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Posted: 18 years ago
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Episode no:-8

Robby and anjali sitting in the cafeteria and anjali sees sujal there waiting for gauriK.she goes to him and K..slaps himK..
Anjali:- yehi hain tumhari galti ki sazaa
Sujal:- tumhari itni himmat ki tumne mujhe chaata maaraKK
Anjali:- u deserve it.....
Robby:- kya hua anjali....isne aisa kya kiya ki tumne ise maara...
Anjali:- yeh pichle 2 dino se isi college mein hain aur phir bhi isne mujhe nahin bataayaK.
Robby:- kya?????? Tum ise jaanti hoK
Anjali:- haan yeh mera puraana dost hainKpichle 10 saalo se jaanti hun iseyKK
Sujalƒlaughs) par tum meri baat to sunoK.
Anjali:- tum mujhse baat na hi karo toh behtar hogaK.
Robby:- hold on yeh tum dono ke bich ki baat hain....i m leaving...anjali mujhe kuch kaam hain ...main chalta hun, baad mein milunga....
Sujal:- anjaliK.main sach mein kuch pareshaan thaK.bahut kuch kehna chahta tha tumse lekin pata nahinK..
Anjali:- kya hua sujalK..aisi kya baat ho gayi thiK..aao baithonK.
Sujal:- gauri K.
Anjali:- gauri toh wahi hain na jisse tum bahut pyar karte hoKK
Sujal:- bahut....lekin pata nahin kyun aajkal who sirf mujhe kaam karta dekhna chahti hainK..tumhi bataon K mere paas itne paise hain toh phir main kyun koi kaam karuK..woh hain ki yeh baat samajhti hi nahin hainK..ab tumhi bataaon ki main kahin galat hoon kya???
Anjali:- woh dekho....wahan ek chota sa talaab hain...ab tum mujhe yeh bataon ki kya tum uss fish ko apne jeevan ka aadhaar bana sakte ho...mere kehne ka matlab hain ki batao kya woh machli khush hain....
Sujal:- haan ....woh khush toh hogi hi na uske chaaro taraf paani hain....
Anjali:- theek kaha tumne par kya kabhi tumne yeh socha hain ki agar yeh paani nahi rahega toh is fish ka kya hoga?
Sujal:- woh mar jaayega....
Anjali:- bilkul theek....usi tarah agar tumhaare paas paisa nahi hoga to kya tum jee paaoge.....nahin na...kyunki tum is ki kadar nahi karte....sujal..zindagi mein us machli ke tarah nahin lekin us nadi ke tarah bano jo apna raasta har gali har mushkil mein nikal leta hain......tumhaarii haalat bhi kuch aisi hi hain toh agar isme gauri ne tumhe sahi raastaa dikhaaya toh kya galat kiya.....
Sujal:- tum theek keh rahi ho anjaliKK
Anjali:- isme tumhaara bhi koi dosh nahi hain sujalK.galti toh haalato ki hoti hainK.kuch ssal pehle inhi haalato ke wajah se mere bhai ne apni zindagi mere naaam kar diKK.lekin tum haalato ko apne upar haavi mat hone dena K mita dena us har deewar ko tumhaare raaste par aayeKKkoshish karo use samajhne kiK..woh tumhaari apni hain aur agar who kuch keh rahi hain toh tumhaare bhale ke liye hi keh rahi hogi naK..isiliye jaaon aur apne saare gile shikhve door kar loKK.abhi mera muh mat dekho aur jaaon dil ke maamlo mein der nahin karni chahiyeK.
Sujal:- thanks anjaliK..sach mein main maar khaane ke layak hoonK..
(sujal runs away and anjali sees kripa asking people for robbys whereaboutsK.she goes to find robbby)

