Devakshi FF:The Memory of Us Epilogue Updated on Pg 70 - Page 12

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: _RS_

Oj so nice it is..

Pls cont. Soon

Thank you!!😃
Will try to update soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: SAPU

NIce!! continue soon

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: punjabi0926

Excellent writing. Loved the story!! If u have a pm list, please put me on it!!!

Thank you so much😃
Sure, will pm you when I update next😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanq sooomuch for da PM its awesome ll b eagerly waiting for da next
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: purnima17

Thanq sooomuch for da PM its awesome ll b eagerly waiting for da next


Anytime dear😃 Thank you! I'm glad you liked it😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Whoaa .. What an amazing read. Your story progression is so smooth. Loved every bit of it.
Keep writing dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Malvika07

Oh my god this is THE best compliment ever for me! You chose to read my story over watching the episode. You don't know how much this means to me dear. I can't thank you enough😃
My stupid cell doesn't let me post the hug emojj in IF so typing it out. *BIG HUGGG*

Awww... Thank you for writing such stuffs yaar... Jo track abhi chal raha hai depressing one u bring some freshness yaar... Keep writing n if possible pm the next part... Already waiting.. n yes... 🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Erian

Whoaa .. What an amazing read. Your story progression is so smooth. Loved every bit of it.

Keep writing dear.

Thank you so much dear 😃 glad to know you're liking it!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: dhk26

Awww... Thank you for writing such stuffs yaar... Jo track abhi chal raha hai depressing one u bring some freshness yaar... Keep writing n if possible pm the next part... Already waiting.. n yes... 🤗🤗🤗

That's so sweet of you! Your constant support inspires me to write more😃😃
Thank you!! *Hugs*
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Posted: 8 years ago
All 4 parts in one go. 😃

Yes, amnesia is one of the most cliched tracks one could take up. But sometimes it is needed. Whatever has happened in that one year, if Dev wants a fresh start, fresh memories... this is the only way. I agree and trust you on this one. 👍🏼

I won't try to predict what is going to happen. I don't want to. I am just going to sit back and enjoy the read. As for your last question at the end of chapter 4... I don't think it's the incident Dev is trying to make her forget. That won't come so soon after her arrival is what I feel.

I liked how you clubbed the show story... took parts of it, changed it to fit into your story and made a new, fresh one. With a three year leap, no less. I am sure you had the outline of the whole fic mapped out in your head before you started out chapter 2 or 3. Maybe not scene by scene but the rough sketch. The way you dealt with his actions / reactions post her injury... excellent!! Nothing OTT. Lovely work, that one!! 👏 👏

Thoroughly enjoyed reading it my lady!! Bring on the next part. Earlier the better. 😉

One request. Post an index of chapters in the first page or list the page number of the next chapter at the end of the previous chapter. Easier for the reader.

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