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Posted: 18 years ago
#21
tnx a ton......especially srk-biggest-fan and others also whosoever has appreeciated it....its b cause of u ppl that i have got encouragement........love hussain.....etc 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great. Woh bhi Anjali-Rahul karib aa rahe hai ye to mindblowing hai. I'm waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😊 Episode no:-5

Gauri leaves the room the room. She goes to the auditorium sees rahul there.
Gauri:- hi! Rahul
Rahul:- hi! Gauri….
Gauri:-kahan ho tum…aajkal dikhte hi nahin…kya apne is ache dost se naraaz ho....
Rahul:-aajkal tum itni busy jo ho gayi ho..khair yahan auditorium mein kaise...
Gauri:-wahi jo tum karne aaye ho.....apna naam enroll karvane aayi hoon lekin lyrics mein nahin balki fashion designing contest mein....
Rahul:-wow!good...waise sujal kahan hain dikhayee nahin de raha...
Gauri:- main uske baare mein koi baat nahin karna chahti...
Rahul:-samajh gaya......phir se jhagda kiya hain tum dono ne naaa....
Gauri:- hamesha galti meri nahin hoti…..kya kahan tha maine….itna hi na ki kuch kaam kar lo……padhai karne ko hi toh kaha tha…..lekin nahi….use toh bas apne papa ke paison par hi jeena hain….future mein kya hoga, usne toh kabhi socha hi nahi hoga………I love him damned…lekin who meri baat samajhta hi nahin….har roz mehengi mehengi tohfe le aata hain….par mujhe in sab mein kabhi koi dilchaspi nahin rahi….main bas use apne pairon par khara dekhna chahti hoon…..
Rahul:-gauri! Hum pyar to kar lete hain …….lekin uske mayne ko kabhi samajh nahin paate….pyar sirf ek dusre ke liye chahat ka izhaar karma nahin hota hain….payr toh is paribhasha ke bahut aage hain….pyar mein sirf apna dil hi nahin balki apna mann bhi hume us insaan ke hawale kar dena chahiye jiske liye hum saari duniya se ladte hain…saamnewale ko sirf rishte, zimmedaari, aur zindagi ke maayne ke bare mein samjhaana nahin chahiye….balki zaroorat hain ki hum kabhi use bhi samjhe….haan yeh bahut zaroorat hain ki hume apne pyar ko uski zimmedaariyon ke bare mein samjhaana chahiye…..lekin kabhi uske dil ko bhi samajhna chahiye….phir dekhna saari mushkile apne aap apna hal dhund lengi….
gauri listens very carefully and with loved eyes looks at rahul and says…
gauri:- pata hain rahul!main jab bhi udaas hoti hoon, tum hamesha use ek muskaan mein badal dete ho….tum itni gehri baatein itni aasani se samjha dete ho, ki koi bhi apne har mushkil ka raasta dhund lete haan…
rahul:- likhne ka shauk hain…inhi maayno ko toh apna aadhaar banaya hain….ab jao aur jaakar use manao…..kabhi kabhi itni baatein kehni hoti hain lekin waqt nahin hota…isiliye waqt ko apne muthi se pisalne na do….jaao
she rushes..

