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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
umm fresh start nice!

oh arohi confessed but arjun...

he is saying this becoz of religious differences! wen will our society cum out of this?

hoping for more nd yeah i want to be in ur pm list!

tnx 4 the pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
good start
arjun only likes her - maybe he knows the religion will come inbetween them
he was crazy about her since the begining

add me to your pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
Nice start and also it interesting... update next part... why did Arjun say freinds.. doesnt he not love her...
I like other ff too 'Buffalo girl' 🤣
Neway do contiune...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
nice start
continue soon and pm me too
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
A very nice interesting start to this ff...Why did Arjun not declare his love to Arohi...Why did he just say he likes her as a friend...
Please update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i liked the earlier concept too... but this also is very interesting!!! why did arjun do that????? poor arohi... pls update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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still cant believe he said he only likes her as a friend while she loves him
wonder what will happen as she is leaving the next day
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
nice start ruky
what's wrong with arjun - why does he say that he likes her as a friend even though he lover her a lot
pls continue ruky
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Posted: 14 years ago
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good concept...

bt wen arohi proposd arjun why he turnd down????? he also love her more dn a frnd dn why he said dat????
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 2


No matter how good a friend someone is, they're going to hurt you every once in a while. Those words that came out of his lips were enough for her, she did not ask for an explanation nor a reason. She simmered down the set of stone stairs making a stop near the Conner of the wall. She buried herself into the rigid space that surrounded her frail body as her heart begins to tear. She tried to reach out for the "light" with all she could. It was subtle like illusionary glass and secretive as the fading winds yet spewed out the depths of her true emotions. Her face illustrated distress and as she closed her eyes, drops slowly slipped down her face trailing down her cheeks. She poured the salt of her essence and as it poured from her eyes a strong wave of pain blew her, working its way up from her stomach spreading its way to the ends of her fingertips and down her feeble knees, as her heart veiled it's self into to disjointed rubble. Arohi crouched down; she felt a sensensation of coldness as she leaned her forehead on the bare wall feeling neglected. The broken down locks where a warning.

"Arohi, Arohi." Simran called from the end of the room. She blocked the light as wiped her tears from her face, quickly fixating her smile pretending to be fine. "Yes simran." Arohi got up from the comer into the open space. "Where have you been, come on its Sara vidaii." There wasn't lone dry eye in the room. Arohi was the final one to say goodbye. She hugged her sister tightly as she tried to hold back the tears but she could not, the tears fell freely as she held her. "Am going to miss you a lot, I love you." She spurted from her mouth. She needed a friend, she needed her sister she felt helpless, the sort of pain that goes mercifully beyond our powers of feeling. Arohi pulled away from Sara, "take care of everyone and yourself. Love you." Sara sobbed as she waved goodbye to anyone making her way into the car.

(Arjun's dairy)

I tried to paint you a picture but the colours where all wrong, you were shaded by patience. She told me she loves me, but I went and came back empty handed. I stood there seeping into your eyes without falling to my feet, Cause I've never been the kind to ever let my feelings show. How could I say yes when I know mine and your family is never going to accept our bond. I would never put you into a position where you have to choose between me and your family. Our destinies are going away from each other, seasons came, and seasons went, that even after decades my feelings won't fade. Whenever you wished, you merged me within yourself like a scent engulfing the breeze. I've inhaled you. With what ever you have to done I've been looted completely. This is soft warm addiction and it keeps on rising, I'm coloured. You fastened you're thoughts and your works of art; I guess they still hanging on the walls of my heart. I'd give up forever to touch you because I know that you sense me somehow.

I wish I could tell you all this in my loudest tone, but am afraid. I'm afraid. I'll try being your guardian when you struggle, I'll help you hold a steady hand. Am sitting here perfectly still, taking turns trying to seize this world like I always have. Did I ever know how bitter or sweet this was going to be? I helpless look for you. I'm sorry that I've failed time and again...

"Arjun! Arjun." Arohi's mother called as she lifted her arms signalling him to come over. Arjun shut his cavernous black dairy; he clinched it firmly as he got up and made his way over to Arohi's mother. Arjun followed her from behind as she made her way into Arohi's room. "Could you take that suitcase down?" Arohi's mother pointed to a black suitcase. Arjun placed his dairy beside other books on Arohi's bed which was covered with cream sheets. He brought suitcase down and handed it over to Arohi. For a long moment they stared at each other as Arohi's bewildered eyes rummage around his handsome face. She cleared her thoughts and smiled vibrantly attempting to hide the ephemeral emotions as she took the suitcase from his hands. Arjun broke the subtle silence which simmered, "do you need any help?" he asked with an unfilled lifeless look. "No, I'm fine, I'm just finishing up." She said in a flat tone as her soul coiled up in anguish. "Okay, but if anything comes up do give me a shout." He said as he walked towards the door. Arohi nodded as she looked into his hazel eyes which she couldn't read. Arjun left her room, shutting the door behind him but forgetting to take his diary.

"Arohi! What shall do with these books on your bed?" simran asked."Ermm... just put them in the small suitcase." She replied as she came out of the bathroom in her PJs. Simran picked up the books and tucked them inside the suitcase along with her other belongings. As soon as her packing was done she sat up on the big bed, tying her black hair together into bun, thinking about the illusion she created in her head about her and Arjun. Glancing at the broken clock for comfort, she drowned into her duvet drenching her overly weary body and mind into a compressed object. She shut her eyes as her mind wept for the entire night, chewing her illusion decoding the half forgotten memories.


suggestions and Criticism welcome, hope you can help me improve
thanks for reading 😊

Edited by Ruky07 - 14 years ago

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