OS: Rishhton Ka Ilzaam..:Last ch. on p-78 - All rev./com. responded - Page 74

Originally posted by: ssktlk

Hi Shirley,

I was on vacation so this late review. Very well written ff. The conclusion of your story is just apt, especially for MB :) Though its sad to see Ashni not together, but the way you have put it, its perfect. Could not have been better any other way. With time, dreams, feelings mould into something else, take different paths, and thats how they are meant to be, you have shown that beautifully.Will wait for your next break and next ff. 😊

Friends, I am extremely sorry for the unpardonable delay in responding to your beautiful reviews/comments..

Wow I missed this OS so It was super to read all the chapters in one go. But I simply loved it. Would never have liked to see Nidhi and Ashutosh getting separated but your pen has done wonders. Beautifully written . It's amazing what talented writers we have on this forum . That is what keeps us all coming back again and again to this forum even After our show has ended and any chances of a second season seem really slim.

Hello Shirley,

Originally posted by: sshirley

Friends, I am extremely sorry for the unpardonable delay in responding to your beautiful reviews/comments..

but I was not keeping well last 20 days and the pressure of studies was ever increasing..

I sincerely apologize

have responded to everyone now.. pl. let me know if I missed any comment

Hello Shirley

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Hello Shirley...

hi Anjani.. sorry could not respond earlier

Originally posted by: swati62

Wow I missed this OS so It was super to read all the chapters in one go. But I simply loved it. Would never have liked to see Nidhi and Ashutosh getting separated but your pen has done wonders. Beautifully written . It's amazing what talented writers we have on this forum . That is what keeps us all coming back again and again to this forum even After our show has ended and any chances of a second season seem really slim.

Originally posted by: Diksha_1991

Hello Shirley,

Tc. Dear. Get well Soon 🤗

Originally posted by: aardhan

Hello Shirley

Hope you are feeling better now? 😊

The last semester is usually most stressful but hang in there! 🤗

Originally posted by: sshirley

Pansy extremely sorry dear for the delay...

Hi dear! How are you? 🤗 Hope you didn't mind quoting the lines here. i didn't write earlier but i felt these lines making the OS complete... giving thoughts to Ashutosh's feelings and his point of view. these are the line's from famous ghazal sung by Noorjahan...here are the lyrics:

Mujh se pehlii sii muhabbat mere mahboob na maang
mai.n ne samjhaa thaa ki tuu hai to darakshaa.n hai hayaat
teraa gham hai to gham-e-dahar kaa jhagDaa kyaa hai
terii suurat se hai aalam mei.n bahaaro.n ko sabaat
terii aankho.n ke sivaa duniyaa mei.n rakhaa kyaa hai
tuu jo mil jaaye to taqdiir niguu.n ho jaaye
yuu.n na thaa, mai.n ne faqat chaahaa thaa yuu.n ho jaaye


aur bhii dukh hai.n jamaane mei.n muhabbat ke sivaa
raahate.n aur bhii hai.n vasl kii raahat ke sivaa
mujh se pehlii sii muhabbat mere mahboob na maang

anginat sadiyo.n ke taariiq bahimaan tilism
resham-o-atlaas-o-kamkhvaab mei.n bunwaaye hue
jaa-ba-jaa bikte hue kuucha-o-baazaar mei.n jism
khaak mei.n lithDe hue khoon mei.n nahlaaye hue
jism nikle hue amraaz ke tannuuro.n se
piip bahtii huii galte hue naasuuro.n se
lauT jaatii hai udhar ko bhii nazar kyaa kiije
ab bhii dilkash hai teraa husn magar kyaa kiije
aur bhii dukh hai.n zamaane mei.n muhabbat ke sivaa
raahate.n aur bhii hai.n vasl kii raahat ke sivaa
mujh se pehlii sii muhabbat mere mahboob na maang