Break

Canteen

Anita:- ek diet coke dena….
Anjali:- anita tu yahi par ruk main abhi aati hoon.
Anita:- par tu jaa kahan rahi hai…
(Anjali goes towards rahul, when she sees him come in the canteen)
Anjali:- hi!rahul
Rahul:- hi anjali….main tumhe hi dhoond raha tha…
Anjali:- mujhe!!
Rahul:- haan tumhe…. Woh main soch raha tha ki mujhe apne lyrics tumhe dhyaan mein rakhkar likhna hain....isiliye tumse kuch kehna tha..
Anjali:- toh kaho....
Rahul:- woh main soch raha tha ki main aur tum agar....
Anjali:- main aur tum kya rahul….
Rahul:- wohhhh…..main aur tum agar kallll…
(suddenly they hear someone fighting and rahul rushes towards..gauri also comes to rescue her friend)
Rahul:- kavya!!!!yeh tu kya kar raha hain!!! Ruk ja kavya…
Kavya:- chod de mujhe rahul......is bandariyan ko aaj main nahin chodunga….
Gauri:- kashish !!!!!!stop it….
Kashish:- chod de gauri….is neemchade ko toh aaj main kaccha cheebha jaaungi….
Kavya:- aye bandariyan....neemchada kise kaha tune haaan....theher jaa abhi batata hoon...
Kashish:-aye chachundar.....tujhe kaha....yeh dhamki kisi aur ko dena ...mujhe nahin....tu mujhe kya bataayega...pehle aine ka saamne apna chehra dekhle...aur haan kisiko saath lekar jaana, varna kahin apna chehra dekhkar tum dar na jaaon...
(principle comes)
Rahul:- dekh kavya!!agar principle net um dono ko ladte hue dekh liya toh who tum logo ko dance competition mein part lene nahin dega….chal yahan se…chal…
(they leave)
Kashish:- arey bhaag kar kahan jaa raha hain darpok…..
Gauri:- maine kahan kashish chal yahan se….ab chal…ho gaya….
(they leave)

Break

(anjali goes her home back and sees someone in the house and she rushes towards him and hugs him tightly)
Anjali:- hiiiiii bahiya!!aap kab aye? Aap hongkong se kab aaye? Aur yeh kya aapne mujhe bataya tak nahin....very bad...
Hiten:- turns around….agar bata kar aata toh apne behen ke chehre par yeh khushi kaise dekh paata….jab tu college gayi thi tab aaya….kaisa raha tera paehla din ….
Anjali:- bahut achga ….woh sab chodiye…pehle aap yeh bataaye ki apne meri saari list le aayi….
Hiten:- aisa ho sakta hain k hamari behen kuch kahe aur who nahin ho……sab laaya hoon..
Anjali:- oh!bhaiya I love you sssoooo mmmmuuuuccchhhh
Hiten:- are pagli…mera bas chalet oh main apni gudiyan ke liye duniya ki saari khushiyan uske pairon par rakh du…..
(tears rool down anjali's eyes)
Anjali:- aur apne is bhai ke liye…anjali apni jaan bhi de sakti hain…..waise bhaiya aapne anpe liye koi ladki dekhi ya nahin..
Hiten:- anjali!
Anjali:- who kya hain na bhaiyaa….main soch rahi thi ki kab tak aap aise akele ghumoge….acha hoga agar aap shaadi kar lo….isi bahaane aap honeymoon bhi manaaya karenge….
Hiten:- ruk toh abhi batata hoon..
(anjali runs away)
Hiten:- tu nahi samjhegi.....mere liye tu kitni khaas hain....mera ek faisla is khushiyon ko nazar laga sakta hain...ek galat ladki aur sab khatam aur main tujhe mar kar bhi khona nahin chahta.....
(anjali hears it from the pillar and says)
Anjali:- uparwale ne sabke liye kisiko banaaya hain…usne aap ke liye bhi kisi na kisi ko toh chuna hi hoga……bas ab yeh uske haath men hain ki kab who aapko usse milaata hain…..shayad who isi smein ho….ho sakta hain who apko kal mile…
(she looks at gaod and says)
Anjali:- mere bhai ko uski khushiyaan de do….bachpan se jo usne apni khushiyon ka tyag kiya hain….use who lauta do….uske dil mein bhi apne banaye pyar ki baarish kar do bhagwaan….yeh ek behen ki vinti hain….apne bhai ki khushiyon ke liye aur is behen ko pura yakeen hain apne bhagwaan par….

Preview:- kasturi goes for her interview and falls on hiten…..

