An Abhigya story : The Siblings - EPILOGUE PG 89||Banner updated||

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Hey guys!😊

I had an idea for my next story on Abhigya. The storyline is completely different from the serial though. I will give you the background and probably the first chapter ,you tell me if I should proceed.

Here it's going to be Abhi and Bulbul instead of Abhi and Aliya ( to all the Aliya fans out there ,sorry! She might /might not form part of the story .but you never know 😉) and Pragya and Purab instead of Pragya and Bulbul.

Abhi is not the rockstar (I know that's shocking but we have been reading many stories on those lines and the serial itself portrays him as one so I thought this will be a bit different) and Pragya is not a lecturer (you will get to know what they do in the first update)

Purab loves dance,Bulbul loves music.

They live in different parts of the world with their families.(Abhi's parents are alive in this story and Pragya's dad is there too)

So how do you like this broad idea ? I know I haven't given much of details but let's see how it goes😊

Please do read and comment and spread the word,if you like my stories! 😊



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part One

It's a Monday morning and the usual scene unfolds in the Arora mansion.
Mr Sun , who doesn't want to miss the cute exchange that was going to follow ,between one of his favourite bro-sis combos, decides to peep in through the window.

"Chote"
...

"Chote"
...

Pragya moves the curtains aside and lets the sun's rays fall on her Kumbakaran brother.

"Purab!"

Purab stirs in his sleep because of the sun falling on his face and when he hears his full name being called by his Di he knows it isn't good for him and so decides to reply with a "hmm? kya hai Di? Sone do na please "

And *SPLASH*! 😃

"Diii! Why did you pour water on my face now ? You know I was just about to dance with Madhuri Dixit in my dream. You ruined it Di!"😡

"Acha Madhuri Dixit eh? If you continue dancing with her inside your head then one Ms. Smriti Dixit will dance on top of your head!"

"Top of my head? What di you drunk? Wait what? Smriti Dixit! Isn't she my lecturer?"

"Exactly beta and you have an exam today in exactly one and a half hours from now "

"Exam? Di it's Sunday! see sun is also there outside"

Pragya rolls her eyes 😆 "Purab it's Monday ! And I am giving you half an hour to get ready and come out for breakfast. I will drop you in college ,that's on the way to my location for the ad shoot".

"Oh god and now I should first find out what the portions for the exam are.Who even discovered these exams? Why waste time studying when you can use it for more awesome things like dancing? 😒 "

"You can dance all you want after you finish this degree of yours this year.Now chalo get up"

And finally Purab manages to get up and go get ready murmuring "Exams arghhh!"

And we can witness similar scenes almost every day in this house. Pragya, as you must have guessed by now ,is the older one and is a fashion designer by profession.She also walks the ramp for her friends if needed (According to them, she is beautiful and she can carry herself with confidence on the stage and Pragya doesn't mind doing it either ) and has also done a couple of ads in the past. Pragya,just like in the show,is down to earth,loves and respects elders and likes helping all. Despite being in the fashion industry,she doesn't like to show off and is happy wearing Indian and western outfits (rather, whatever she is comfortable in) and she believes in God.

Purab loves dance but decides to get a degree and then pursue his passion as he needs time to mould himself and practice to reach his destination -the London school of dance.He took up commerce in high school so is currently doing B.com and yes he hardly knows what's going on in college as he spends most of his time learning new forms of dance and gaining expertise over the already known ones😆. But his friends always back him up and help him finish all assignments etc.

Pragya and Purab's dad is a well known doctor-cardiologist and mom is a home maker. .

Pragya and Purab love each other a lot and despite all these petty arguments they know they will always be there for each other. Pragya calls him Chote unless she is angry with him (or tries to be angry 😉). They are best friends more than siblings and for Pragya, Purab comes first before anyone else and vice versa.They live in Mumbai.

In another part of the world,London to be precise, Mr.Moon is all set to witness another conversation between his and his brother Sun's second favourite bro-sis duo.

"Gudiya!"

"Bhai I am here!"

"Hey Gudiya! Doing what?"

"Trying to compose a new song.Got this nice idea sometime back and wanted to implement it.So writing down the lyrics".

"Okay first drink this milk and then proceed".

"Bhai you know I hate milk then why do you do this to me? You don't love me anymore!😔"

"Oh stop the drama Gudiya. You should get national award for all the acting that you do daily.You are just recovering from that sore throat of yours and you will feel better if you drink something hot"

"Then why not hot chocolate?"

"Chocolate isn't good when you have a bad throat"

"Ok whatever Bhai !This is the last time though"

"Ya we will see about that"

"What did you say?"

