FF:Pavements-NOTE page 28 - Page 6

Originally posted by: ..areeba..

"I tried to paint you a picture but the colours where all wrong, you were shaded by patience."
I'd give up forever to touch you because I know that you sense me somehow."
i loved these two lines brillant
very emotional update felt sorry for both of them.so sad how arohi broke, they way you described it was good.
HIS DIARY !!!!!!... is the only hope, plz plz update soon. i hope she finds it and read what he has wrote. shes going tomarrow, hope she stays and does not leave.
i loved the update.superbly written full of emotion.he needs to tell her...please we dont want them to be seperated.
BUT SHORT ! make the next update long a request.😊
take care

Originally posted by: justprati

d lines in d diary r jst so beautiful
very sad update bt still so beautiful n heart touching...
wow aru is gonna read his diary now
continue soon

Originally posted by: love.1

Errr 😡 😭 Why did he do that???? God 🥺 I know they both are in such difficult positions but WHY???!!!! LOL

OMG Arohi was so brave in order to tell him how she feels about, but she was left heart broken 😭.

"She needed a friend, she needed her sister she felt helpless" > I just want to hug her 🤗

I dont blame him for breaking her heart 💔because if he did tell her he loves her, later on there will be difficulties and he doesnt want her to both go through that pain 😒!

"I tried to paint you a picture but the colours where all wrong, you were shaded by patience. She told me she loves me, but I went and came back empty handed. I stood there seeping into your eyes without falling to my feet, Cause I've never been the kind to ever let my feelings show. How could I say yes when I know mine and your family is never going to accept our bond. I would never put you into a position where you have to choose between me and your family." > 😭 reading the whole of this paragraph and his feelings in his diary I wanted to hug him! 🤗

What he wrote in his diary was amazing... really really loved how you described his feelings; Amazing! 👏

I feel for both of them... its so hard and painful for both 👎🏼 ; Shes had her heart broken and him having to reject the love he has always wanted to see.

I want to hug 🤗 the two of them and say its going to be OK. 👍🏼

Boy am I glad he left is diary in her room; but I hope she reads that before she goes back to UK seeing as someone put the diary in a luggage! 😡 LOL!

Dont like seeing the two hurt; 😭

Please update soon

Thanks

Originally posted by: MsSweetheart96

I hate to admit it but I loved this update very much..

I love the way you portrayed Arjun's feelings nd views..

It was so beautiful.. only if it wasn't so short..

Sorry that i was late to comment.. was busy..

Cant wait 4 the nxt update Psycho...

Update soon nd thnks 4 the pm :)

Originally posted by: Ruky07

yesh, she admitted it 😉
psycho am completly normal individual, rugrat 😛
okay complain, i'll try making the next one longer 😃
no problemo
falling asleep reading the comment 🥱

Originally posted by: Ruky07

thanks areeba for the comment
glad you liked the writing and the update, really appereciate it:D
yeah hopefull she will read it but the circumstances will be different
okay ill try not to seperate them, yes i'll try updating soon and this time it will be longer, your request granted
cheerio 😃

Originally posted by: Ruky07

wow, thanks naz. oh ur not stopping 😆
they just are, its good to be in a difficult positions, awww i know i'll making my readers sad sorry making her heart broken 😛
gosh! u do want to hug everyone 😆 contol ur emotions naz
thanks for liking the paragraph, really apperciate it
agen hug, no its not going to be okay, i'm making evil plan 🤢 haaa
yesh the dairy...ermm when is going to read it...dunno :P
okay sorry but they ganna get hurt more 😉 *EVIL*
YES,i'll try updating soon
cheerio 😊

Originally posted by: love.1

Oh you meany... You and your evil mind! Tut tut tut pyar ke dushman LOL
Hahaha... Keep at it with your evil mind! But if your evil mind hurts them to much I will be after that evil mind of yours hahahaha! BE WARNED muhahahahahhaha
I can't control my emotions... Feel for them so much, what can I do! I want to hug them pleassseee lol!
I know your evil mind is going to either she will find it in UK or someone else will find it and hide it LOL but whatever your evil mind does, no matter how many games it plays with them they will find one another and stand together against your evil mind hehehhehe! LOL
:D hehehhehhehe 😆

Originally posted by: -vrshn-

dont repeat 'evil mind' over n over ruky! you sound like mojo-jojo of PPG! rofl!