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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
hi very good going.keep it up and plz update fast.i cannot wait more. 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Yaar, Keep it up. Nice part. Please, continue.........
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Episode no:-6
(next day….morning…at hitens house)
Hiten:- anjali uth jao, varna college ke liye late ho jaaogi
Anjali:- kya bhaiya….sone do na….main thode der mein uth jaaogi….
Hiten:- acha anjali, main office jaa raha hoon, naashta taiyar hain,kaka se keh dena tumhe de denge…..aur uth jaaa….chal shaam ko milte hain…
Anjali:- bye bhaiya….
(hiten leaves for office and after a while anjali wakes up….)
Anjali:- uff bhaiya ko kya neend veend nahi aata hai kya??roz itne jaldi uth kar who kaise taiyaar ho jaate hain….hey bhagwaan meri pukar sun lo…
(at the office…..hiten walks up the stairs and suddenly a girl comes and falls on him…..they get up…)
Kasturi:- dekh kar nahi chall sakte hain aap…..dekha aapke wajah se kya ho gaya….
Hiten:- ji who main toh….dekh…
Kasturi:- aap kehna kya chahte hain ki main jaanbuujh kar aap par giri hooon…
Hiten:- nahinnn….mere kehne ka matlab yeh bilkul nahin tha….
Kasturi:- aapke matlab se mujhe kya matlab…mera toh kaam tamaam kar diya na aapne….aapke wajah se yeh saari papers ulajh gaye…..kuch hi der mein mera interview hain….main kya karungi….
Hiten:- dekhiye kuch nahin hoga aap…
Kasturi:- kya kuch nahin hoga....keh toh aise rahe hain jaise ki yeh office aapka hi ho...bade aaye kehne wale kuch nahin hoga...
Hiten:- main aapki mada kar sakta hoon...
Kasturi:- dekhiye aap please yahan se jaayiye aur mujhe mere haal par chod dijiye...agar yeh files theek nahin hui toh main yeh interview nahin dungi...mujhe apne kaam mein kisi bhi tareeke ki laaparwahi nahin chahiye...mujhe perfect rehne ki aadat hain....mujhe mere haal pad chod dijiye...
(she leaves)
Receptionist:- miss kasturi.....aap andar jaa sakti hain...
(she goes inside)
Kasturi:- may I come in sir…
Hiten:- come in…
Sir!!yeh raha mera resume(c.v.)
Hiten?facing her by his back on his seat)aap baith sakti hain miss kasturi...
Kasturi:- thank you sir...
Hiten:-toh aapko business ke bare mein bahut pata hain...
Kasturi:- ji sir!!!
Hiten:- miss kasturi...aapka cv bahut interesting hain....i liked it...you are on miss kasturi...
Kasturi:- thank you soo much sir...
(hiten turns around....kasturi is shocked)
Kasturi:- aaaaapppppp!!aap toh ....woh maine aapko bahar kitna kaha....aur aapne phir bhi mujhe job diya.....woh..
Hiten:- maine aapko job aapki kaabiliyat ke bal par diya hain....un papers ko time par reset kar ke aapne apne efficiency dikhayi hain....anyways...hope to expect the same in this office mam....best of luck..
Kasturi:- thank you sir!!!

Break

(College)