"Oh nothing at all.Sure this is the last time,now drink like a good girl"

And Bulbul drinks the milk that Abhi so lovingly gives her.

Abhishek Prem Mehra owns Mehra fashions (has taken it over from his Dad who retired couple of years back),the world known fashion group and he has won many awards for his excellence and skill in the fashion designing field.Though he is well-off,he doesn't let money and fame affect him and can do anything for his family.
His darling sister Bulbul Mehra is passionate about music and soon after school decides to do a degree for a couple of years before she pursues music as a career (similar to someone eh? They don't know their tastes are similar now do they ?😉) and just like the Pragya- Purab duo,even these two can do anything to keep each other happy and never hide things from one another.

Abhi calls Bulbul 'Gudiya' from the first time he saw her,soon after she was born, when he was around four years old.He was very thrilled to see such a tiny baby in his mother's arms and the first thought that came to his mind was - "She looks like a doll with her tiny hands and legs and her pink cheeks. She is my Gudiya"🥳

Abhi loves his Dadi a lot but she lives in India along with Tauji and Taiji. Abhi's dad got a really big opportunity to prove himself in this industry and so Dadi asked him to go to London and achieve his dream. When they asked her to come along with them,she refused as after Dadaji's death couple of years back,she has been living with his memories in that house and doesn't want to leave from there.Abhi doesn't want to leave her but she convinces him saying he should help his dad and more so because its a totally new place. Hence Abhi,Bulbul and their parents are in London now and they visit their dadi once a year and Abhi keeps talking to her almost daily through Skype.

And this is how we start our story on the journey of these four people and how destiny makes them meet .Should I continue ?

Edited by -harini- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is really nice. You should continue.
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That was Awweessomee! Please continue! Cant wait for the next part!
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Originally posted by: Harini7

This is really nice. You should continue.


Thanks a lot :) will do
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Originally posted by: syazaibrahim

That was Awweessomee! Please continue! Cant wait for the next part!


Thaaannkkyouu 😃 just wanted to try something different, happy you like it :). Read my other story also when possible and let me know how it is 😊
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Wow! Something very different! Please you should continue! <3
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Originally posted by: simsim25

Wow! Something very different! Please you should continue! <3


Hello Simsim, thanks a lot 😊 will update Part two soon. Also you had liked the first three parts of 'Birthday Surprise..' so read parts 4 to 6 also when you find time. I guess you will like it 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Definitely Continue!😃
It's great.👍🏼

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Guys. Here is the next part!
I have made few additions about Abhi's Dadi and Pragya's family in part one so just glance through that once now, if you have already read that part.
Please like and comment MORREEE ! That will motivate me to write better😊 .This is one BIG chapter so enjoy 😆



Part Two

Praggs, as her friends call her,is about to reach the location where her ad shoot is to take place. She gets a call from Pratima,one of her best friends and she smiles and attends the call.

Pragya: "Haan Prati..kaise ho? Bolo kya hua?"

Pratima: "Praggs yaad hai na aaj Abhii ka b'day hai! Aarahi hai na tu aaj shaam?"

Pragya: "Of course Prati! I will be there as soon as my shoot gets done. See you in the evening"😊

(Abhii here is not our Abhi Mehra (of course it can't be .they don't know each other yet according to our plot remember ? 😆 ),it's Pragya and Pratima's school friend -Abhiinaya Mathur).

So after the shoot Pragya goes to Abhiinaya's place and they have a lot of fun at the party. Abhiinaya is also a fashion designer and works in Mehra fashions-Mumbai branch. 😉 Pratima is into modelling so good for them as they can always keep in touch thanks to being in the same field .

Abhii: "Praggs what are you up to nowadays?"

P: "Been designing few collections for the shows that come up on and off and also taking up ads as and when possible re.."

A: "I feel you are yet to put your talent into proper use. You have to show the world who you are and what you are capable of,Praggs. I know you are doing well but don't you want to get associated with some big name in the industry ? Why don't you apply for Mehra group? There is a vacancy as one of the designers quit recently.."

P: "Actually you know what Abhii? You are right and this is a good idea. I have also been thinking for a while now about moving on to the next phase and gaining some good exposure. Also I have always admired that man Abhi Mehra ! How much he has achieved at such young age!Hmm okay done I will apply after having a word with Ma and Pa about it.Hope I get in."

A: "Yayy! if you get in ,which I know you will, we will work together !!" 😃

P: "Oh ya Abhii! now that will be exciting 😃 (and they hi five each other) .Thanks for this pep talk ,guess i needed it" 😛.

