OS: The Rain & My Man (Part 4 / Page 19) - Page 11

Originally posted by: jyotinayana

Beautifully written please continue

Originally posted by: ..oneOone..

haha anjani...
that move would have created a blunder if CV wont have cut the call when he did...😉🤣
and, just wait and see...what that mention of call bring out of from ashni😆😆😆😆

Originally posted by: Anjani9

How can you he hear all that in call...there were no dialogues naaa..😳

Originally posted by: jayasree.rao

Ana,

Col.Verma's POV is very well written. It very aptly expresses the inner turmoil of the father of a female child . Every father goes through this dilemma whether it is a love marriage or an arranged marriage as he finally wants his daughter to be happy.

Ashu being a n honest man is worried about his secret visit to the hospital.

Waiting to read the next chapter which will have some happy moments of ASHNI.

Originally posted by: vidyasabde

kya review den? badhiya tha...par post the next one fatafat...waiting eagerly.

Originally posted by: pansy123

Great Going!

No sorry needed...repetition of the dialogues was imperative...in fact very apt for the rude awakening Col. Verma needed 👏. Anji's act was well thought out 👏.

(Thank u so much dear...Am glad you didn't get bored with the repetitive dialogues...And though, Anji's act was good...But it could have fall back if col.verma wouldn't had cut the call, when he did😉🤣)

The way he turned nostalgic...when understanding dawns on him was remarkable:

I sat down on my rocking chair where I used to sit holding a sleeping Nidhi in my arms in her childhood. I used to caress her hairs while thinking about her future. How she would get married and how perect of a husband, I would choose for her who will shower my daughter with her unlimited love and will keep her happy.

Wasn't Ashutosh that same man?

(Just like every father, he wanted best for Nidhi...And after there conversation, that title of 18's years of age gap removed from his eyes and he saw that what he wanted, he is actually getting in the form of ashutosh)😳

Ashutosh's dejection, his despondency was well expressed:

My hands itched to hold her fragile body in my arms, my lips were trembling from the thrusts of her tounge, my mouth still tasted of her, my legs were wobbling, my eyes filled with tears, my ears were unable to hear anything other than her moans that I even ignored Anji's calling voice and my heart, pumping my blood with a double speed. But still, each of my organ was feeling immense pain.

Pain to be getting away from her.

(Awe...thanku for liking these lines & mentioning it...My very own fav in this part...😉😳)

And the way you described his worst fears:

Is he going to say that they are leaving the city or is going to ask me to leave city for Nidhi's sake...Or worse, he has fixed Nidhi's wedding and asking me to stay away from her by all means. Though were barely in contact exclude last night.

(Ashu is attached to Nidhi in a way that no one could understand...He can fight for her from the world...but not from her baba...but all in the end, he just couldn't think of staying away frm her...atleast being in same city gave him a comfort that he could sneak a peak of her...)😊

Loved chap to the extent that I'm short of words...👏👏👏

thanku so much dear for this review...glad you liked it 😃

Originally posted by: Amu_05

Loved this part so much,as khushiyaan AshNi ke darwaje pe dastak dene wali hain..! I very much liked col Varma's pov..akhir ek beti ke peeta hain wo..!
Waiting eagerly for next part...jaldi jaldi chahiye...

Originally posted by: bc123456

👏Well done my dear , you showed a father's dilemma so well ,and finally his acceptance that he was wrong, want you to continue its really lovely, 👍🏼so please give us an update quickly

Originally posted by: deepa17

Loved it Ana the self convos were beautiful. Liked the turmoil of a dad who realizes that he was wrong

Cannot wait for Ashni moments.

Originally posted by: sonyjknum

No need to be sorry,on the contrary it was necessary to tell CV.s pov,loved it and now cant wait for Ashu's reaction when CV tells him his decision,that part was so beautiful in the show