Anjali:- hii robby...
Robby:- hi anjali.....
Anjali:- kya hua aaj class mein....aur yeh kya angad bhi yahin par hain...
Robby:- aaj principal ne khaas announcement karvaayi hain ki class mein har student ko hna jaroori hain varna suspention......aaj toh sab aayenge...
(principle comes in)
Principle:- good morning students....
Angad:- namaskaar masterji.....
(everyone laughs)
Principle:- aaj main yahan un sabhi naye students ko welcome karma chahta hoon jinhone yehhhhh.....pyare main kya karne yahan aaya tha....
(he has a habit of forgetting everything..)
Angad:- sir aap yahan apne farewell ke liye hum sabko invite karne aaye hain....
Principle:- kya maera farewell??????
Angad:- sir woh miss bhattacharya toh aisa hi keh rahi thi...aap unke paas jaakar unhe college se nikalne wale hain aur isiliye hume inform karne aaye hain.....
Principle:- kya unhone aisa kah......ab toh unhe resign karma hi hoga...
(Everyone shouts in laugh)
Angad:- arey yaar rahul....idhar aa na.....
Rahul:- angad tumne anjali ko kahin dekha hain kya.....
Angad:-anjali....haan woh toh abhi robby ke saath bahar gayi....par tumhe usse kya kaam .....kahinn.....
Rahul:- arey nahin.....woh mujhe apne gaane ke bare mein usse kuch kehna tha.....anyways main tumse baad mein milunga...
(angad sees anita coming from the corridor and plans out an idea...)
Angad:- anita darling tum kahan thi.....kabse tumhara wait kar raha tha..
(everyone looks them in shock...anita surprised..)
Angad:- sweetheart yeh koi matlab toh nahin....tum raat ko mere saath thi to phir itne subah tum kyun chaligayi....oh darling i missed u so much...
(ANITA SEES ANGADS GIRLFRIENDS COMING)
Anita:- tumne theek kahan.....sweetheart woh kya hain na mujhe raat bhar ache se neend nahin aayi aur phir tum bhi toh kitni jyada badmaashi kar rahe the....tumne toh mujhe theek se sone bhi nahin diya...par koi baat nahin aaj tum aur main mere ghar par....aaj main ghar par bilkul akeli hoon....
Girls:- angad ek taraf toh tum isse badla lena chahti ho aur dusre taraf kal raat tum....
Angad:- yeh jhuth keh rahi hain...tum log iska yakeen mat karo....
Anita:- yeh mere baton ka toh vishwaas phir bhi na kahe lein abhi abhi toh tumne sabke saamne mujhe darling kaha....aur..
Angad:- arey woh sab toh sirf ek mazak tha tumhe badnaam karne ke liye....
Anita
?laughs) plan toh acha tha par puraana ....afsos mere par nahin chala.....tumhe kya laga maine jo kaha woh sach tha....main tumhe itne ache se jaan chuki hoon ki ab tumhaari yeh chote mote chaal mujhe asar nahi karte....better luck next time swwetheart..
(she leaves the classroom)

Break

(garden)

Kripa:- hi robby...
Robby:- hi kripa.....
Kripa:- robby tum meri mada karo na....
Robby:- mada kaisi madad....
Kripa:- woh robby.....main jaana chahti hun ki angad ko khane mein kya kya pasand hain...main kal uske liye apne haathon se khaana banaungi aur use khilaungi....
(robby upset)
Kripa:- kaho na robby....tum meri mada karoge na.....
Robby:- aaj tak yehi toh karta aaya hoon...
Kripa:- kya?
Robby:- kuch nahin.....kaho kya jaana hain…
Kripa:- angad ko khane mein kya pasand hain?
Robby:- angad koi pasand koi nahin jaanta…who aaj kisi cheez ko pasand karta hain aur phir kal wahi pasand use napasand hoti hain….
Kripa:- toh main kya karoon..
Robby:- tum pyar se apne haathon se kuch bhi banalo…..agar use tumhari kadar hogi toh wo apne aap hi use pasand karega….
Kripa:- theek kaha tumne……thank you so much robby….tum mere sach mein sabse ache dost ho…..
Robby:- ab tum ja kaha rahin ho…..
Kripa:- kal ke liya taiyaari karne….bye robby….
Robby:- bas yehi ek lafz hain jo main tumhe nahin kehna chahta…
(anjali enters)
Anjali:- kya hua….chali gayi wo….
Robby:- tumhe kaise pata ki kripa yahan….
Anjali:- I m sorry robby par maine tum dono ki saari baatein sun li….lekin acha hua…
Robby:- matlab????
Anjali:- dekho robby…ek baat toh tey hain ki angad kripa se pyar nahin karta….toh phir tum kyun kripa ko us khai mein giraana chahte ho jahan se who phir kabhi nahin uth sakti…..
Robby:- main samjha nahin…..
Anjali:- matlab yeh ki ab waqt aa gaya hain ki kripa ko tumhare bare mein pata chale aur who tumse apne pyar ka ishaar khus aakar karey…
Robby:- par yeh kaise ho sakta hain???kripa toh angad….aur phir uska mujhse pyar karma bahut mushkil hain….
Anjali:- mushkil hain…namumkin toh nahin…..
Robby:- tum kehna kya chahti ho…
Anjali:- ab tum bas wahi karte jaaon jo main kehti hoon , aur phir tum dekhna kripa khud times apne pyar ka izhaar karegi…..ab waqt aa gay hain ki use tumhari asli kadar honi shuru ho jaaye…aur yeh kal se shuru hoga….yeh ek dost ka apne aap se vaada hain…
(robby surprised and anjali smiles)

