OS: The Rain & My Man (Part 4 / Page 19) - Page 10

Great Going!

No sorry needed...repetition of the dialogues was imperative...in fact very apt for the rude awakening Col. Verma needed 👏. Anji's act was well thought out 👏.

The way he turned nostalgic...when understanding dawns on him was remarkable:

I sat down on my rocking chair where I used to sit holding a sleeping Nidhi in my arms in her childhood. I used to caress her hairs while thinking about her future. How she would get married and how perect of a husband, I would choose for her who will shower my daughter with her unlimited love and will keep her happy.

Wasn't Ashutosh that same man?

Ashutosh's dejection, his despondency was well expressed:

My hands itched to hold her fragile body in my arms, my lips were trembling from the thrusts of her tounge, my mouth still tasted of her, my legs were wobbling, my eyes filled with tears, my ears were unable to hear anything other than her moans that I even ignored Anji's calling voice and my heart, pumping my blood with a double speed. But still, each of my organ was feeling immense pain.

Pain to be getting away from her.

And the way you described his worst fears:

Is he going to say that they are leaving the city or is going to ask me to leave city for Nidhi's sake...Or worse, he has fixed Nidhi's wedding and asking me to stay away from her by all means. Though were barely in contact exclude last night.

Loved chap to the extent that I'm short of words...👏👏👏

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Excellent Ana...Anji made CV hear their conversation...nice move.