A:" Anything for you Praggs " 😊

P:"Aww 🤗.Okay B'day girl,I am getting late.Will leave now and go discuss with parents and Purab about this and let you know. Happy b'day once again and God bless you❤️.Bye"

A:"Bye Praggs drive safely😊"

Pragya then goes home and talks to her parents and Purab about wanting to apply for Mehra fashions and they are happy with her decision . After all they know that their Pragya will decide something only after giving it a lot of thought .They ask her to go ahead and apply and she is happy with their support and goes to sleep hoping tomorrow will be a fresh start.

The next morning,Pragya applies to the post of designer and waits for a reply from the HR.
At around lunch time she gets a call from an unknown number.
"Hi am i talking to Ms Pragya Arora?"
"Yes may I know who this is ?"
"Hi Ms. Arora,this is Siddharth Patel from Mehra fashions .I am the HR here.We happened to go through your resume and it seems impressive . Will you be able to come to office tomorrow morning by ten for the interview?"
Pragya is very happy and readily accepts and hangs up saying she will be there.

Pragya does well in the first two rounds of the interview and meets Mr Aman,the head of the designing department,for the final round. He is very impressed with her creative ideas and her work till now and asks her to join right away,sensing that she will be an asset to the company.

Two weeks after Pragya joined the Mehra group,they are informed about a show that was to be held next week and that it is a very important event for the Mehra Group. Aman asks Pragya to design the outfits for the models and asks Abhiinaya to help her with it. Pragya puts her best foot forward and comes up with some really good designs and is kind of happy with her work.

With around four days left for the big day,Abhiinaya and Pragya have lunch together in their pantry and she asks Pragya to mail her the designs so that she can get it approved and arrange for getting the fabric stitched for the models and getting matching accessories for the same. They work in different floors and so Pragya decides to walk to the second floor while Abhiinaya goes to the third floor.

Pragya comes back to her cubicle and switches on her laptop. Just as she is about to attach her designs in her mail she sees the TV in her room flashing Abhishek Prem Mehra's name. She increases the volume and gets to know that he has managed to sign a big contract with a famous advertising company and they were to start working on that in few days. She feels happy to see her role model ( well yeah as we already know she respects him for his commitment to his field of work she considers him no less than her role model) achieving something or the other and is excited that she got a job in his company.

She thinks about the news when she selects the mail ID and attaches the pictures, that she fails to notice whose name she has selected. Moreover, she goes on to type ..

"Hey Abhii! PFA the designs for the show.
Did you see the news ? This Abhi Mehra is awesome man! I really wish I could meet him some day and show him my work or just talk to him and get some inspiration. I am really happy that I got a job here , thanks to your motivation.I will get to know about his accomplishments sooner now. Anyway chalo you get these approved and check for accessories and let me know if you need help.Bye"

She clicked the send button and saw the
"Your message has been successfully sent" pop up appear in few seconds.

After around ten minutes she gets a call on her mobile from Abhiinaya..
A:
"Praggs send the designs fast na.. This Neethu is available only for sometime so I should check with her if these are okay before I send it to Manav to decide on the accessories".

P:
"What? I already sent it ten mins back re! Check properly. I even have it in my sent items".

A:
"I swear I didn't get it Praggs,no kidding. Wait I will come down".

She comes down and both of them see what the problem is and Pragya turns pale when she realises what happened.
Instead of sending the mail to abhiim@mehragroup.com she sent it to abhim@mehragroup.com and no prizes for guessing whose ID that is 😃.

Of course THE ABhishek Prem Mehra's. Unfortunately for Pragya ,her friend Abhiinaya Mathur's name has one extra letter 'I' which she didn't notice and ended up sending the mail to the boss himself .

She wanted the ground to open up and swallow her that moment😆 (Poor Praggs I pity her😔)
. If she had sent just the designs she could've immediately sent an apology mail but now she has spoken about Abhi to Abhi himself. She feels all embarrassed and shows her friend the mail.

Though Abhiinaya wants to laugh at Pragya's carelessness she knows that her friend doesn't know what to do at the moment and also she is quite new to the place . So she asks Praggs to send an apology mail to Abhi Mehra explaining about her confusion with the mail ID's and that it was not intentional.

Abhiinaya gets a call and she leaves asking Pragya not to worry and to send him the apology mail and her the designs.
Pragya thinks
"Zyada math soch Pragya! Mistake is yours and you have to apologise.Waise bhi it is not like you said something bad about him,you were only praising him so just send it"

Just as Praggs is convinced that it is the best thing to do, she gets a pop up message -new mail from abhim@mehragroup.com! 😃

And this is where i leave you guys for now. Please do read,like and comment!


Edited by -harini- - 9 years ago

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