Break

Anjali:- robby yahan aaoKmaine abhi abhi dekha ki kripa tumhe dhund rahi hainK.
Robby:- tab toh mujhe usse milna chahiyeK.main usse abhi milkar aata hainK..
Anjali:- tum kahin nahin jaaogeK.
Robby:- par?
Anjali:- tum usse miloge zaroor lekin tumhe bilkul waisa karna hoga jaise ki main chahti hoon....
(robby sits in the cafeteria and kripa comes there)
Kripa:- robbyK.tum kahan theKmain kabse tumhe dhund rahi thiK.tumhe pata hain aaj kya hua??woh maineK
Robby:- sorry kripa main abhi bahut busy hoon main anjali ka bahut der se wait kar raha hoon aaj woh mere liye apne haathon se khaana bana kar lane wali hainK
Anjali:- robby!! I m so sorry darling who kya hain na tumhaare liye khaana banane mein main itni busy ho gayi thi ki waqt ka hosh hi nahin rahaK. I m so sorryK.
Robby:- koi baat nahinK. Mujhe toh aadat hi hain tumhaare liye wait karna aur sach pucho toh isme bhi ek apna hi mazaa hainK.par yeh toh batao ki tum mere liye kya bana kar layi hoK.
Anjali:- main tumhaare liye yeh gobhi ke paraathe bana kar laayi hoonK.yeh lo khaakar bataaon ki kaisa bana hainK.
(robby eats)
Anjali:- bataaon na kaisa bana hain.
Robby:- tumne kuch banaya aur who kharab ho yeh toh ho hi nahi saktaK.tum toh agar pyar se zeher bhi doge toh main has kar pilungaK
Waise khaana bahut acha bana hainK.
(kasturi sees robby and anjali and leaves from thereK)
Robby:- aaj humne job hi kiya uske wajah se kripa ko kitni takleef hui hogiK
Anjali:- main jaanti hun lekin iske alava hamaare paas aur koi chaara bhi nahin thaK..kripa ke dil mein tumhaari sahi jagah jagaane ke liye yeh bahut zaroori the ki tumhaare dil mein koi aur kripa ki jagah leK.iska ehsaas hi kripa ke dil mein tumhaare liye pyar jagaayegaKtum udaas mat ho K hum jo bhi kar rahe hain uska natiza acha hogaK.tumhe mujh par bharosa hain naK
Robby:- haan K tumhi par toh bharosa hainKlekin tumne yeh parathe kahan se laayeK..?
Anjali:- canteen seKK
(both laugh)

Break

(in the garden, anjali sees rahul and goes beside him)
Anjali:- yahan kya kar rahe hoK.
Rahul:- kuch nahinKbas kuch lamho ko taraash sahan hoon jisse ki apne dil ki baat kalam ke jariye utaar sakoonK
Anjali:- palon ko tarasha nahin jaata balki har lamhe mein us pal ko boya jaata hain jisse ki hum apne dil ki baat har taraf , har roop mein, utaar sakeK..
Rahul:- tum zindagi ki itni gehri baton ko itne aassaani se keh jaati ho ki dil ko chuti hainK.tum bahut achi baatein karti hoK
Anjali:- sirf baatein hi achi karti hoon?main achi nahin hoon?
Rahul:- nahin mere kehne ka woh matlab nahin tha....
Anjali:- rehne doK.main sab samajhti hoon K tumhe meri koi kadar nahin hainK
Rahul:- anjali meri baat toh sunoK.
Anjali:- nahinK..mujhe kuch nahin sunnaK.main bahut buri hoonK
(suddenly rahul holds her face with his hands and says, by looking into her eyes)
Rahul:- tum sirf baatein achi nahin karti balki tum khud bahut achi hoKitni achi ki shayad koi bhi tumhe kabhi koi takleef pahuchaane ke bare mein soch hi nahin saktaK.tum itni khoobsurat ho ki koi bhi tumhaari khubsurti ko utaar nahin saktaK..itni sachi ho ki koi bhi jhuth tumhaare saamne tik nahin sakta aurK..
Anjali:- aurK.aur kyaK
Rahul:- aurK.
(college bell rings and they wake up K anjali smiles and runs away and rahul smiles)
(anjali walking away from him and saying, both walking opposite)
Rahul:- yeh mujhe kya ho gaya thaK.
Anjali:- kyun main uske taraf khichi chali jaati hoonK
Rahul:-kyun uski har baat mujhe achi lagti hainK
Anjali:- kyun dil usse milne ke liye bahaane dhundta hainK
Rahul:- kyun mann ko uske bin ek pal bhi aaram nahinK.
Anjali:- kyun usse milne ke baad uski yaadein picha nahin chodtiK
Rahul:- kyun dil nahin chahta ki usse juda hone ki ghadi aayeK..
Anjali:- aakhir aisa kyun ho raha hainK???????????
Rahul:- kya ho gaya hain mujheK.pehle toh aisa kabhi nahin huaK
Anjali:- kahin mujhe ???
Rahul:- kya main usse ???????
(both are in their imaginative world walking away from each toher and suddenly they turn back)

