OS: The Rain & My Man (Part 4 / Page 19) - Page 13

Originally posted by: swati62

Lovely chapter.loved the POV of Col Verma .

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

wonderful...I wonder how were you able to write so well about Col Verma's POV...you seem to be more mature than your age...waiting for the next part

Originally posted by: Suvika.

truly touching update Ana. CV's POV is very very well penned down...

also liked Anji's way of making CV listen in to their conversation.

loved Ashu's feelings once he walks away from Nidhi.

will be waiting for the next part. update soon.

Originally posted by: manikka

nice one...

thnks for the PM...

Originally posted by: deepa17

Please update soon,. We need the good Ashni moments now..

Originally posted by: vj2102

Awesym.. awesum .. awesum

Originally posted by: aardhan

Very touching third part, CV's and Ashu's POV is so well written here. Their internal struggle is nicely portrayed. 👏 thanku so much aardhan😳

It was a big gamble that Anji took on her own to allow CV to see or rather hear the Ashni convo and understand their relationship and how much they love, sacrifice and value each other. It could have back-fired if CV had become more angry like how Ashu feared in the end. Yup, so true...It was a high risk on anji's part that she let CV listen there convo but then all well, end well😳

But it did not... it had the desired effect and put CV in a deep soul searching state and what he found made him feel ashamed of himself. He realized that except for the age Ashu was exactly the ind of husband he would want for his daughter. A father would be lucky if he got such a guy who would treat his daughter with the utmost care like his most precious procession. And he also realized that Ashu and Nidhi could have repeated what he and Nandini had done but they choose to respect the elders and wait for their blessing even if the separation was killing them... So true...Just one aspect, the age gap, was blinding CV from looking at the beautiful relationship Nidhi n Ashu have...and yes, ashu could have done the same thing as CV but his mature self has stopped him😊

And Ashu's thoughts on leaving Nidhi wondering if it was their last time together and knowing this meeting and the feel of holding her close to him will remain with him as memories throughout his life. yup...Ashu wanted to live every moment with her😳

So now hoping for a joyful reunion... and waiting for Ashu-CV convo. I know it is not what Ashu is fearing...😳

so true...ashu's fear gonna end now...CV now understood them😛

Originally posted by: Arjuhisis

Nice OS Ana -
Waiti g for the next part

Originally posted by: jayasree.rao

Ana,

Waiting for the update plea...se