Preview:- anjali and rahul sitting in the caf and looking at each other continuosly…..romantic

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Posted: 18 years ago
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It's just too good. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Episode no. 7

(rahul,s house)
Rahul:- hi!kasturi di…aap kab aayi…oh!aapka toh interview than a??kya hua job mila???
(kasturi keeps silent )
Rahul:-di! Kya hua!!koi baat nahin agar ek job nahin mili…aap koshish karo dekhna aapko job zaroor milegi….
Kasturi:- nahin rahul….ab bas bahut ho gaya… ab main aur koshish nahin karungi..
Rahul:- Di… aap ek job ke liye apna vishwaas nahin kho sakti… mujhe aap par pura bharosa hain… dekhna aapko apki kabiliyat ke mutabik sabse achi job milegi…
Kasturi:- nahin rahul…. Ab iska koi fayda nahin hain…
Rahul:- par kyun di….aap aisa kaise keh sakti hain….meri di aisa kabhi nahin keh sakti….phir aap aisa kyun keh rahi hain…
Kasturi:- kyunki mujhe job mil gaya hain….
Rahul:- lekin di…aap phir se……..ek second…kya kaha aapne…..aapko job mil gaya hain????????
Kasturi:- (smiling) hhhhmmmmm….
Rahul:- wow di!!! Congratulations..
Kasturi:- aaj main bahut khush hoon…
Rahul:- vo sab to theek hain lekin pehle meri party…
Kasturi:- done….abhi chalo muh-haath dho lo main khaana lagati hoon…aaj sab tumhara favourite bana hain……
Rahul:- bas ek second mein aaya…
(anjali's house. Hiten comes in and trips...he remembers kasturi falling on him and starts dreaming….anjali sees him lost and goes to him..)
Anjali:- bhaiya…bhaiya…bhaiya….bhhhhaaaiiiyyyyaaa… aap theek toh hain na…(smiling) aaj kuch hua tha…..
Hiten:- haan wo aayi giri….
Anjali:- vo?voh kaun bhaiya......
(wakes up)
Hiten:- voh ? voh kaun...main kisi voh ko nahin jaanta...
Anjali:- arey vahi jiske baare mein aap din mein hi sapne dekh rahe hain...
Hiten:- main main kisi ke baare mein nahin soch raha tha......main toh office se aa raha tha aur achanak main yahan gir gaya.....yeh kaka bhi na aajkal theek se safai nahi karte koi bhi gir sakta tha.....tum samajh rahi ho na main kya keh raha hoon.....main kisi ke baare mein nahin soch raha tha....aur tum yahan kya kar rahi ho.....bahut zoro se bhukh lag rahi hain....chalo khaana khaate hain....kaka khaana lagaiye
(leaves)
Anjali:- aaj pehli baar bhaiya itne khoye hue hain....aakhir aisa kya hua hain...ho na ho koi baat toh zaroor hain....kahin jo main soch raha hoon woh sach toh nahin....agar aisa hain toh pata lagaana padega....

