Devakshi FF:The Memory of Us Epilogue Updated on Pg 70

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Curlyhairdiary

@Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 8 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: Suvika.
All 4 parts in one go. 😃

Yes, amnesia is one of the most cliched tracks one could take up. But sometimes it is needed. Whatever has happened in that one year, if Dev wants a fresh start, fresh memories... this is the only way. I agree and trust you on this one. 👍🏼

I won't try to predict what is going to happen. I don't want to. I am just going to sit back and enjoy the read. As for your last question at the end of chapter 4... I don't think it's the incident Dev is trying to make her forget. That won't come so soon after her arrival is what I feel.

I liked how you clubbed the show story... took parts of it, changed it to fit into your story and made a new, fresh one. With a three year leap, no less. I am sure you had the outline of the whole fic mapped out in your head before you started out chapter 2 or 3. Maybe not scene by scene but the rough sketch. The way you dealt with his actions / reactions post her injury... excellent!! Nothing OTT. Lovely work, that one!! 👏 👏

Thoroughly enjoyed reading it my lady!! Bring on the next part. Earlier the better. 😉

One request. Post an index of chapters in the first page or list the page number of the next chapter at the end of the previous chapter. Easier for the reader.

Oh my! You read it already?! Thank u soo much dearie for the kind words. They mean a lot.

You're right. I actually had the main idea i.e the incident, in my head before I started writing this one. After mulling it over, I came to the conclusion that amnesia was the only way I could show that as well as some new things. Like I said while introducing the story, I have a few sub plots.. I figured I would tailor it based on the reader's likes/dislikes.

Dev and Sonakshi are two of my favorite characters ever. I have a soft spot for their love story in my heart, so I keep thinking of new scenarios to potray their relationship without deviating too much from the show😊

I was actually going to update the index right now, but you already read all the parts before I could do it😆 ill do it before uploading the next chapter :)

Thank you once again for taking the time out to read and share your views, I truly appreciate it 😃

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Suvika.

@Suvika.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#122

No thanks required. Entirely my pleasure!! 🤗

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Curlyhairdiary

@Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 8 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: Suvika.
No thanks required. Entirely my pleasure!! 🤗

😃🤗

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saumiee

@saumiee

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Posted: 8 years ago

#124

Yet another amazing update, Malvika🤗

I am always looking out to read more from you. . I don't know how I missed this update. .🤔😆

So intriguing and heart warming this was❤️ I loved the way you wrote how Sonakshi was feeling. . Right from entering the house to opening the shoe box. It is easy to visualise everything with the way you put down the words😳

You know, Amnesia has already been explored to death in tv soaps, but this is such a fresh perspective that it can actually be a way to recreate/relive all those beautiful memories.

I can't wait to read what Sonakshi remembered from the foil. . 😊

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Curlyhairdiary

@Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 8 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: saumiee
Yet another amazing update, Malvika🤗
I am always looking out to read more from you. . I don't know how I missed this update. .🤔😆
So intriguing and heart warming this was❤️ I loved the way you wrote how Sonakshi was feeling. . Right from entering the house to opening the shoe box. It is easy to visualise everything with the way you put down the words😳
You know, Amnesia has already been explored to death in tv soaps, but this is such a fresh perspective that it can actually be a way to recreate/relive all those beautiful memories.
I can't wait to read what Sonakshi remembered from the foil. . 😊

I was wondering where you were!😆 *HUGS*

I'm happy to know you liked this chapter😃

I was initially very hesitant to take up amnesia as it's an overused topic, but the kind of sub plots I wanted to explore were only possible with this kind of a scenario. Thank u so much for trusting me on this and giving your undying support, it means a lot😳

The next update is the flashback😉

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ssimmy

@ssimmy

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#126

Please PM me when you update 😊

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Curlyhairdiary

@Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 8 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: ssimmy
Please PM me when you update 😊

Sure, dear😊

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

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Posted: 8 years ago

#128

You are a storyteller...loved the way photography session...The mind is really our saviour and our enemy...If you remember, then, everything matters. If forgotten nothing matter...You brought this out beautifully. Loved it.

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Curlyhairdiary

@Curlyhairdiary

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: JazzyM
You are a storyteller...loved the way photography session...The mind is really our saviour and our enemy...If you remember, then, everything matters. If forgotten nothing matter...You brought this out beautifully. Loved it.

Thank you so much😃😃 I'm glad you like my style of writing :)