#4 ~FF: Untold Stories~ - Page 33

Originally posted by: NidsJ

Hey Girl...😊😊 so here again and little on time may be... ok so done till 96..

In these chapters one good thing was her ever existing emptiness.. 👏, it's always there for her but she can't put a finger on what is it.. why.. why girl.. but as she said she can't even think in that way for Ranveer so no point of keeping any hopes.. 😔 another good thing was her fight with Chirag over engagement without Ranveer, little solace it was ⭐️ but result was again 😔... nothing good.. but the best thing was her paintings' convo with Chirag...👏 huge collection she has and all are important for her but Ranveer's one is precious, just loved her dhamki and planning of tearing the person limb by limb if anybody messes with them.. 👍🏼 and if we go by present scenario bohot maza aane vala hai, just waiting for her to complete her oath and she is already on the mission.. ab tera kya hoga Chirag...😈 😈😈

After this few good points now coming to other side... stargazing with him.. 🤢 and those so affectionate kisses and hugs...even more 🤢🤢 🤢 just read them and forget them, and this Chirag is so overly kameena yar 😡😡, giving her such huge false hopes of shifting to US n all and he stopped all means of contacts also, she didn't even got mails and how well he used this vulnerability of hers to his advantage.. and even more shocking thing was she was also getting affected.. but what can she do, what u keep listening all the time do affects you and same is happening with her 😔 and Chirag is doing it in such a perfect way that she can't even doubt... Chirag 🤬 🤬 🤬

And surprise was Gauri and Pranav... finally at least here they got solace 🥳, show people were to just 🤢, ek to she was married without the will and then she got that monster... cruel people...😡 and finally they forgot her in hospital😆, Ishveer came back but she never returned.. 🤣 🤣 side characters ki to happy ending dikha dete kam se kam...

And now moving to Ranveer, no connection with Ishani from long time but one thing, how he forgot Ishani's number... 😕 is it possible... and was his phone lost also a kartoot of that 🤬?? But Ritika's part was painful, sad story of her mom 💔 and even more sad part is their future. I mean how the entire clan will end, big name Zaveri's are but what will remain after few years... nothing... bura hua but have to say andar hi andar its kinda relief , m just imagining in original serial (minus the marriage stuff ofcourse 🤢), Ritika dying of heart disease with no one to take over her evilness.. 🥳 dil ko sukoon... ❤️ ❤️

Ok, where was I, yes.. for whom that confession was...😲 really it was for Ranveer...??😲 ye kab aur kaise...😲 but have to say haan if this is true, brave girl she is, she still prioritized his love and let him go..👏how sane ur Ritika is.. 😲 hypothetical...🤣 🤣

And now Ranveer moving to India with Ishani excitedly waiting for him... but but but it just breaks my heart.. all his fears will come true 😭, we know what is going to happen, still we are going to read, it's like jaan boojh kar ghadde mein girna ...but just like Ranveer we also have phooti kismat so gearing up myself...

and u r done with 100... 👍🏼 👍🏼.. but as u said u have exams on 22 to 24 and that too 2 per day but still u r updating..😆 focus there girl..😆 n all the best...🤗 🤗

Originally posted by: Mayashelly

Hy dr 👏
Completed the Epistles...
This Chirag i think entered both ranveer and ishani's brain and played his card favouring him..
And now their trust breaks to the fullest for each other... 😭
Ishani is right now this night gonna change their path of life... But to the worse they unexpected...
She was trusting her heart now and if she would havr trusted it for the whole night conversation they would have been well with their life...
Their thirteen years of friendship anniversary became the desert of their life...
Waiting for interludes now...
😊
Keep smiling 😉
Take care 😳

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

Dv, Anne and LSB, I've un-reserved my responses to your reviews on Pages 40 and 41 respectively! 😳😳 Sorry for the delay in them though, was kinda stuck up.

I'll be getting to the rest of the reviews in a while. 😃😃

Originally posted by: Anne30ishveer

And here it is...Our last step towards the dawn. We are completed. Done. And the century is complete, finally. Wow. I just can't believe it that the end is near. You are THE most professional writer I have ever crashed with. The journey is going to get completed with your magic. Oh God I don't know how am I supposed to pen down my feelings. This was just fabulous. And I think I am going to get an insomnia after reading this. Last one this was the last one. And everyone know's to phrase Ishani's feelings except for herself. Its ''Because I love him''. And this epistle was just before the interlude 16. Well, Surprise it was. OK so it it is over. Book 5 is over finally. And interludes are next wohoo. But I suppose they will come a little late as they need complete perfection. Which you give to your each and every chapter. And this chapter was amazing. Ishani called off her marriage with Chirag but it's temporary (Yeah I know their marriage was temporary as well). And she trusts him so much but he is going to tell her. Actually it is good. It only tells how much Ranveer is honest to her that even though he could now achieve her easily still he does not wants to lie to her. Well so Ms. Perfectionist, we are here to the interludes. Wow. waiting badly and sorry I am out of words so will give a longer review after I get myself back to normal...
Waiting for the interludes...