Ends
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
omg i can't beilve how wasome ur story is tell me something how old r u u should write a play on this it is just mindblowing
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
Yaar, mind blowing. Jaise serial me Kumkum case jeetkar Sumit ke karib aa gayi vaise yahan bhi dono karib aane laga hai. Aap likhana band mat kijiye kyonki main us jagah pahonchna chahti hoon jab dono ekdoosre se apne pyar ka izhaar karenge. So, please continue.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
hi very good story.keep going.having fun while reading. 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
Episode no:- 9

Anjali and rahul run towards each other and stops…
Rahul:- voh!!!!!
Anjali:- who main puchne aayi yhi kit um kab tak apna gaana pura kar loge…..taaki main use…
Rahul:- kal coffee pe…
Anjali:- kya????
Rahul:- mera matlab hain ki kal coffee pe discuss kar lenge….agar tumhe theek lage to hi…
Anjali:- kitne baje…
In a second
Rahul:- kal shaam 5 baje caf jardian….
Anjali:- theek hain....kal milte hain....bye...
Rahul:- bye!!
(in the designing room, sujal and gauri meet..)
Sujal:- I m sorry gauri….
Gauri:- tum kyun maafi maang rahe ho.....galyi toh mujhse hui hain….galti tumhe nahin samajh pane ki……
Sujal:- nahin gauri!galti na tumhaari hain na meri….galti toh haalato ki hain jisne hume yahaan laakar khada kar diya…lekin aaj main tumse vaada karta hoon ki main tumhe samjhunga bhi aur apne pairo par khada bhi hounga…..mujhe bas ek mauka aur de do…
Gauri:- nahin sujal….mujhe koi jaldi nahin hain….hum waqt ke saath challenge aur waqt ko apne pyar ko nigalne nahin denge…..
Sujal:- I love you!!!!
Gauri:- I love you tooo
(rahul comes)
Rahul:- chalo waqt rehte tum dono ne ek dusre ko samajh liya…..ab bas is pyar ko hamesha sambhal kar rakhna…..ise kisi ko nazar mat lagne dena……
Sujal:- gauri yeh…….
Gauri:- yeh rahul hain….aaj main jo tumhe samajh paayi hoon, who sirf rahul ke wajah se….agar rahul na hota toh pata nahin main kitni badi galti kar jaati…..
Sujal:- tahnk u rahul….
Rahul:- gauri tum phir se shuru ho gayi….
Gauri:- nahin rahul….sach mein tumne mere liye who kiya hain jiske bare mein main soch bhi nahin sakti…..lekin sujal mujhe nahin pata tha ki tum mujhe itne ache se samajhte ho…
Sujal:- iska credit meri us dost ko jaata hain jisne meri itni mada ki…..woh dost jisne mujhe jeene ka matlab sikhaaya, pyar ka matlab sikhaaya , …aaj agar who na hoti toh shayad main kabhi zindagi ko nahin jaan paata….
Gauri:- kaun hain who??
Sujal:- anjali….
Rahul:- anjali?
Sujal:- haan anjali…abhi abhi joi kiya hain usne….meri puraani aur sachi dost hain
Gauri:- phir toh mujhe uska shukriyaada karma chahiye…bolo kab mila rahe ho tum muhe…
Sujal:- kal….
Gauri :- theek hain….

