauty. Finally I just want to request you one little thing please don't end your ffs in a sadistic way, after all the suffering they have undergone in the hands of the fate due to the chirkut's manipulations and each others follies they both deserve a happily ever after kind of ending.
Thank you.