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Posted: 18 years ago
#11
Great, Aage badho. We're waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Episode no.3.

Scene:- classroom of the college
Everyone starts screaming mama aa gayi…..chup jjaaaaon…everyone hides and anjali goes out of the class to find her friend…..someone goes and calls the peun of the college to the class and make him sit over the chair….lights off…
Someone enters and falls on the peun exactly as anjali did…the folwers start falling and lights are on….everyone is shocked….
A hot, sexy stud girl gets up and looks at everybody…..anjali enters and comes towards the girl
Anjali:- kahan thi tu ab tak anita… kabse tujhe dhund rahi hoon…
Anita:- dhund toh main bhi rahi hoon….
Anjali:- par tu toh!yahn par tu nayi hain phir tu kise dhund rahi hain…
Anita:- use jisne yeh harkat ki hain…
Angad comes forward…
Angad:- yeh kaam mera hain….par afsos is bande ko yeh nahin maloom tha ki aap aa rahi hain varna us kursi par main khud jaa kar baith jata….waise aapko nahin lagta ki aap mujhe pehle bhi kahin dekha hain….
Anita:- theek kaha aapne… aap jaiso se toh mujhe bahut pyar hain…(angad smiles)…aap jaison ko toh main apne ghar mein roz paalti hoon(angadshocks)…
Angad:- kya matlab??
Anita:-matlab bahut aasan hain…aap jaise janwaron ke saath toh barso ka rishta hain….
Angad:- chalo jaanwar hi sahin par aapko mujhse pyar toh hain…
Anita:- who toh waqt hi bataayega….

Break

They leave…
Friend:- angad ab kya kare….wapas try kare kya..??????
Angad:- ek manhunt teacher ke chakkar mein pehle hi maine kitne ache mauke gava diye...ab sun pehle dekh ki aa kaun raha hain....
Friend:- ek sexy ladki aa rahi hain
Angad smiles
Angad:- ab toh is chair par main hi baithunga….lights off…
Someone enters and the whole process is repeated again….when the lights are on everyone is shocked……it was the same tacher they were looking for…
Angad:- mam aaaaap….aaapp yaaahhaaan kaise…
Mam:- hiii….macho man…
Angad:- mam aap pehle hatiye….hatiye naaa
Everyone starts laughing
Announcement is made to call all the teachers to the conference room….mam leaves….
Angad goes to his friend and shouts at him….
Angad:-tune toh kaha tha ki koi sexy ladki aa rahi hain…..yeh hain teri sexy aunty…..is manhunt teacher ko…..idiot..
Friend:- lekin maine toh theek dekha the …pata nahin yeh kaise ho gaya….
Anita:-main batati hoon….

Break…

Angad:- tum?????
Anita :- haan main….tumhare dost ne theek dekha tha….woh kya hain na tumhe bada shauk hain dusro ka mazak banana ka, isiliye maine socha ki kyun na tumhe hi ek mazak bana de…..maine jaan bujh ke us ladki ko darwaze par rokkar us manhunt techer k oandar bhej diya jise tum log dhund rahe the….kyun kaisi rahi….tum puch rahe the na ki maine tumhe dekha hain ki nahin, lekin ab tum mujhe har jagah dekhoge, main toh tumhe bhool gayi lekin tum kabhi mujhe bhula nahin paaoge….
Anjali:- jaane bhi dena anita….ab chal yahan se..
Friend :- angad!!!tune kuch bola kyun nahin…
Angad:- aaj pehli baar toh koi angad ke muqable aaya hain …..ab khel mein maza aayega…
Sir enters….
Sir:- students aaj college national bike racing championship form jama karne ka aakhri din hain ….laao jaldi se mujhe apne apne form de do..
Angad:- arey mera form kahan gaya….yehi pe toh tha….
Friend:- kya hua??form nahn mil raha hain kya?ab kya hoga….u participate kaise karega????ab toh saare forms bhi khatam ho gaye hain….abtu apna sapna pura kaise karega…
Rahul:- excuseme!!
Angad:- plz abhi mera dimaag bahut garam hain yahan se chale jaaon…
Rahul:- lekin …..kya yeh aapka form hain….yeh wahan corridor oar gira hua tha….
Angad:-oh god…thankyou somuch…..yeh to mera hi form hain….
Gives the form to te sir and comes back to rahul
Angad:- hey bro…..timhe pata nahi ki tumne mere liye kya kiya hain….thankyou so much…..i owe you one…anyways….i am angad….
Rahul:- jaanta hoon…kaafi suna hain aapke bare mein….i m rahul…
Angad:- aaj joh tumne mere liye kiya hain uske baad aaj se tum mere dost ho….woh bhi khaas…so welcome to the angad gang….
Enters a handsome man and suddenly books fall down from his hands…anjali comes and helps him….
Anjali:- here you go….hiii I am anjali…
Man:- hiii I m robby ….angads brother….thankyou…
Anjali:- its ok…
Robby:- class mein nayi aayi ho kya…
Anjali:- haana…aaj pehla din hain….
Robby:- waise toh mere bahut kam dost hain lekin mujhe tum kaafi pasand aayi varna aajkal kis e itna time hain ki dusro ki mada kare….i liked ur attitude…friends…
Anjali:- dosti aur pyar ke liye hi toh anjali jeeti hain…..friends…
Robby:- welcome to the college…
Suddenly a girl enters and robby goes on looking at her……..
End
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
hi very good.they r eally interesting.keep it up.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
Nice story and update, waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg i love it u should give ur ideas to ekta or should pursue entertaining as ur carreer ur "show" sounds really interesting one could imagine all those characters doing what they are doing it is like reading updates of a serial u havew done an awsome job 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Mind blowing. Lage raho. Aage ka part aap jaldi update karna. Hum intezaar kar rahe hai.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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tnku will update the next episode soon...day by day.. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Episode no:-4

