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Fatima

@KaranKundra4Eva

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

i like this so far but im wondering how ur gonna make the story go forward...and make arjuhi one!! :D

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varshini karthik

@.vrshn.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

wow! his diary is with her! hope she reads it soon!

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Pratibha Sharma

@justprati

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

d lines in d diary r jst so beautiful
very sad update bt still so beautiful n heart touching...
wow aru is gonna read his diary now
continue soon

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

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hey ruky thanks yaar😃

i wish aru reads the diary before she leaves

but i know that it is not going to happen

luved the story line

pity arjun

pls continue

Edited by Arjuhisis - 14 years ago

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kritz4ever

@kritz4ever

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#45

I hope arohi reads dairy asap

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Sheher

@...Sheher...

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: MsSweetheart96
Oh god!! Another update of torture..

hehe agree !!!:P just joking ... loved the update but it was so short :(

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Sanjeeda

@MsSweetheart96

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

I hate to admit it but I loved this update very much..

I love the way you portrayed Arjun's feelings nd views..

It was so beautiful.. only if it wasn't so short..

Sorry that i was late to comment.. was busy..

Cant wait 4 the nxt update Psycho...

Update soon nd thnks 4 the pm :)

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varshini karthik

@.vrshn.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

just cannot wait for the next part to know about diary!update soon ruky :D

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Archana

@mysticlover

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#49

he forgot his diary in her room nd now it's in her suitcase!
i guess she will only read it wen she leaves the country but still she would know the truth!
waiting for the moment wen she will know how much he loves her!
i love the way you write and the way you use words! keep it up!
update soon!
tnx 4 the pm...

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love.1

@love.1

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#50

Errr 😡 😭 Why did he do that???? God 🥺 I know they both are in such difficult positions but WHY???!!!! LOL

OMG Arohi was so brave in order to tell him how she feels about, but she was left heart broken 😭.

"She needed a friend, she needed her sister she felt helpless" > I just want to hug her 🤗

I dont blame him for breaking her heart 💔because if he did tell her he loves her, later on there will be difficulties and he doesnt want her to both go through that pain 😒!

"I tried to paint you a picture but the colours where all wrong, you were shaded by patience. She told me she loves me, but I went and came back empty handed. I stood there seeping into your eyes without falling to my feet, Cause I've never been the kind to ever let my feelings show. How could I say yes when I know mine and your family is never going to accept our bond. I would never put you into a position where you have to choose between me and your family." > 😭 reading the whole of this paragraph and his feelings in his diary I wanted to hug him! 🤗

What he wrote in his diary was amazing... really really loved how you described his feelings; Amazing! 👏

I feel for both of them... its so hard and painful for both 👎🏼 ; Shes had her heart broken and him having to reject the love he has always wanted to see.

I want to hug 🤗 the two of them and say its going to be OK. 👍🏼

Boy am I glad he left is diary in her room; but I hope she reads that before she goes back to UK seeing as someone put the diary in a luggage! 😡 LOL!

Dont like seeing the two hurt; 😭

Please update soon

Thanks

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