Break

Anjali sees kripa sitting in the garden and so she goes to her..
Anjali:- hi kripa….tum robby ki bahut achi dost ho na…
Kripa:- haan……bahut achi sabse achi…..
Anjali:- phir toh mujhe tumse bahut kuch jaana hoga robby ke bare mein…..uski pasand napasand……kaho meri mada karogi na……
Kripa:- zaroor….anytime….
Anjali:- thank u so much kripa….waise tumhe pata hain ki aaj maine robby ke liye gobhi ke parathe banayi thi aur main bata nahin sakti ki use paratha kitna pasand aaya…..aaj main bahut khush hoon….kaash har insaan ko robby jitna pyar karne wala mile….bahut badnaseeb hote hain log jo robby jaise insaan ki kadar nahin kar paate…..anyways……I'll see you later….robby mera intezaar kar raha hain….bye…
Kripa:- robby mera sach mein acha dost hain aur main uske liye khush hoon…..lekin pata nahin kyun bahut ajeeb sa lag raha hain…….
(college claasroom, anita comes inside the classroom and sits beside robby, angad sees it and gets somewhat of jealous)
Robby:- hye! I m robby…
Anita:- I knw … tum anjali ke bahut ache dost ho…..main anjali ki best friend hoon…..iska matlab hum dono ek dusre ke dost hue…right…
Robby:- impressive…..tohg bolo is dost ke saath ek cup coffee pine chalogi…..
Anita:- doston ke saath kahin bhi, kabhi bhi,…..
Angad:- kya baat hain…aajkal bahut dost bana rahi ho….waise jisse tumne abhi dosti ki who mera apna bhai hain….usne zindagi mein kuch nahin kiya….mere saamne who kuch bhi nahin….
Anita:- u knw what…..mujhe dekhkar laga hi nahin ki robby tumhaara bhai ho sakta…on second thought ek sikke ke do bilkul alag pehlu hain…..ek mein maasumiyat, sachai, aur bahrosa hain…..uar dusre taraf jhuth, beimaani aur dhoka hain…..kitna farak hain tum dono mein…sach kah tumne…..woh tumhaare jhuth ke saamne kuch bhi nahin……aur tum uske sach ke saamne kuch bhi nahin…..now will u please excuse me…..
Angad:- mujhe koi farak nahi padta kit um kiske saath dosti karti ho…….go to hell….
Frend:- angad…
Angad:- kya hain……
Friend:- main toh yeh keh raha tha ki anita ki robby ke saath dosti se tumhe kyun takleef ho rahi hain…aakhir dono hi loosers hain….lekin kahin tumhe jalan toh nahin ho rahi ki anita ne tumse dosti karne se mana kar diya….
Angad:- what rubbish…..mujhe anita jaisi ladkiyon mein ki interest nahin…
Friend:- lekin dekh kart oh yeh lag raha hain ki anita jaisi ladki ytumhe kabhi koi patta nahin degi…..
Angad:- agar main chahu toh use apna deewana bana sakta hoon….
Friend:- main nahin manta…..
Angad:- toh lagi shart….kuch hi dino mein main anita ko apna deewaana bana kar dikhayunga…..i mahine baad jo prom party hogi usme anita meri partner banegi….
Friend:- chalo phir theek hain…dekhte hain kaun jeetta hain….

Break

(in the office, kasturi comes and so does hiten and again they hit each other and this time kasturi falls on hitens hand and they both look at each other…….suddenly they get aware of people seeing them and they stand…)
Kasturi:- I m so sorry sir pata nahin main kaise chal rahi thi mera dhyaan kaha tha……
Hiten:- nahin galti meri thi..mujhe dekhkar chlana chahiye tha….
Kasturi:- I m sorry sir…
Hiten:- maine kaha na meri galti thi….anyways aap apne kaam par jaayiye….
Kasturi:-ji sir….
Office staff:- aaj pehli baar sir ne kisi se maafi maangi……achanak sir ko kya ho gaya…..
Hiten:- yeh mujhe kya ho gaya tha …..kyun maine maafi maangi…zindagi mein pehli baar aisa hua hain…..pata nahin aajkal kya ho gaya…I think I need a doctor…..
Kasturi:- kya ho gaya hain…..kyun har cheez achi lagne lagi hain…..nahin kuch nahin hua hain mujhe bas mere dimaag ka vehem hain….mujhe apne kaam par dhyaan dena chahiye….
(hiten looks through the curtains and sees kasturi working and then goes on seeing him, and just then anjali comes to his office and sees him looking through the curtains to a girl and then)
Anjali:- hiiiii bhaiyaaaa…..
(hitens gets surprised and drops the coffee mud from his hands….)

End
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hi i m 17 yrs old
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
HI I READ THIS STORY TODAY FROM THE STARTING IT SI A VERY GOOD STORY HOW ALL THE LINKS ARE TOGETEHR AND ANJALI HELPING EVERYONE IN THEIR LIVES AND CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
First Class. I like it. Go ahead. Par Anjli-Rahul ki chemistry ka muje sabse zyada intezaar hai.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
wow u r just 17 and u have more creativity than any of those serial makers how u have linked all those characters to eachother in one way or the other it is just i don't have words to describe it. now days i dn't read any seraial updates before reading ur episodes 👏 u r doing greaaaaaaaaaaaaat job
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
Episode no:-10


