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Posted: 12 years ago




Originally posted by: nishu_shorna

just read part 3 & 4...awesome...thanks for the pm...



Thanku so much girls🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ttrocks



story dear Ana... 👏 Detailed review, would PM u later--as soon as I get time!! But wanted to tell you that am really loving this OS!! ❤️



thanku so much tapu...
am glad you liked this OS dear...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Arjuhisis

very nice ana

enjoyed reading all the 4 parts
lovely ending - they deserved such a lovely ending
thx for the pm



thanku so much priya...
I am so happy to see u here dear...
n m glad u liked this os dear...😳😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran_rati

fabulous dear

thanx for the pm



Originally posted by: Tyro

her father came to know where her happiness lie at the end...


loved it...





thanku so much sweeties...
thanku for all the support😳😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Ana,

WOW. The chapter 4 is highlight of the OS. The emotions...Nidhi's fear, surprise, love and naughty nature have come out very well.👏
Ashu's tears give all the emotions...the promise he asked Nidhi is the highlight...he does not want Nidhi to see his tears...heartstone has turned soft and his plans are interrupted by Anji.. 😳
CV could pull Nidhi without any expression change WOW...HK is called to be head from Ashu...great move...Ranga, Shyama...you have covered all...
Anji is the best...👍🏼
Wonderful OS...👏
Thank you once again for giving us this OS...am sure all of us enjoyed it...what are your plans for next OS/ FF?



thanku so much anjani for liking this chap...
and felt connected to the emotions of my characters...
I wanted to include all characters who are so deeply attached to Nidhi...and are happy in her happiness...
thanku for all the support dear...

take care😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aardhan

Beautiful conclusion Ana. 👏


You have expressed everyone's thoughts very well. It was so cute of all including Ashu to keep things hidden from Nidhi and CV pulled her leg with a serious attitude. For a second Nidhi was really scared and angry and once more clearly and loudly told her decision, but little did she know that Ashu was inside listening to this... must have felt proud of his love.

The scene inside was touching, Nidhi's disbelief and later Ashu's tears that finally his dream was coming true. Loved how he hugs her as he never wanted to let her go, and cries but does not want her to see it. Then loved the family interaction and CV explained everything and gave the entire credit to Anji. He finally accepted that Ashu was exactly the type of husband he wanted for his little girl, and his heart and mind have finally recognized and accepted what was staring at him all along.

The Nidhi-Anji friendship is always a treat. And it was no different here. Finally they got engaged and the rains, the silent witness to their love from the very first moment poured down to bless them. A joyful union or reunion indeed! 😃👏



thanku so much aardhan...
glad you analysed the chap and know that ashu was hearing all whatever she was saying out to baba...
yes, he was proud and happy of his girl who can defend him against anyone...
ashu was always a reserved man...he never loved anyone more than her beside his baba...so he was all scared to let her go...
rain has been important to them...n it was a part of there each happy moment...
am happy u liked this os...
thanku for the support...

take care😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Please will you write more often , this OS a real beauty , but now waiting for the next one😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ana... U r a brilliant writer 👏👏👏👏👏👏 AshNi stories from U are always different and so lovely!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Loved this OS!! Beautiful!! 👍🏼

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