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Ankita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#201

2 questions is there any other character other then Bittuji from season 1 and he hasn't recognised his chief and thinks him as an imposter 😲 😆 and will RK and Madhu will remember their past life in future ?

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Maria

@Valar.Morghulis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever
superb update!so bittuji is meera's father!& rk looks like rishab & he knows it!waiting for them to meet soon!pls continue soon!

Thank you so much. 😳

I will update around same time today.

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Maria

@Valar.Morghulis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: BeautyForAshes

ETA :

Now girlieee please make sure u post the next one as a surprise sooon 😳

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Anki it was wonderful lines ...Appreciate the hard works ...🤗

Maria ..keep writing am loving it ... 😳 dont mind ..i keep replying my thots on each lines ...u just take a read ..neednt repy .. as it will be quite long after updating chapters 😳 🤗

Ahh... Bella... 🤗

Love your comments, seriously! 😳

But don't hate Rudra so much... abhi toh he hasn't done anything at all... 😆

I see you are Rishaan-ified! 😆

I just had to add Bittuji... I have always been a fan of his support and loyalty towards his Chief and Bhabhiji... I wanted to show how their deaths affected him... and rest you will know later... 😳

Bella... that scene with Madhubala wearing pink blouse and black saree was from Ishq Ek Junoon.. remember the Rasiya song? 😉😆

I will be updating really soon.. thanks so much for your feedback! 😳

Edited by Valar.Morghulis - 11 years ago

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Maria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#204

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LostTraveller

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Posted: 11 years ago

#205

Congrats to us for 4th chappie 🥳
I absolutely loved it 😃
Maya's never give up attitude.👏
Rishaan's slowly emerging obssession with Madhubala.😲
Meera's professionalism at the cost of her health and heart.
And lastly...most importantly this unexplainable alluring yet repelling mystery enshrouding this Rudra.

I loved the brother's conversation...the sarcastic barbs...the innuendos...and from the last lines...undertones of a painful past.😳

But guess what takes the cake?😉
The Song Scene!!
It turned out awesome...the eerie ambience of a tune of old bringing to surface the forgotten memories that Maya can feel yet not voice into thoughts...
And the words of the song...used in the right place...match the mood of the scene so perfectly.

So Rishaan is upto something devious! 😲
Maya wants nothing to do with Bollywood it seems...😕
And Rudra...aaahhh...Rudra has revealed 2 faces to his character...the suicidal destructive maniac and the guy who uncannily understands his brother's needs ...quite paradoxical😲.

To find out what happens next...does RK meet his Madhubala...stay tuned for next chapter 😎

Edited by -Evil-Defiance- - 11 years ago

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taraka2005

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Posted: 11 years ago

#206

Wah Wah Manki kya update hai...awsm 👏

Manki 😛😛

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rekha

@rekha.366

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Posted: 11 years ago

#207

wonderful update dear ,maya loves books and me too😳😳 ,she find her suitable job , liked maya ,and ana bonding , loved the convo ,of the sexy RR BROTHERS , liked the line use her ,poor meera kaha phas gayi dhono bhai ko beech ,waiting for next update yaar mujse intezzar nahi hoth ,waiting for maya and rishaan meeting ,and another nasty encounter of meera and rudra ,yaar i love this RR brothers

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LostTraveller

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Posted: 11 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: tulipstar
Wah Wah Manki kya update hai...awsm 👏
Manki 😛😛

Tru...😳
😡 Enough with that awful naamkaran 🤣

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Maria

@Valar.Morghulis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: tulipstar
Story is getting interrrsting 😊

Thanks Tru.. 😳

Originally posted by: arshisfan
I looove it dear, I'm so excited to read more, you are sooo Good girl, I love the way you are weaving your web👏👏👏

So Meera is our dear Bittuji's daughter
The new superstar's name is Rishaan, I like the name, sounds beautiful, I'm not good at hindi, so can you tell me the meaning of the name?😳

So Rishaan looks like Rishab
and Maya looks like Madhubala

Ahaaan😉

ETA: I just read Ankita's comment, so Rishaan means "a good person", thank you for the information Ankita, it was like you read my mind, by the way you are exactely like the Alpha and the Beta you complement each other (Ankita-Maria)

Thank you so much, Najat.

I am glad you're enjoying it. 😳

And Anki found me Rishaan's name. I don't know many Hindi names. 😳

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Survival

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Posted: 11 years ago

#210

Another brilliantly written chapter, I love it😃, I love the kind of bonding the two twisted brothers share, so Rudra is an adrenaline sucker!! interesting, I feel for the poor Meera, it must be hurtful to be used that way, and these two brothers don't have qualms about it.

Maya found a new job and she hates hindi songs!!!!

I wonder how will they meet (Rishaan-Maya), Now he gathered all the information about her..

Waiting for new updates

Keep it up you are doing a wonderful job👏

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