Anjali:- sambhal ke bhaiya!!!!
Hiten:- anjali tum yahan…….
Anjali:- kyun bhaiya apne office mein aa nahin sakti ya phir aapke cabin mein aane ke liye mujhe kisiki izazat leni padegi…..
Hiten:- kaisi baat kar rahi hain pagli!!!!tu jab chahe yahan aa sakti hain aur tujhe kisiki izazat ki zaroorat nahin hain…
(hiten sits in the chair and anjali looks through the curtains)
Hiten:- arey anjali!!tum wahan kya dekh rahi ho????????
Anjali:- woh kya hain na bhaiya main yeh janna chahti hoon ki aisi kaun si wajah hain jiske wajah aap yeh nahin jaan paaye ki main aapke cabin mein aayi hoon…..
Hiten:- wajah….kaun si wajah …koi wajah nahin hain…main toh dekh raha tha ki sab kaam theek se ho raha hain ki nahin….
Anjali:- woh to theek hain bhaiya…lekin mujhe yeh samajh mein nahin aa raha hain ki aap sirf ek employee par itna dhyaan kyun de rahe hain…..
Hiten:- anjali…tum baaz nahin aayogi….chalo yahan aao....
Anjali:- (in her mind) bhaiya aaj nahin toh kal, lekin main aapke dil ki awaaz tak zaroor pahuchungi.....
Hiten::- bolo kya logi…..
Anjali:- lunch time hain aur main ghar se khaana lekar aayi hoon….chaliye khaana kha lijiye…waise bhi lunch time ho gaya hain…..
Hiten:- theek hain…
(kasturi enters by knocking at the door..)
Kasturi:- may I come in sir!!!
Hiten:- come in!!
Kasturi?without seeing anjali and just looking at the documents she has in her hands) sir!woh documents taiyaar ho gaye hain , aap agar inpar sign.,…..(looks up) oh sir I m so sorry….maine dekha nahin ki lunch break ho gaya hain…koi baat nahin sir main baad mein aa jaaungi…(turns to leave)
Anjali:- miss kasturi aap apna lunch karne jaa rahi hain?
Kasturi:- yes mam…..
Anjali:- toh aap ek kaam kijiye…..aaj aap lunch hamare saath kijiye…..
Kasturi:- thank you mam….lekin main apna lunch saath mein lekar aayi hoon….
Anjali:- main jaanti hoon……lekin phir bhi main chahti hoon ki aaj aap lunch yahan kare…..isi bahaane hume bhi aapke tiffin ko kahane ka mauka mil jaaye…..
Kasturi:- lekin mam!!!!!!!!!
Anjali:-ab main aapko order de rahi hoon aur phir isi bahaane hume kuch interesting company mil jaayegi…
Hiten:- anjali!!!!!!!
Anjali:- sorry bhaiya…..lekin aap hi kahiye na……miss kasturi ab aap boss ka kaha nahi maan sakti…
Hiten:- agar anjali chahti hain toh please join us….
Kasturi:- ok sir!!!!!!1
(she goes and they have lunch)
Anjali:- toh bataaiye ki aapko apna yeh naya office kaisa laga….
Kasturi:- bahut acha mam…
Anjali:- apne colleagues???????
Kasturi:- bahut supportive…..
Anjali:- aur bhaiya????????
Kasturi:- (choks out) jiiiiiiiiiii???????
Hiten:- (drops the water glass) anjali??????
Anjali:- mera matlab hain ki unke kaam karne ka tarika….
Kasturi:- woh bhi bahut acha hain mam...
(hiten gets nervous and drinks water, anjlali sees both of them and smiles)

