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bc123456

@bc123456

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#611

All the best Shirley for your next semester , when do u finish ? Tc

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ttrocks

@ttrocks

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#612

Originally posted by: vidyasabde
Tuppu kya review deeya !!! 👏

Thank you Dr. Vidya. Happy that you liked it. 🤗 Hope Shirley and Deepali like it too 😳

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PMithalee

@PMithalee

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#613

Shirley ji aapka next Sem kabse hain??...aur kuch din hain na? Ya ho gaye holidays? ??? Ye sab log aapko bhagaa kyu rahe hain 😕

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deepaligupta197

@deepaligupta197

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#614

Originally posted by: Pardeshi.Mithu
Shirley ji aapka next Sem kabse hain??...aur kuch din hain na? Ya ho gaye holidays? ??? Ye sab log aapko bhagaa kyu rahe hain 😕

Her next sem starts her mon Mithee...in a few hrs from now😊

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deepaligupta197

@deepaligupta197

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#615

Originally posted by: ttrocks
Thank you Dr. Vidya. Happy that you liked it. 🤗 Hope Shirley and Deepali like it too 😳

Luvd it Tupu...thank u for the beautiful review⭐️
Shirley wud reply to all the reviews soon😃

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lee_Ashni

@lee_Ashni

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#616

Shirley, hats off 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Brilliant indeed. Apt thinking, and expression.

Congrats for delicately unfolding the story.⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Here you have depicted

the serenity of Ashu-Nidhi love relationship

The strength of Nidhi-Rohan hidden bonding as husband and wife

Ashu's mature approach to make Nidhi realize the essence of her true inner feelings for Rohan

Well done Shirley.🤗

And thanks to Deepali for her special inputs to add to the success of your OS. 🤗

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PMithalee

@PMithalee

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#617

Originally posted by: deepaligupta197

Her next sem starts her mon Mithee...in a few hrs from now😊

Wokay! 😎 Main na bohot badi paagal hoon... khaamhakha yaha itna kasht uthaakar pooch rahi hoon 🤣 Sidha sidha aapse pooch leti toh ho jaata 🤣 Yaar Shirley ji ke baare main aapko na pata ho aisa ho sakta hain bhala 😉 Sounding Board 😛 Hehehe 😉

Mazaak tha ab danda lekar mere piche bhaagna mat 🤣 🤣

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Suvika.

@Suvika.

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#618

Good conclusion to the OS Shirley...once again...your skill as a writer has gone way way up. Great Job!!

Deepali...you have acted as the editor / sounding board /defender. Fantastic!!

Wonderful team work. Take a bow ladies!!

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deepaligupta197

@deepaligupta197

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#619

Originally posted by: Pardeshi.Mithu

Wokay! 😎 Main na bohot badi paagal hoon... khaamhakha yaha itna kasht uthaakar pooch rahi hoon 🤣 Sidha sidha aapse pooch leti toh ho jaata 🤣 Yaar Shirley ji ke baare main aapko na pata ho aisa ho sakta hain bhala 😉 Sounding Board 😛 Hehehe 😉

Mazaak tha ab danda lekar mere piche bhaagna mat 🤣 🤣

Y danda Mithee... U need something special...this is for u