FF:Pavements-NOTE page 28 - Page 4

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Oh god!! Another update of torture..

wow loved the update. but arjun shud give into his feelings. wow cant wait for arohi to read the diary. loll update soon😊

"I tried to paint you a picture but the colours where all wrong, you were shaded by patience."
I'd give up forever to touch you because I know that you sense me somehow."
i loved these two lines brillant
very emotional update felt sorry for both of them.so sad how arohi broke, they way you described it was good.
HIS DIARY !!!!!!... is the only hope, plz plz update soon. i hope she finds it and read what he has wrote. shes going tomarrow, hope she stays and does not leave.
i loved the update.superbly written full of emotion.he needs to tell her...please we dont want them to be seperated.
BUT SHORT ! make the next update long a request.😊
take care

why so short updte??????? wnt sum long one!!!

btw luvd d updte...(bechara arjun) hope aru ll read d diary vry soon or i cn say in ur nxt updtte 😊

Originally posted by: MsSweetheart96

Oh god!! Another update of torture..

😆 dont start fight

hmm... had a feeling hes stopping himself coz of the religious barrier... but i hope he realises that love knows no religion 😆 what will arohi do after she reads the diary??? i hope she does that before they part... update please and longer this time😊

Originally posted by: ..areeba..

😆 dont start fight

IT was short update and awesome.. i hope arohi read the dairy.. im sure ur ff will be gud as Ishq hai tumse film... it sort of same story

Originally posted by: MsSweetheart96

She said my updates caused her pain...

Dats y she didnt wnt me to update...

uhhh you 2 always fighting 🤔 ...

anyway coming to the story it's intresting ...
so she have his diary with her, but i guess she is not going to find it soon, it's so??
i can't understand the parent's they are best friends, and the children grow together almost same house then when it come to be married they don't want ,,,, this is non sense , they know who they are how they are and still the fact of religion change things , to define a person you have to see the way he is , who he live life( and living near and being friend they know perfectly ) and not to see what religion he/she have. it seems that they prefer a stranger but having the same religion that a person they know way to well. (this is a sensitive topic it always have ben)... anyway lets see how this story is going forward ...for now i'm feeling sad for arjuhi it's not right ...