P.s.- Can u give an idea of the dates of the interludes so that I can make my heart stop fluttering so much...Hehe..kidding...But plzz just for
Interludes coming...wohoo

Originally posted by: PrinceAsif

i loved when Ishani said to that sticky snake that she's done with her relationship...but i'm always waiting for the golden moment when both Ishani & Ranveer will overcome all the hurdles & unite once & for all...by the way it's a mind boiling epistle...waiting for next

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Congratulations for the completion of 100 epistles🥳👏
And honestly all these epistle were awesome ones and never ones their quality and content compromised. you are a true gem in writing dear.👏👏
well i thought you wouldn't update because of exams but you are seriously a thorough professional
one more thing to admire about yourself😉
last step to dawn end of chishani terror🤣
i just noticed one thing that your every book gradually builds towards their relationship whether good or bad i mean this book started with their separation and she starting to realise her love for him though misguided in the midway with she loosing her trust on him actually only face changed not the trust and lastly it was again them and their relationship.If in the start of the book it started with ranveer being replaced by chirag then in the end it was back to square one.
This chapter gave me a little solace😈 though short lived but very tempting and much needed
Important things first a big applause to you and ishani for using all the colourful words for that chirkut👏😳
she made him priority over ranveer😡 but honestly in this epistle i felt for ishani a lot she was this close to realising her feelings for ranveer all her calm emotions and heart were guiding towards that and she trusted him to never go away but this girl seriously always got used by her loved ones and this is disheartening i mean she got entangled in this mess paid price for loving someone so much.
In this entry from the start her manipulated self has started taking over and if only she knew why ranveer went away from her😕 half knowledge is dangerous
in this whole chapter an exceptional thing was portrayal of ishani's emotions i mean everything her riled up senses a mix emotions in her heart all the pains taking over that's what when we are too sad all the sad feeling combine themselves and these mix emotion are due to the sudden exposure of her heart to its vulnerability and emergence of ranveer whom she was seeking all along.
Just out of curiosity why always "we need to talk" ends up in break up🤣 i mean in this case it was amazing but still?🤓
and their conversation was amazing it gave all the long lasting solace which we were seeking in this book specially the part of she defending ranveer and you know thank you for letting chirag see them sleeping together it was like😈 you know this is the reason why he sought to secure shanilla option and also he came up with such a deadly plan😡 i hope he gets to witness these sights in future also.😉
and honestly her mixed emotions regarding everything was just amazingly written its like happening in real and her heart is getting painted with mix of 3different colours but the black of her heart is not allowing anything to remain fix upon it and yup i just mixed one more thing you know you ha mentioned ranveer liking black waters well it kind of reminded that he was that black and her heart ws always painted with it because ranveer mixed his colours into it though keeping it the same but yet changing it entirely. Stupid i guess😲
when she retracted her hands away from chirag and thought about ranveer and also when she gave him disinterested looks i felt like dancing despite knowing what was coming i celebrated because ritika told to cherish small moments🤣
Chirag impressed me so much i mean really he was acting as damsel in distress bechara all he want is to love her and make her happy protect her honestly none of the villains can be so disguisting as you have written the character of chirag and it really amazing to see how perfectly you have crafted his character a complete and smart villain someone to look out for unlike the comedy circus of serial.😃 he was just perfect in playing with her mind making her guilty and be in love with ranveer and yet make her hate his face and the way he always speaks truth daringly despite trading with dangerous waters is the most amazing quality of his.( in case you are wondering that what is wrong with me in praising chirag well then INTERLUDES ARE COMING🤣) chirag beat you spoke about ranveer so much and two times and also called him servant well allah bachaye tujhe jungli billi se
and in those few moments he played out his entire game of 18 months pretending to love her yet having hatred for her and making her remind all the timings of her despair and hating ranveer. she trusted ranveer the most and he was the last strand of sanity. I just wonder what she might have become after that night and after realising what she did to them its difficult to decipher her state of mind in present times its like she dying everyday and yet can do nothing about it.
In this whole chapter it was her heart that was speaking and and her mind was trying all the best to contradict it.she don't know why she want to complete painting well because you love him idiot i felt like going there and shouting at her head.
she didn't went to confront him just to wish him because she trusted him but their conversation turned this towards her.
Ishani compensated a lot in this one chapter a lot for the havoc she was creating throughout ths book with her love saga.😆😆
Exceptionally well executed chapter loved it totally every emotion everything was just amazing and had we not read about what transpired later one could have easily got caught in the trap that everything was becoming normal and they would be together. A big applause for creating this aura.
thnx for pm

🥳INTERLUDES COMING
can't wait for it now

Originally posted by: lifesobeautiful

Hii LM
CONGRATULATION FOR U COMPLETED 100 EPISTLES 👏 I WISH U WRITE MORE FF...
its was breathkeaing update dr..this chirkut wat a man he vry well know when he playing his last card he's so confidently say abt all conversation btw her nd ranveer bcoz our dombo ishani hv not at the sitution that she think abt anything.but ilike the way where ishani used vry rangeen 😆 word for chirkut..dil khush ho gya 😆
Ishani trust on ranveer so blindly she can't if ranveer betrayed him but This dark night is gone be change their life forever.. 🥺
Any way chishni love troucher end now, nd our most awaited interlude is coming...
Update soon..nd hope ur exam is going on welll...

Originally posted by: tnzila

hey dear😃😃😃
congrats on completed 100 Epistle🥳
you are fabulous writer no doubt👏
yes i read your Epistle but not able to review it because of my English is not well😭

but never stop write on ishveer dear always keep them alive through your beautiful writing😳😳❤️

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

dont need to apologise for the delay dear.
how was you exams?

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

Dv, Anne and LSB, I've un-reserved my responses to your reviews on Pages 40 and 41 respectively!😳😳Sorry for the delay in them though, was kinda stuck up.

I'll be getting to the rest of the reviews in a while.😃😃