Break

(next day college auditorium, rahul sitting, dance rehearsals goin on. Kavya performs and so did kashish)
Kavya:- kya yaar kitni der lagadi.kabse tumhaara wait kar raha hoon aur tumhaare chakkar mein kaise kaise logon ka dance dekhna padta hain…
Kashish:- rahul! Apne dost ko bata do ki auditorium ka darwaaza udhar hain…
Kavya:- mujhe bataane ki zaroorat nahin main iske tarah bewakoof nahin hoon…
Kashish:-kya? Tumne mujhe bewakoof kaha….tumhaari itni himmat…
Kavya:- tumne abhi tak meri himmat dekhi kahan hain...
Rahul:- shut up !tum dono chup hoge nahin toh main yahan se chala jaaunga....akhir tum dono ki problem kya hain...na toh tum dono ek dusre ko dekhe bina reh sakte hain…matlab hamesha tum dono ek dusre ko dhundte rehte ho taaki ek dusre ki burai kar sako aur nahin tum dono ek dusre ke saamne rehb sakte ho….aakhir tum log chahte kya ho???/pehle tum yeh decide karlo phir main tumlogo se milunga....
(someone comes and says rahul that anjali is calling u in the cafeteria rahul leaves and goes)
Rahul:- anjali tumne mujhe yahan bulaaya…
Anjali:- haan angad ne kaha kit um mujhe kal dhund rahe the isliye maine tumhe yahan bulaaya….kaho kyun dhund rahe the…
Rahul:- vo main tumhe apne gaane ke liye bula raha tha , pata chala kit um chali gayi ho….khair coffe piye…
(coffee comes and both keep their hands on the same glass and look at each other continuosly….robby comes)
Robby:- hello…..kya ho gaya….tum dono aise hi dekhte rahoge ki apna haath bhi hataoge….anjali tumhe kab se dhund raha tha chalo na….
(both look at each other and robby takes away anjali and still they look at each other)

Break

Robby:-kya anjali…tumne toh kaha tha kit um meri madad karoge lekin tum toh subah se hi busy ho..
Anjali:- nahin robby vo bas main aa hi rhi thi ki…..
Robby:- vo sab chodo…aur class mein chalo tumhe kuch dikhaana hain…
(classroom)
Kripa:- angad! Main tumhaare liye apne haathon se khaana bana kar layi hoon khaa kar batao na ki kaisa bana hain…..
(angad laughs )
Angad:- tum mere liye khaana laayi ho…..lao yeh khana mujhe do….
(kripa gets happy nad angad calls the peun from out…)
Angad:- arey sun toh….yeh khaa kar bata toh kaisa bana hain…
Peun:- bahut acha…
Angad:- kripa ise oh sach mein tumhaara khaana acha laga....toh phir tai raha ab se is peun ke liye tum roz apne haaton se khaana bana kar laana......yeh khush ho jaayega aur shaayad tumhe bhi khushi mil jaaye....
Robby:- dekha tumne anjali...bechaari kripa ko kitni beijati sehni padi....main abhi jaa kar use manata hoon....
Anjali:- ruko....tum kahin nahi jaa rahe ho....is waqt kripa bahut upset hain aur agar vo sach mein tumhe apna sabse acha dost maanti hain toh vo tumhaare pass ayegi....abki baar use apni dosti saabit karni hain tumhe nahin....
Robby:- agar vo mere paas nahin aayi toh....
Anjali:- vo aayegi…use aana hi hoga…
Robby:- phir main usse baat kar lunga…..
Anjali:- vo ayegi toh zaroor lekin tum usse baaat nahin karoge….
Robby:- par kyun....tum toh use mere kareeb laa rahi thi par ab toh tum use mujhse dur kar rahe ho...
Anjali:- tum nahin samjhoge…hum tab tak us cheez ki kadar nahin karte jab tak vo cheez hamaare paas hoti hain….jab who cheez humse dur hoti hain tab jaakar hume uski asli kadar hoti hain….aur kripa ko tumhaari kadar karni hogi……bas tum jaisa main kehti hoon vaisa karte jaaon…pkir dekho aage aage hota hain kya…….(smiles)

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great. Aage badhho.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great. it's nice.keep going. 👏 👏

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