Break

(anjali about to leave the office and)
Hiten:- arey anjali kahan jaa rahi ho……aaj toh college bhi nahin hain….
Anjali:- bhaiya main apne ek dost ko milne jaa rahi hoon……aap ghar chale jaana ……main aapko directly ghar par milungi….ok!bhai I m getting late….bye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(anjali goes to the caf 15 mins before and sees rahul ther already sitting and waitng)
Anjlai:- arey rahul?tum toh bahut jaldi aa gaye…
Rahul:- jaldi toh tum bhi jaldi aa gayi…kyun?????
Anjali:- main toh office se aa rahi hoon, isiliye shaayad jaldi aa gayi, lekin tum kyun aaye…..
Rahul:- mujhe bhi paas mein hi kaam tha isiliye jaldi aa gaya….
Anjali:- khair…..kaho….
Rahul:- kaho……?????? Kya?????
Anjali:- kya ka kya matlab….hum yahan tumhaare gaane ke bare mein discuss karne aaye hain…
Rahul:- hamaare gaane ke baare mein....
Anjali:- (looks at him and smiles) right hamaare gaane ke baare mein....tumne kuch likha hain?????
Rahul:- haan likha hain…..
Anjali:- toh sunaayon na….
(takes out a paper and starts saying)
Rahul?despserately looking at her eyes and says)
Pariyon ki duniya se aayi hain woh……..
Meri zindagi mein roshan hui hain woh…….
Jaan bhi haazir hain us shehzaadi ke kadmo mein……
Ek baar, bas ek baar keh do, mere liye aayi hain woh……….
(hi… I cooked up this shayri on my own…)
Anjali:- (looks at him and says) wow!rahul…..aisa lag raha tha jaise kit um kisi ko apne andar basakar keh rahe ho, jaise ki koi tumhaare saanson mein, ehsaason mein basa ho….laayo who paper mujhe do…
(takes the paper from his hands and gets shocked)
Anjali:- yeh toh khaali hain….isme toh kuch likha hua nahin hain
(rahul immediately says)
Rahul:- tumne kaha than a ki kisi ko andar rakhkar kaha……tumhe dekhte hi keh diya…….(wakes up) mera matlab hain kit um gaana gaane se pehle inhi lafzo ko adlib ke tarah kehna……
Anjali:- ek pal ke liye toh mujhe laga ki…
Rahul:-ki yeh main tumhaare liye keh raha hoon…..
Anjali:-nahin…..woh bas……mera matlab…..coffee piye….
(coffee comes and while drinking they say in mind)
Anjali:- aisa lag raha tha jaise ki yeh lafz mere liye hi the……
Rahul:- yeh maine kaise keh diya…..pehle toh kabhi aisa nahin kiya…..phir aisa kyun lag raha hain ki koi meri prerna banti ja rahi hain…..hey bahgwaan madad karo….
Anjali:-is ehsaas se pehchaan karaaon bhagwaan….madad karo…..
(coffee finishes )
Anjali:- ab mujhe chalna chahiye....ghar par bhaiya intezaar kar rahe honge....
Rahul:- mujhe bhi yehi lagta hain…..didi bhi mera wait kar rahi hongi….
Anjali:- see you then kal college mein milenge….
Rahul:- bye!!!!!
(both go opposite and then turn around and see that both are looking at each other,….)
Anjali:- bye!!!!!
Rahul:- bye!!
(both turn , smile, get shy and go away..)

Break

Kavya and kashish rehearsing for their dance and suddenly while rehearsing kavya notices something from the top falling on kashish, he runs and pushes kashish and falls on her)
Rahul:- kitne ache lagte ho tum dono ek dusre ke saath, phir kyun ladte ho….
Kavya:- acha aur iske saath….mere liye toh sabse achi laki aayegi…
Kashish:- pehle kisi ladki ko patakar toh dikhaaon phir baad mein kisi pari ke sapne ko dekhna….bada aaya pari ka intezaar karne….
Kavya:- tum meri fikra chod do….pehle apne liye koi ladka toh dhund lo varna kahin puri jawaani beet jaayegi aur tum isi auditorium mein hamesha rahogi, pehle yahan dance karte hue aur baad mein auditorium saaf karte hue….
Rahul:-kisi ne sach hi kaha hain ki agar do loha ek dusre ke saath takraata hain toh aag hi nikalta hain…mera bhi dimaag kharab hain ki main tum dono ko ek saath dekhne ke bare mein soch raha tha…..
Kavya:- ab jaakar tumhe akal aayi....
Rahul:- khair main tum dono se yeh puchne aaya tha ki tum dono ki taiyaari kaisi chal rahi hain...
Kavya:- mind blowing......yeh competition toh main hi jeetunga….
Kashish:- uth jaaon….savera ho gaya hain….kaun jeetega aur kaun haarega ….iska faisla toh waqt hi bataayega….
Kavya:- ok….lets see…
Kashish:- we will definitely see……
Rahul:- mujhe mera jawaab mil gaya …. I m out of here…. Tum log lage raho…
(kavya and kashish turn around in opposite direction)

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great, Shayri was fabulous. Main bhi apni kahani me apke jaise apni likhi hui shayri hi update karti hoon. Aur vaise bhi meri har ek shayri main Kumkum ko dhyan me rakhte huve hi likhti hoon, kyonki mere liye woh meri kalpna, prerna aur dreamgirl hai. Har baar use dekhkar aisa lagta hai ki kash me ladka hoti to main usi se shadi bhi karti. But anyways the part is mindblowing. Aage likhna.

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