Robby keeps on looking at the girl at the door step and anjali sees him looking her with such affection…..
Anjali:-pyar karte ho usse…..
Robby shocked to hear it
Robby:-woh!!!!!!nnnnnaaahhhiinnn….aaisi…kkkoi bbaat nahinnn…
Anjali:- dekho robby…..maine pyar ko kabhi dekha nahin haqin….haan par jitna main pyar ko jaan saki hoon usse itna toh main keh hi sakti hoon ki pyar kya hain…..aur phir tumhare aankhon mein saaf dikta hain kit um usse kitna pyar karte ho…..dekho dosti ki hain nibhaani toh padegi…..aur phir doston se kaisi sharam…..shayad main tumhari koi mada kar sakoon…
Robby:-pata hain anjali aaj tak koi bhi mujhe itne acche se nahin jaan paya….tum who pehli shaksh hon jisne mujhe itne ache se jaana hain….
Anjali:- dost jo hoon…..doston ki dil ki baat toh jaanungi hi….toh is dost ko tum apne dil ki baat kaise batana chahoge….
Robby:- yahan se uth kar coffee pe…..
Anjali:- toh cahle …waise bhi abhi break hain….
Robby:- chalo…..
They enter the cafeteria….
Robby:-kaho kya sunna chahti ho????
Anjali:- tumhari dil ki baat …pata nahin robby kyun lekin mujhe aisa lagta hain ki tumhe kisi aise dost ki zaroorat hain aur isiliye main tumhari mada karma chahti hoon…
Robby:-bachpan se jaanta hoon use….bahut kareebi dost hain hum aur pata nahin kab yeh dosti pyar mein badal gayi…..bahut pyar karta hoon main usse…..
Anjali:- toh aaj tak tumne apne pyar ka izhaar kyun nahin kiya???
Robby:-kuch pyar ka izhaar hume bahut takleef deti hain aur yeh dar rahta hain ki kahin is pyar ko pane ke liye hum us dost ko na kho de jo hume bahut pyaara hain…..
Anjali:-lekin aisi kaun si baat hain hain jo tumhe dar lag raha hain….pyar baatne se hamesha pyar milta hain….phir kyun yeh dard de rahe ho apne aap ko….
Robby:- dard toh meri zindagi ban gayi hain….bachpan se hi angad who saari khushiyan mili aur mujhe apnapan bhi naseeb nahi hua…..ma baap ko kabhi meri zaroorat nahi thi aur jisse pyar kiya who bhi mujhse payr nahin karti…..woh toh angad se pyar karti hain…cllge mein hamesha hi angad ke bvhai ke naam se jaana gaya…..
Anjali:- toh kya angad bhi usse pyar???????
Robby:-angad ke liye kripa koi mayne nahin rakhti….woh toh uske taraf dekhta bhi nahin….
Anjali:-pata hain robby zindagi mein har din ek nayi zindagi jeeni parti hain…..agar hume dard usne diya hain….toh yeh uska faisla hain….ise maan lena chahiye aur bharosa hona chahiye ki agar usne dard diya hain toh malham bhi wahi dega…..ab yeh uspar nirbhar hain ki who kab, kahan aur kis roop mein hume iski dava deta hain……agar sab darwaze se hume dard milta hain toh ek khidki aisi bhi hain ajahn se hume itni khushi milti hain ki hum apne saare dard ko bhul jaate hain…..bas uske khulne ka intezar karma chahiye…..agar usne tumhare andar kripa ke liye pyar jagaaya hain toh wohi tumhe usse milaayega….samjheeeeee!!
Robby:-thanks anjali…..aaj mujhe pata nahin ki mera pyar milega ki nahin lekin itna zaroor pata hain ki ek khushi mujhe aaj tumhe apne dost ke roop mein paakar mila hain….aaj pehli baar kisise khul karaapne dil ki baat keh saka hoon aura b hamesha keh sakunga………

Break…..

