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mudraswathi

@mudraswathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#581

Originally posted by: bc123456
And Shirley thank u for all discussion , u must be proud that your OS generated so much , thought and discourse , after seeing life in all it's colors the good the bad and the ugly, maybe , now am more willing to see both sides of the picture 👍🏼 Great going

absolutely... great going Shirley!👍🏼

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mudraswathi

@mudraswathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#582

Originally posted by: suku_07

Beautiful reply Mudra ji...It will an insult to me as a human being if I don't applaud you...👏 Thank you 😳

kis cheez ki re? maine Mallika ko hate kiya.. kahi iss keliye toh nahi??😳😡😆

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sshirley

@sshirley

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Posted: 11 years ago

#583

Originally posted by: bc123456
And Shirley thank u for all discussion , u must be proud that your OS generated so much , thought and discourse , after seeing life in all it's colors the good the bad and the ugly, maybe , now am more willing to see both sides of the picture 👍🏼 Great going

Oh yes Dr. Babs, I am so delighted to know that my work has enough 'substance' to make highly intellectual and deep-thinking people like you, Mudra, Deeps, and others want to have such analytical discussions/👏👏

And as I said before, it is discerning and analytical readers like u all that make writers of us.. so this is a constant give and take of ideas amongst all of us..😃

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sshirley

@sshirley

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Posted: 11 years ago

#584

Originally posted by: Pardeshi.Mithu
Hello Shello Ji 😛

Hey Mithee

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sshirley

@sshirley

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Posted: 11 years ago

#585

Originally posted by: Pardeshi.Mithu
Arre aap toh abhi so rahe hongey na! Deepali ji bhi off line dikh rahi hain... Next update kab hain? ????? 😊

are next update kaa mat poochho yaar

haven't written anything yet. was v. busy last 2-3 days

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sshirley

@sshirley

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Posted: 11 years ago

#586

Originally posted by: Diksha_1991
Hello Shirley,

How are you?

Hey Diksha.

I am doing great, how are you?

did u get a job?

Sorry by weekend will read both update at once & will post review 😛

Okay aaram se

Thanks for the PM 🤗

Oh you are most welcome dear..

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sshirley

@sshirley

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Posted: 11 years ago

#587

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

absolutely... great going Shirley!👍🏼

Thank you Mudra, I bow down

and I am very lucky and proud to have readers like you..

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sshirley

@sshirley

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Posted: 11 years ago

#588

QUOTE=Pardeshi.Mithu]As far as review of the previous chapter... Kya bolu!!! Nice progress 😃

Thank you so much Mithee😃😃

Toh Anmol Mallu and Ashu ka hee beta hain...hmmm...chalo acha hain and thank you Shirley ji ki aapne describe nahi kiya ki actually Anmol hua kaise 🤣 I mean warna koi aur writer hota toh ache se describe karta ki kaise Mallu was reacting and Ashu ko majburi main vo sab karna pad raha tha 🤣 🤣

Haanji Amol is actually AshMal's kid..

and yes I thot ye OS hai koi biology class nahi jo vo sab describe karne baithoon.😆😆😆

@bold - oh yeah?😛🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

And Shirley ji par aapne toh Mallu ko Devi bana diya 😆 Par chalo koi nai bechari ko aapke OS main hee sahi par Ashu mil toh gaya... Happy for her...

Well I felt (in the show in the beginning) that she was mean only till she din't get Ashu.. in the beginning she was shown a decently good human being. She became mean only when-

1. she saw Nidhi snatching away her (acc. to her) Ashu from right under her nose.

2. Sue ka constant bhadkaana.

Once she got married to Ashu, she mellowed down.. its like uski zidd poori hui.. and she had agreed to be his friend.. the position she was in, she was willing to compromise with just friendship.. and that is what she got from him till 2 years after their mrg.

And Nidhi! Kya bolu???? Mujhe uske koi bhi reaction main koi khot nahi nazar aata... She is just thinking about Ashutosh aur unka pyaar... par Ashu hain na putting some sense into her brain...

Precisely. Aur hame ye nahi bhoolna chahiye ke all the happenings from ch-1 till half of ch-4 happened in just a few hours - from after lunch till say 10 at night.. she just came to know that her love had not been one side - that's a big change and it (temporarily) makes a kaleidoscopic shift in one's perspective, esp. in cases where old wounds have been stiched up without cleansing with an antiseptic..

Life me jab koi jhatka milta hai - positive ya negative - tab us waqt instantly hum apne mann me kaafi kuch soch baith te hain... lekin after we get used to the new realities, we can easily laugh at out at what we thot earlier..

Aur as you understand, sochne aur karne me bahut farak hota hai - sochte toh hum kaafi kuch hain, but when it comes to doing, we never do even 1% of what we think..

Happy ki Baba mil gaye

😃

Ye toh Pakka hain ki Ashni won't get together! Chance hee nahi hain...Ashu khudke swaarth ke liye baakio ki zindagi tabaah nahi karega

Thank you so much Mithee for understanding this so clearly yaar... I feel proud to have you as my reader.

Baaki ka main kuch nahi bol sakti...I mean main deep analysis nahi kar sakti human behavior...society and all...hum naadan hain...na duniya ko jaante na koi zyaada samajh rakhte hain! Toh...

Arre nahi I am actually amazed at your maturity Mithee.. sachchi.. I am surprised that you are so sensible at this age👏👏.

And the best thing about u is that u are so humble - aap se badi hoon isi naate ek baat bolun? don't ever lose this quality of yours. I know its difficult in today's world but phir bhi.😃

Baaki again loved reading the chap the way you portrayed every scene was just Awesome Clap