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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis

Montreal, Canada.

"I am going out of town for a month in three days. Actually, I am going back to my hometown, do you think in my absence you will be able to manage the bookstore? I had arranged for a man from the agency to do the job in my absence, but he never contacted me back." he requested, looking at her closely. Maya couldn't believe her luck, she smiled and replied, "Sure, I love coming here! It will be my pleasure." ---i wud love to see her take care of the book store ..u know why ?😉 rishaan kapoor can come in anytime !!!!😆☺️ am Rishaanified ☺️

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Rishaan Kapoor was going through the email Meera had sent him on his laptop. "Maya..." he whispered. Looking at the picture of the girl who had a dark red umbrella, shopping bag in one hand and her phone on the other, she was smiling looking at her phone, I see you have been living quite a normal, lonely and boring life up till now... let's spice it up a little for you, shall we?' he thought. --now am rally waiting for it !!! ☺️

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a small table at the left (she was a lefty), ----aaawww

Just as she made sure everything was at place, the door bell rang and she answered the door. Anna stood on the door with grocery bags in her hand. "Let's make pizza!" she gushed with wide eyes.

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Mumbai, India.

He blinked twice in pain as he saw the pavement getting painted with blood before he blacked out in oblivion. --accident ???

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Montreal, Canada.

Anna was an Indian Christian. --just like me !!! 😳😆

"So, you are looking for your soul mate? I guess everyone looks for the other half of their being." Anna said thoughtfully. Just then a tune that Maya have never heard before started playing...

Baahon ke darmiyaan...

Do pyaar mil rahe hai... --i loved it !!!!😳

Maya's breath seemed to catch as she spoke, "I am not sure if I am looking for him or..."


Khulte bandh hote labon ki yeh ankahi,


Mujhse kahe rahi hai ke badh ne de bekhudi... ---loved the way u have connected the lyrics to each of the lines she felt n they spoke 😳

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"So she believed!" Rishaan grinned.

"You are a prick, you know?" Rudra said shaking his head. --hahha am loving the brothers conversation !!!😆

Rudra groaned hearing that. 'Not that dimwit!' he thought. ----hahahah LOL this is hilarious😆

"She will help you out; in fact you just have to boss her around. She has this knack to give me what I want, whenever I want it and exactly how I want it. I don't know from where she got this trait of hers!" --she has got this from bittuji 😳



now i need the next !!!! 😆Impatient soul😳 😆 !!!


Another Awesome update maria !👏

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Posted: 11 years ago
YOU ARE DAMN GOOD AT WRITING
I AM COMPLETELY RIVETED WITH THIS STORY
LOVE THE COMPLICATED BROTHERLY BOND BETWEEN RUDRA AND RISHAAN
THOUGH THEY DONT INTERFERE IN EACH OTHER'S LIFE,ONE CAN DEPEND ON THE OTHER AND THEY UNDERSTAND EACH OTHER
RUDRA WAS RIGHT - HE IS THE ONE WITH SUICIDAL TENDENCY - SOMETHING TO DO WITH PAST
MEERA IS A TRUE COPY OF BITTUJI - THEY DONT KNOW THE CONNECTION YET
AND RUDRA - ONE OF THESE DAYS MEERA IS GOING TO SURPRISE YOU

MAYA'S LIFE IS GOING TO CHANGE WITH A VENGEANCE - SHE IS NOW RISHAAN'S OBSESSION AND HE IS NOT GOING TO LEAVE HER
THE SONG DISTURBED HER AND SHE HATES BOLLYWOOD - RECEIPE FOR TROUBLE
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Posted: 11 years ago
well that was a mind blowing phenomenal update
i loved that maya loves books
and this detective could take god pics and all details
i love how meera is doing the job so well
i love when rishaan said to rudra abou meera doing exactly what he wants
i loved as it indirectly referred to bittuji
i loved the song bahon ke darmiyaan
so maya felt something deep in her heart
and she felt her head is hurting ? thats starnge
so we get 2 faces of rudra
1 he is a daredevil and does dangerous things
like jaan ki baazi lagana
2 he helps his brother always in any situation
that is interesting
and i want to know if anna boyfriend is an important character ?
and why does rishaan want to spice up mayas life ?
i am loving this story as its progressing
maya and rishaan have so many character layers
sorry for the delay in the reply
i was a bit busy this time
Edited by rima4ever - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

i love people who give long updates and long replies 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update 😃😃😃 Thanks Maria😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update 👏 👏 👏

i luv the r brothers and their wicked talks 😎
buck up! i think i'm liking rudra more 😉
so anna's bf is jon! who is this now? any connection? he aint meera's bro naa?
rudra and rishaan arent twins right? 🤓 (i dont mind 😉)
so maya and the bookstore! aah i c coffee brewing at the bookstore soon 😆 😉 😛
baahon ke darmiyan was nice...as i commented earlier i was hoping for such scenes 😳
i'm dying to know about maya n rk's past...i mean parents n stuff...

update soon 😳 🤗
i have a request...pls let maya/madhu get dreams of Rk and his mesmerizing stare at her ...i mean maya getting a dream of only rishabh kundra's stare...and the song playing..baahon ke darmiyaan...n then alarm 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
very well written
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update😳 i loved it ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Maria when are u updating the next ??? 🤔

please surprise me wit a double doze...coz its gonna be weekend ..ill be bored 😆
Edited by BeautyForAshes - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: BeautyForAshes

Maria when are u updating the next ??? 🤔

please surprise me wit a double doze...coz its gonna be weekend ..ill be bored 😆


Lol! Aren't you getting a little demanding? 😛😆

I was thinking of giving a double update on Sunday, to be honest.

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