OS: Rishhton Ka Ilzaam..:Last ch. on p-78 - All rev./com. responded

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pansy123

@pansy123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#601

Great OS shirley dear. ⭐️👏

Sorry I couldn't comment earlier first due to my sprained hand and second I waited the story to unfold. I'm sorry I couldn't connect with the Nidhi but the characters you tried to portray where etched and embedded well...the story was superbly narrated... I felt the angst that was cogent, the pain that was eloquent, the hope that can't be reached, the dream that couldn't turn to reality...Kudos to you my dear friend for narrating this so beautifully! 👏

The story and Ashutosh here reminded me of famous ghazal ...

"Ask me not, my love, for the passions of yore...

I had believed that with you, the world (would be) luminous;
(that) with the pain of your love, there (would be) no issue with worldly sorrows;
(that) your beauty (would) lend permanence to the spring;
(that) save your eyes, nothing else matters in the world;
(that) if I could win you, destiny (itself) would supplicate before me...

but it wasn't so, i had merely wanted that it be so;
there are other sorrows in the world, beyond those of love;
and forms of relief other than the comfort of Union...

Ask me not, my love, for the passions of yore...

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Veenaper

@Veenaper

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#602

Dear Shirley, a fantastic end to a truly unique but hard hitting OS. Though I started reading this OS from its first update the pairing was not to my taste. Yes could imagine only MB in the role of Dr. Ashutosh. But the way the story unfolded with brilliant dialogues - my heart went out for Nidhi. Yon have portrayed her character as a successful paediatrician but lacking in confidence in her own accomplishments because of her first unrequited love which was brutally crushed. Married to the man who loves her dearly but she treating him more like a friend - it happens so many times in our own lives - we do not value what we have.

After I read the previous update I was totally shocked but this update was truly fabulous 👏. I somehow knew for sure that you will turn the tables here and that is what you have done so beautifully. Dr. Ashutosh did not have to do a thing here - Nidhi realises and appreciates what a precious man she has in her life during the course of their outing. Her sense of glee with the shopping - typical Nidhi. She reminding Dr. Ashutosh about the toy for his son which he had so conveniently forgotten tugged at my heart but the best part is the finale when she confesses to Rohan 👍🏼.

And let me confess that I started reading this OS because of two reasons - one is you are a brilliant writer and secondly Deepali Gupta was your sounding board. I have always looked up to her reviews at several posts but mainly at Pansy's FF - her analysis are superlative 👏. You two make an extraordinary and incredible pair 👍🏼. Hats off young lady for this OS.

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Diksha

@Diksha_1991

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#603

Hey Shirley,

You ended this OS 😭 😭 so soon...

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VIDYA

@vidyasabde

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#604

Tuppu kya review deeya !!! 👏

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PMithalee

@PMithalee

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#605

Shirley ji can I ask u something. ... Mujhe na Ye Ashu nahi Rohan chahiye 😳 ☺️ Plzzz...plzzz...plzzz...

Ashutosh aap kisi ko bhi dedo...

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mudraswathi

@mudraswathi

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#606

You have yet another OS in your kitty Shirley!👏

All the best for the next semester👏

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gargpoo

@gargpoo

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#607

its simply awesome👏

congrats for completing the OS..

Thank u so much for giving us this wonderful OS😳

extremely sorry i couldn't give reviews this time..but i read every update..fell in love with ur writing all over again..hats off!

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Anjani9

@Anjani9

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#608

Nice OS...Thank you...👏

Ashu made Nidhi realize she is in love with Rohan but what about Ashu's? He is still in love with Nidhi and in loss?

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sshirley

@sshirley

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#609

Thank you friends for the wonderful reaction to my last chapter..

but I would have love CONSTRUCTIVE criticism equally.

Anyways my smile is a mile wide after reading the beautiful reviews.. but I can NOT take the credit alone.. I MUST share it equally with Deepali Gupta

Esp. the best part acc to me - that toy reminder - was her idea.

Friends, I am really tied up at the moment and will reply to ur beautiful reviews whenever I can - I m really sorry and feel guilty about the delay in replying to such b'fully analytical reviews.. but cant help it..

Keep them coming.. I will defo reply to each of you...