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BeautyForAshes

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis

Lol! Aren't you getting a little demanding? 😛😆

I was thinking of giving a double update on Sunday, to be honest.

this is what happens when i start reading something 😛 ... i wont even move till i finish off that book ...now who do i blame u or me ?? 😆

really ?? thats great !!!! 😳

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Maria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: BeautyForAshes

this is what happens when i start reading something 😛 ... i wont even move till i finish off that book ...now who do i blame u or me ?? 😆

really ?? thats great !!!! 😳

Lol. I know the feeling. 😆

I said I was thinking... 😛😆

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Maria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: amrithas
Wow Maria I just love your FF. Its truly amazing. The description of fall so vivid, not to mention the intriguing male characters and the endearing female ones. I like Rudra and Meera as much as I like Maya and RK. Good going girl. Keep it coming!

Thank you so much, Amy!!

I am glad you're liking the FF so far. 😳

Originally posted by: punam2712
SO RK IS RISHAAN KAPOOR - A LOOK ALIKE OF RISHABH KUNDRA
AND HE HAS FOUND HIS MADHUBALA IN MAYA

BITTUJI STILL MISSES HIS CHIEF AND BHABHIJI AND CONSIDERS RK AN IMPOSTER
MEERA IS IN LOVE WITH RK BUT IN FOR A HEAR BREAK

You got that right!! 😃😳

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amrithas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#224

Full marks again Maria! Keep updating them fast. I'll be waiting!

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Maria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: river123
Lovely, Maria.
So now I'm intrigued by both the brothers. To be honest, a teensy weensy bit more so by Rudra.

Thank you so much, Meenu. 😳

I understand. 😆

I love both the brothers though.

Originally posted by: VildanaROSID
Wooow amazing 👍🏼

Thank you so much. 😳

Originally posted by: mimibm
I was such a dimwit to have started reading your story without going through the prologue...thats why i was having difficulty in connecting the loose ends...but this chapter was the missing link for me...wow...i wish vd had such reincarnations or rather his clones so that we had few more to drool on [LOL..this is getting quite intense...and i m loving your quick updates as well...]

Oh. 😲😆

I am glad you read the prologue as well.

True. It's easy and fun to visualize VD playing such a character. 😳

Thank you so much. 😳

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Maria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: dvs_smiRK
A truly wondrous update Maria 👏 I just really love your eloquent style of storytelling. With such great thought you link mood of surroundings with traits of the characters and incidents in their life both present and past, but it's so beautifully subtle. For instance the way you brought in change of seasons, by way of glorious imagery; expressing why Maya loves the fall as you mirrored this to her own desire to shed the darkness in her past and strive forward just as new life grows on trees..Marvellously articulated. 👏 The shrouded mystery of Rudra is so rife and it's awesome how you kept this intact through the rumour mill convos, keeping us on toes. Gosh, the encounter between Meera and Rishaan (Uff what a name) was so riveting, I laughed out loud at the 'I need you' pause then music to her ears destroyed as he continued 😆 Fabulous comedic touch Maria 👍🏼 Could that movie he was watching possibly be Ishq ek Junoon..hmm. What a contrast Rishaan is to his sibling, smouldering full of attitude but in charmed BBB portrayal, yet manically determined and authoritative when challenged; wonderfully showed us his initial layers 😳. Loved how you made revelations with such eye raising and striking crescendos in this chapter Maria, eagerly waiting your next update 😳

Ahhh... you know I always read your comments when I am tired writing an update. It lifts up my mood. 😳

Thank you so much!!

And yes, he was watching Ishq Ek Junoon, the Rasiya sequence to be exact where Madhubala wore pink blouse with a black saree. 😳

I hope you liked the fourth update as well. 😳

Originally posted by: Chitrarocking
fabulous update👏 tfs for pm maria dear 🤗

Thank you so much, Chitra! 😳

Originally posted by: aan-rish
Awesome update Maria
So Rishaan is RK who looks like RK and Maya is Madhubala. Very interesting. And I like Rudra, want to know more abt him. Meera is Bittuji's daughter and Bittuji does not like his chief's look alike? Btw can u pls pm me the next updates. I tried to send u buddy request but it showed some error. Sorry to bother u but pls I really need to read ur updates. I am taking a break frm show and forum. Both pissing me bigtime. So if I won't get pm I can't follow u. So pls pls pm me.

Btw which actor do u like as Rudra.

Thank you so much. 😳

I am glad my FF is helping you ignore negativity in the show and in the forum.

I will do some research on the actors whom I can visualize as Anna, Meera and Rudra... will let you know soon.

Edited by Valar.Morghulis - 11 years ago

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RisingasPhoenix

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Posted: 11 years ago

#227

wonderful updates loving it ❤️

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mimibm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#228

Know what...I m loving both these brothers equally...it doesn't matter to me which one of them is RK look alike cause they bothhave the sexy traits of RK, customised in their own way...you are taking this story to a level never reached in this forum I suppose...keep it up buddy 👏