OS: The Rain & My Man (Part 4 / Page 19) - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ..oneOone..



thanku deepa...
yeah...Col. Verma thought over his decision and amend his mistake...
ashni moments are on there way😃



Yeh Jaldi Jaldi update please. Great OS
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely chapter.loved the POV of Col Verma .
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful...I wonder how were you able to write so well about Col Verma's POV...you seem to be more mature than your age...waiting for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
truly touching update Ana. CV's POV is very very well penned down...

also liked Anji's way of making CV listen in to their conversation.

loved Ashu's feelings once he walks away from Nidhi.

will be waiting for the next part. update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice one...

thnks for the PM...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Ana, Eagerly waiting to read the 4th chapter today.

When are you going to update?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Please update soon,. We need the good Ashni moments now..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very touching third part, CV's and Ashu's POV is so well written here. Their internal struggle is nicely portrayed. 👏

It was a big gamble that Anji took on her own to allow CV to see or rather hear the Ashni convo and understand their relationship and how much they love, sacrifice and value each other. It could have back-fired if CV had become more angry like how Ashu feared in the end.

But it did not... it had the desired effect and put CV in a deep soul searching state and what he found made him feel ashamed of himself. He realized that except for the age Ashu was exactly the ind of husband he would want for his daughter. A father would be lucky if he got such a guy who would treat his daughter with the utmost care like his most precious procession. And he also realized that Ashu and Nidhi could have repeated what he and Nandini had done but they choose to respect the elders and wait for their blessing even if the separation was killing them.

And Ashu's thoughts on leaving Nidhi wondering if it was their last time together and knowing this meeting and the feel of holding her close to him will remain with him as memories throughout his life.

So now hoping for a joyful reunion... and waiting for Ashu-CV convo. I know it is not what Ashu is fearing...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice OS Ana -
Waiti g for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago


thanku preeti😳

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