OS: Rishhton Ka Ilzaam..:Last ch. on p-78 - All rev./com. responded - Page 63

Originally posted by: Crazy.rock

Wat a fabulous team work ...Deepali was of course one of my favourite reviewers n to b honest I started reading this story when I read that she was going to b ur soundboard...n I must acknowledge the fact that she has supported one of the finest writers

Originally posted by: Veenaper

Dear Shirley, a fantastic end to a truly unique but hard hitting OS. Though I started reading this OS from its first update the pairing was not to my taste. Yes could imagine only MB in the role of Dr. Ashutosh. But the way the story unfolded with brilliant dialogues - my heart went out for Nidhi. Yon have portrayed her character as a successful paediatrician but lacking in confidence in her own accomplishments because of her first unrequited love which was brutally crushed. Married to the man who loves her dearly but she treating him more like a friend - it happens so many times in our own lives - we do not value what we have.

After I read the previous update I was totally shocked but this update was truly fabulous 👏. I somehow knew for sure that you will turn the tables here and that is what you have done so beautifully. Dr. Ashutosh did not have to do a thing here - Nidhi realises and appreciates what a precious man she has in her life during the course of their outing. Her sense of glee with the shopping - typical Nidhi. She reminding Dr. Ashutosh about the toy for his son which he had so conveniently forgotten tugged at my heart but the best part is the finale when she confesses to Rohan 👍🏼.

And let me confess that I started reading this OS because of two reasons - one is you are a brilliant writer and secondly Deepali Gupta was your sounding board. I have always looked up to her reviews at several posts but mainly at Pansy's FF - her analysis are superlative 👏. You two make an extraordinary and incredible pair 👍🏼. Hats off young lady for this OS.

Hello Shirley...Hello Friends...😊

Originally posted by: lee_Ashni

Shirley, hats off 👏

Brilliant indeed. Apt thinking, and expression.

Congrats for delicately unfolding the story.⭐️

Here you have depicted

the serenity of Ashu-Nidhi love relationship

The strength of Nidhi-Rohan hidden bonding as husband and wife

Ashu's mature approach to make Nidhi realize the essence of her true inner feelings for Rohan

Well done Shirley.🤗

And thanks to Deepali for her special inputs to add to the success of your OS. 🤗

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Hello Shirley...Hello Friends...😊

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Congratulations Shirley and Deepali...

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Good conclusion to the OS Shirley...once again...your skill as a writer has gone way way up. Great Job!!

Deepali...you have acted as the editor / sounding board /defender. Fantastic!!

Wonderful team work. Take a bow ladies!!

Originally posted by: deepaligupta197

Y danda Mithee... U need something special...this is for u

Originally posted by: deepaligupta197

Hi Meera!! Long time 🤗

Thank u so very much for finding wat I scribble worth reading. Feel humbled by ur words of appreciation. Nd yes Shirley is a writer of high calibre. The magic she weaves is truly spell bounding. Thank u for devoting time to read this beautiful OS. Truly enjoyed every step with her.

She wud soon b here to reply to ur lovely review.