People standing at the corridor and talking abt a show
Anjali:-yeh log kis bare mein baat kar rahe hain
Robby:-are cllge mein inter college carnival aa raha hain.....har firld mein competition hain.....har student kisi na kisi cheej mein participate karta hain.....tum bhi kyun nahin participate karti......
Anjali:- main par mujhe in sab se bhut.....
Waise gaana bahut acha lagta hain lekin….Robby:- c'mon yaar:- tumne kaha tha ki tumhe gaane ka shauk hain na….toh bas tum is saal gaane ke liye apna naam bharogi….
Anjali:-aur tum???
Robby:-main….soch raha hoon ki decoration mein apna naam doon….chalon ab naam enroll karte hain…
They go to the hall and suddenly anjali hit to someone and gets about to fall…he holds her by his one hand on her waist and other holding her hand…..they look at each other..
Anjali:-rahul……
Rahul:- tum hamesha mujhse bhidte hi kyun ho???kya hum kabhi bina gire nahin mil sakte?????
Helds her to stand….
Anjali:-shayad isme hi bhagwan ki marzi hain…
Rahul:-kya kisike girne mein bhi bhagwan ki marzi hoti hain?
Anjali:- bhagwan ke marzi ke bina toh ek patta bhi nahin hil sakta….hum toh phir bhi insaan hain….waise tum yahaan….
Rahul:-haan who apna naam enroll karne aaya tha gaane ke liye lyrics competition mein….lekin shayad yeh nahin ho sakta
Anjali:- kyun?
Rahul:-lyrics ko hume kisi singer ke jariye hi stage par present karma hain aur usise singer aur lyrics ka winner decide kiya jaayega….
Robby:- tab toh tumhari problem solve ho gayi……
Rahul:-aap
Robby:-hiii…robby here….khair….anjali ko bhi singing competition mein part lene ke liye kisi ke original lyrics ki zaroorat padegi…maine abhi pata kiya hain…toh kyun na tum apne lyrics anjali ke liye likho aur who use apne awaaz ke jariye sabke saamne pesh karegi….
Anjali:-lekin main ….
Robby:-common anjali….sirf gaana hi toh hain maan jaaon…aur phi rise bhi apne gaane ke liye singer mil jaayegi…kyun?
Rahul:-hain theek kahan…lekin agar tumhe koi problem na ho?
Anjali:- theek haon agar tum log keh rahe ho toh main tumhare gaane hi gaungi…
Robby:-gr8 … phir tum apne lyrics likhna shuru karo….jab pura ho jaaye toh anjali ke saath ise bana lena…ab chale naam enroll karne…kajhin time na chala jaaye…

Break

Fashion desingning room…stands a girl with a maniquene and flaunting her dresses on it…..suddenly someone comes and hugs her from behind….

Sujal:-I love you…..i love you …love you …love you….love you….gauri….
Gauri:-I love you too sujal….
Sujal:-kya kar rahi ho?
Gauri:-bas apne competition ki taiyaari ….is saal pehli baar part le rahi hun bas usi fashion show ke liye apne dresses ko taiyaar kar rahi hun….
Sujal:-mere liye toh tum hi jeetogi chahe tum job hi karo…
Gauri:-main janti hoon lekin main chahti hoon ki ab tum bhi apna pairon par khare ho jaaon…..
Sujal:-who toh main hun hi ….abhi bhi apne pairon par khara hun….
Gauri:-main mazak nahin kar rahin hoon…
Sujal:-main bhi kahan mazak kar raha hoon…..papa ka itna bada empire aakhir mujhe hi toh sambhalna hain….
Gauri:-tum pehle apnaaap ko toh sambhal lo….tumhe pata hi kya hain business ke bare mein…
Sujal:-lekin jaan mujhe zaroorat hi kya hain….itna paisa hain mere paas ki hume kabhi kaam karne ki zaroorat hi nahin padegi….
Gauri:-aaj tumhare paas paisa hain toh tum keh rahe ho….kal jab yeh paise nahin honge tab…..tab kya karenge hummm..tum kyun nahin kabhi aage ke bare mein sochte…..
Sujal:-lekin gauri…chalo iske bare mein hum baad mein bbaat karenge….
Gauri:-nahin baat aaj hi hogi....aakhir ab baad kab aayega.....aaj tumhe faisla lena hi hoga ki tum aage zindagi mein kya banoge aur tabhi hum phir baat karenge........
Sujal shocked......
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i love ur writing if u don't mind u should save all this somewhere it sounds like great play and in the future maybe u could get a chance to make an awsome serial out of ur writings 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi very good.keep going .it's interesting. 👏 👏

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