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Posted: 16 years ago
hey vanitaa..after a long time ayar...good to see ur update..nice ab let see what tina does next....
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Posted: 16 years ago

Episode no.85

(next day)

(college campus)

(sumit comes)

(kavya and sujal comes)

Sumit: -wassup brother……..kaise ho.kaisi thi tumhari college ki trip……….

Kavya: -amazing yaar……..

Sujal: -haan yaar maza aa gaya……..

Kavya: -tujhe bhi chalna chahiye thaa…….

Sumit: -I know yaar lekin tum log toh jaaante ho ki yahaan par band ke contest chal rahe the isisliye…….

Kavya: -haaan yaar……

(bell rings)

Sujal: -tu chal hum zaraa baki log se milke aate hain…..

Sumit: -hm……..

(peun comes)

Peun: -sumit ir .

Sumit: -haan raghu bolo na.

Peun:yeh aapke liye.

Sumit:mere liye par kisne diya hain.

Peun: -wo jo aapse bahut pyar karti hain.

Sumit: -kya??????

Peun: -aap khud hi dekh lo main chalta hoon……

(sumit opens it)

Sumit: -spa mein tumhara intezar kar rahi hoon)

(sumit thinks)

Sumit:-acha toh kumkum mujhe bula rahi hain wo bhi is tarah...

(sumit goes to a room and sees a girl standing there)

Break

(kumkum comes to the campus)

(she sees sujal there)

Kumkum: -hye sujal.

Sujal: -kaisi hain meri dost.

Kumkum: -achi aur tum batao…

Suajl: -bas sab theek hain……

Kumkum: -theek??????gauri naraaz hain….

Sujal:-hmm.....

Kumkum:-kyun?????

Sujal:-wo..

(gauri goes)

Sujal:-kumkum main abhi aata hoon.

Kumkum:-lekin suno toh tumne sumit ko dekha hain...

Kavya: -haan maine use upar spa ke taraf jaate dekha jab main wahan se utar raha tha.

Kumkum: -thanks kavya………

(kumkum goes towards the spa)

Sumit: -mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum mujhse milne ke liye itni bechain ho….

(kumkum walks the staircase)

Sumit: -sach mujhe tumhare isi andaaz ne maar daala hain…..

(girl tries to turn)

Sumit: -pehle mujhe apni baat toh kehne do.

(girl turns back)

Sumit: -tumhe pata hain ki main apni har saans mein sirf tumhari saanson ko mehsoos karta hoon….

(kumkum sill walking)

Sumit: -apni har aahat pe tumhari dhadkan mehsoos karta hoon…

(kumkum walks towards the spa)

Kumkum: -sumit spa ke taraf kya kar raha hain….

Sumit: -apne har pal mein tumhare sath bitaye us pal ko yaad rakhta hoon jo ki sirf hamare hain……

(sumit holds the girl from back)

(kumkum enters and sees sumit holding the girl)

(girl sees kumkum through mirror and holds sumit's hands tightly)

Break

Sumit: -I love you..us pal ka intezar hain jab tum aur main hum ban jayenge.i love you…..

(kumkum shouts)

Kumkum: -sumitt…….

(sumit turns around and shocked to see kumkum at the back)

Sumit: -kumkum tum…….

Kumkum: -itna bada dhokha….

(kumkum leaves)

(sumit goes behind)

(both get out of the spa and the girl turns)

(tina)

Tina: -maine kaha tha na kumkum ki yeh baazi tumhe bahut mehengi padegi…….

Tina: -chhhhhhuuuuchuuuuu.bechari kumkum ab bahut maza ayega……

Sumit: -kumkum meri baat toh suno./

Kumkum: -tum meri baat suno……

(and she leaves)

(kumkum sitting at the hall and crying)

Sujal: -kumkum tum yahaan?/kya hua tum ro rahi ho??????

Kumukum: -nahi wo kuch nahi..

Sujal: -sumit ke sath…

Kumkum: -usne mujhe dhooooookkha.

Sujal: -jo shabd nikaalne mein tumhe hichkichahat ho rahi hain kya tumhe lagta hain sumit waisa kuch karega….

(she looks at sujal)

Sujal: -kumkum kabhi kabhi aankhon ka dhokha har sach se bada ho jata hain aur hum us sach ko andekha kar us dhoke par yakeen karte hain.

(she looks at him)

Sujal: -aur wahi dhoka baad mein pashchataap banker haamari zindagi ka rukh badal deta hain…

Kumkum: -lekin.

Sujal: -chalo mere sirf ek sawaal ka jawab do…

(she listens)

Sujal: -kya sumit tumhe dhoka de sakta hain…..

Kumkum: -nahi..

Sujal: -trumhe tumhara jawaab mil gaya…..

Kumkum: -tum sach keh rahe ho sujal kabhi kabhi hum apone har rishtey ko apne us aankhon dekhe haal par tol dete hain jo ki sach nmahi balki ek dhoka hain…aaj tumne mujhe ek paap karne se rok diya hain…

Sujal: -kumkum kabhi tumne bhi meri madad isi tarah ki thi jioska karz main zindagi bhar nahi utaar sakta.

Kumkum: -lekin tumhare aur gauri ke beech kya hua??????

(sujal face)

End

Precap: -kumkum: -acha tum kahin mujhe bhul toh nahi jaoge..

Sumit: -bhala main apni jeene ki wajah ko kaise bhool sakta hoon…….

Tina: -yeh nahi ho sakta..aakhir kumkum par kuch asar kyun nahi ho raha…..maine toh isi glass mein julaab ki goliya milayi thi agar wo us glass mein nahi hain toh kahin wo mere glass mein.

Sumit: -tina tum peeyo na.

Sujal: -haan…….

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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanku soooooooo much 4 updateing after a long time.............i knew it would be Tina only but we all know Sukk have 2 be 2gether only in the end.............waiting 2 read the next part soooooonnnnnn................
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Vanita,
Its really nice to read your FF. You have so many characters which is interesting.

Hussain is my all time favorite star. I watch only Kumkum and indian Idol and that is for him i guess⭐️
Always would love to see Sumit and Kumkum together but Tina being his real life partner its hard for me to accept her in this negative character.
This is only opinion. Sorry no offense!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
interesting FF
waitng for the next where sumit would say he hasnt forgotten KK & tina giving julab ki goli!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Pleaseeeeeeee continue the ff.....................atleast till the time Su comes 2 know about Tina's truth.................waiting 4 the updates...........

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